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Reviewed By: alaska On: December 14, 2007 07:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story so far. i do like the tension between all the girls so far. i also hope haruka and kanako become seriously involved in the choices as well. hopefully you will elaborate on the past relationship between keitaro, haruka, and kanako and how it will affect what direction you story will head in. looking forward to the following chapter.
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Reviewed By: Spartan429 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 20:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you have to update soon, otherwise I might go crazy waiting! This story has it all!
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Title: Enjoyed
Reviewed By: Catarate On: December 13, 2007 19:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this. It has the quality of some older fanfics with the right amount of hentai for it to still be tasteful. I greatly anticipate the rest of the story!
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Reviewed By: KC6 On: December 13, 2007 17:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Finally a love hina fanfic wited by A-Z Mark II! I have been waiting for this moment for so long... But if possible could you put more hentai? I feel that it was missing here. And if possible featuring Naru would be great.
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