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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 13:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Precautionary?" wondered Haruka, her mind re-visiting an issue she had been thinking about from time to time ever since she had chosen to accept her desires. Me thinks you are foreshadowing something here. Hmmm. ;) This deal with Haruka has got me on the edge of my seat. I wonder if what I think you're hinting at happens, how long Haruka can keep it under wraps. However particularly every girl has something happening in her own world that has my curiousity piqued. Not very easy to do, juggling so many different sub-plots and I hope you're not going to end this abruptly since you need at least another 20 chapters when Kei returns to resolve everything. At least to do the subplots justice. Also, I give you alot of credit for taking the concept of Love Hina and turning it on its head. Very compelling how you portrayed the ancient conflict between the families and give some more weight to Konaka's actions (before she was just intrusive, now she's dangerous). That really built some suspense into the story and characters from an otherwise rather mundane atmosphere of the original work. So many props for an excellent story thus far and I hope to see much more from you in the future.
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Title: 19
Reviewed By: tEZZA1502 On: March 03, 2008 06:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Once again, you have delivered some excelent chapters for our reading pleasure. Is there such a thing as porn WITH plot? If so, this fic is firmly in that catagory. (Somewhere near the top, too!) Poor Seta. I get the feeling that he suspects Haruka has let him go permanently. Although not for who. Maybe he'll find out the next time he visits Sarah. Motoko sitting in on Naru's therapy session. THAT'LL be interesting! As will her reaction to finding out Tsuruko knows about her extra-curricular activities, i.e.: her writing. Shinobu's stalker/teacher seems to be being set up to do something desperate in the future. How bad will it be, I wonder? FINALLY!! The wandering Urashima's make it back to Japan. How will the various brides-to-be react to a more confident Keitaro? How will HE react to all of the girls jockeying for 'visiting rights' to his bed? And how will everyone handle Haruka's vow of greater protection for Keitaro? Can't wait to find out!! Bring it on!!!! T
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Title: What can i say
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: March 02, 2008 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, a quick update and so many chapters. i really am looking forward to what happens when keitaro eventually returns, though it seems he will forever be sidetracked on his "short" journey home.
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Title: Yowza!
Reviewed By: Scico-Jin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo dude this a great story this right up there with 'Weapon of Mass Destruction' and Hawker_748's works. Yes it is that good. I am also familiar with your works over in the Eva section. I have read them all, except one 'Incubus Succubus'. I am NOT a fan of Asuka doing anything sexual with anybody, but Shinji. Yes I admit it I'm Shinji/Asuka Fanboy. Well not entirely I just can't stand Asuka getting porked by someone that is not our favorite wimpy hero(receives glares from Tenchi Masaki and Keitaro Urashima!) In fact I wish more fics had Shinji/Girl/Girl for the pairing. Hell, Shinji/Harem should be more prominent. Of course that is just my opinion. On a side note after 'The Legacy' is complete. Could you like maybe, do a morning after chapter for 'The Mixer Party'? I apologize if I'm coming off as little too pushy on that request. It's such a good fic and the ending leaves the reader with the feeling of wanting more. Also the aftermath would be quite entertaining. 'Assistance' would also be a good one to add a second chapter to. That one also kinda leaves ya hanging. But that could just be your style for oneshots. Woops! it seems this review has gotten away from me. Any way please consider my requests, for all the readers that LOVE your works. This has been a message from the Nutcase, Scico-Jin.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: February 21, 2008 02:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. so many great chapters in one update. you are truly amazing. those were a series of great chapters. though it is sad that nyamo is being left behind. and it seems like granny hina will be taking care of business. though the appearance of kentaro bodes unwell for naru right?
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! 4 chapters so quick,its floored me! Hope we DO eventually get to Haru & Kei's return to the Inn. BTW great handling of the obsessed teacher and also of how the students and faculty are seeing him for who he really is! dennisud
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 19:06 EST
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Another good set of chapters. Your really went all out with making Shinobu's teacher seem like the stalker type. Add a attempted murder charge with that and he won't be staying for long. Unless he actually killed that person. And with how Keitaro is developing along with the girl's, its easy to see that he will probably end up with nearly all of them that he can. Including Kanako and possibly Haruka or Nyamo.
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: February 08, 2008 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent writing so far, the depth of your story is incredible. Keitaro and Haruka had alot of nice scenes, hopefully Haruka and Nyamo won't be the only ones to get some.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellete' once again you have made a vast leap in originality. I was also wondering if i could borrow your Idea on Huruka being a cousin rather than aunt if not I will go with my own ideas and just be kinky as all hell.
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Title: 11
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 06, 2008 07:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Been reading this since the start, so I thought it was about time I dropped you a line & told you how much I am enjoying your little fic. The premise (i.e.: harem-fics) is as old as Love Hina itself, but that in NO way detracts from just how good this is. I am enjoying how you are tieing all the girls together for Keitaro. Man, is HE in for a surprise when he gets back. Then again, so are the girls. 'Cousin' Haruka has been well and truely breaking him in for the others, hasn't she! There will be some raised eyebrows when say, Kitsune goes to flirt with him like she usually does when he returns. No nosebleeds this time! And Naru's in threrapy, while Kitsune tries to scheme herself in on it all. Plus, on the horizon we have a possible showdown with Shinobu's teacher. All in all, a damn fine read. Can't wait to see where you take us. T
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Title: GO SHINOBU
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: February 05, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and thanks again for the quick and long updates. GO shinobu. its great that shinobu is finally getting a say in things. i hope that kanako is going on a seek and destroy mission against that idiotic teacher.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems Keitaro will need 64,000 V-8's! ;-) Still I think the dynamic can work and I can't wait to see what happens to that Doornob of a Homeroom teacher. BTW who' get preggers first?!?!? Nyamo? ;-)
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the whole Molmol marriage law allowing multiple spouses has been done before. But still it is interesting since they all are agreeing on it. But Naru will still be a problem since she still hasn't made up her own mind. But we'll just have to see what this will lead to.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deepmisc On: February 01, 2008 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best written and most interesting fics that I have ever read.While I initially thought the content would be pretty predictable, the introduction of a few new characters such as the teacher serve to keep things interesting. Not that the original plot wasn't interesting enough.. Keep it going!You obviously have a talent for writing..
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: January 28, 2008 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minor spelling errors but nothing glaring. It's got great writing and a great plot. Hopefully you'll get some more titbanging and some footjobs in there. ;D
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