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Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's over! I applaud your writing from beginning to end, and if it means anything to you, I bought the Love Hina DVD box set because of this story. I really enjoyed this and my time spent here was well worth it. Good luck in future writings, whatever they may be.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fanfics I have ever read. I found a few (very few) spelling errors but overall your story is one of the best I have encountered.
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Title: another good tie-up
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go on another good thread tie-up. nice to see nyamo again. also nice to see two of the idiots in a shrink's office, that's a real hoot. keep up the great work. chris
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 10, 2009 23:39 EST
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Go Keitaro...now Amalla is with him awesome!! You are wrapping things up nicely!! As always I am definately looking forward to more!!
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Title: how do you keep things straight
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW! oh well. more great tie-ups before the big night. can't wait to read when keitaro and koalla finally get it on. this story is also a lot of fun also. thanx, as always- chris
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 07, 2009 19:46 EST
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wait a minute, the only thing that bugs me in this is the lack of Nyamo. how will she fit into this harem.
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Title: CH 64
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 07, 2009 01:33 EST
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Hmmm... Methinks that you and your muse are feeling well and truly inspired this past month. Answers to old mysteries are being revealed thick and fast, although there are still a couple of big ones to go, i.e.; The Urashima side of the curse, what Hiatani/Shirai/Kentaro/Shinobu's teacher are up to, the MolMol wedding itself. As well as this new wrinkle about the concubines. But, we will see. -- And it was nice to see Kitsune getting some action again. Finally. The poor dear has been rather ignored lately. (After all, she's only had him twice now. The rest of them are all almost into double digits, aside from Kaolla. And you can bet that she'll catch up real quick!) -- Damn fine work as always. Eagerly awaiting more! T
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 21:08 EST
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Ah the joys of frequent updates. The past few updates have been nice and things moved quickly, almost quicker that I thought they would. Nice interactions at the Ayoma household and this seems to be a step to unifying the families to some degree. Nice job on the miscreants. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 05, 2009 15:30 EST
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let's not forget nyamo
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Title: CH 59-63
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 05, 2009 08:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My-my-my, you are feeling inspired lately! Several chapters in such a short space of time. Then again, it is an exciting run of events over at the Shinmei-Ryu ancesteral grounds. Tsuruko and Motoko finally begin cleaning house to bring the family into the modern age. -- Shinobu's friend finding herself in a similar situation to the Hinata Honies, though just barely. (M/F twins, eh. Tasty!) -- And yet another modification to the wedding of Kaolla Su. (I'm honestly waiting for Tamma-chan and Shippu to be proposed to next!) -- As ever, a fantastic read. Keenly awaiting more. T
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 02, 2009 20:23 EST
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Awesome I love the frequent updates now... and so far everything is coming together nicely. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice tie-ups and buttkickings. i think motoko got the respect back from her family and keitaro, though trying to protect his concubine, still doesn't realize how powerful the aoyoma women really are. but, i think it was good though, because it gave motoko the chance to shine and show her true power. now, the trash is gone. why are you so good? i'm jealous of your style, but i love it also.
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Title: MOAR!!!!!
Reviewed By: White Knight Leo On: January 31, 2009 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the scenes with the Aoyama clan. I like the mix of formality and ..... reality, i suppose i'd call it. PLEASE MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MUST BE PERMITTED MORE PLZZZZ!!! Your writing style is excellent, and i really enjoy what you have done with the story.
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Title: you are too good
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with the previous reviewer, you are too good at this and this story is addicting. too bad you didn't write the original story, with apologies to ken. i await the next segment on pins and needles. yours truly, chris
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 23:33 EST
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Sometimes words can fail me, and this appears to be one such rare occasion. This is absolute torture waiting for chapters to come out. You are most assuredly on a roll. Some things are coming out into the open and other things are being dealt with in a formidable manner. Keep this up. You are most assuredly teasing those of us who have been reading. This is a good one and I can't wait to see where it ends up next.
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