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Title: MOAR!!!!!
Reviewed By: White Knight Leo On: January 31, 2009 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the scenes with the Aoyama clan. I like the mix of formality and ..... reality, i suppose i'd call it. PLEASE MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MUST BE PERMITTED MORE PLZZZZ!!! Your writing style is excellent, and i really enjoy what you have done with the story.
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Title: you are too good
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with the previous reviewer, you are too good at this and this story is addicting. too bad you didn't write the original story, with apologies to ken. i await the next segment on pins and needles. yours truly, chris
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 23:33 EST
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Sometimes words can fail me, and this appears to be one such rare occasion. This is absolute torture waiting for chapters to come out. You are most assuredly on a roll. Some things are coming out into the open and other things are being dealt with in a formidable manner. Keep this up. You are most assuredly teasing those of us who have been reading. This is a good one and I can't wait to see where it ends up next.
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Title: CH59
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: January 28, 2009 02:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...not sure what value could come from letting someone watch Motoko ravage Keitaro like that. But hey, it's your fic. And I'm sure it'll be good for provoking a reaction from some of the more hidebound of the Aoyama's. -- Something that's been bugging me; how is Keitaro going to support his wives? At last count, I think five of the girls have buns in the oven. And I know that between the MolMol royal treasury and the Urashina holdings that they will most likely be comfortable. But our man Keitaro doesn't seem to have given it any thought whatsoever. (If you've already covered this further back in the earlier chapters, feel free to ignore me completely.) -- Hmm...what's Kanako got planned with Kitsune, I wonder. Both with her articles and her future marital status. And there's still the question of what Kitsune wanted to tell the others ,i.e.; her theory about the Urashima curse. -- All in all, just another excellent chapter of a great fic. Keep it up. Later! T
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Title: you are too good at this
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where to begin. hmmm.... i see how loyal both sisters are to keitaro, which seems almost absolute. the revelation of tsuruko's is a good revelation to start the rebuilding of the aoyoma family. when it comes to protecting the family, kanako is like a pitbull. once she sinks her teeth into something she does not let go. i know of her absolute loyalty and love of her 'onii-chan'. it is scary at how she made the shrink cough naru's file and notes. again, she'd do anything for keitaro and protect the family that he loves. and, if granny and haruka are headed for kyoto i feel sorry for tsuruko's opponents at the dojo. plus, i wonder if amalla is pregnant??? be funny if she was. or, how about natsumi??? keep up the great writing, i'm hooked and addicted. (just like your 'ai yori aoshi' stories) 'til next time, chris
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Reviewed By: I Come Anon(ymously) On: January 18, 2009 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since first discovering this story and reading through it, I've found myself checking back for updates every few days--and this has been going on for the last twenty-or-so chapters. It's a shame this story doesn't have many reviews, though I suppose your others don't have many either, despite you easily being one of the best authors on this site--at least the best that I have come across to date, that is. Normally, I only review to let an author know I'm displeased with something (usually mis-classifying a story, spelling/grammar errors, or absolute lack of plot) but I decided to make an exception to that rule. I would like you to know that we, your readers, appreciate the effort, attention to detail, and obvious love you've put into making this story--and the majority of your others--what it is/what they are. Thank you for taking the time to put out something so enjoyable.
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Title: 57-58
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: January 18, 2009 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Careful, you're going to spoil us fans if you keep updating this quickly. The Aoyama's seem to be on the edge of shattering completely. I wonder what Tsuruko has up her sleeve? And I wonder whether the good doctor will have the sense to stay out of Urashima business? Once more you have delivered a thoroughly riveting chapter. Keenly awaiting more! T
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 00:17 EST
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Another welcome update. These 2 chapters seem to be picking up the pace of things for the newly developing family. It appears as a family they are settling in nice and they all realize how important they are to each other. It also seems that the Ayoma clan still has some members that need to grow up for a change. I'm looking forward to what will transpire. I think I see some hints, however I'm not going to speculate any. With my luck I'd guess wrong. Keep it up! This is a very good story and I'm always ready for more.
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Title: CH 56
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: January 16, 2009 08:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Woah Momma!! Me Likey! It seems that the next couple of chapters may be more action-based. Excellent! (Rubs hands together with glee.) -- You have sprouted some very interesting branches here with this chapter. I mean, the signs were there that the rest of the Aoyama's might have more than a slight issue with whats happening in your fic. But open battle with drawn swords? Yoiks! -- Plus possible trouble from the Urashima clan too? -- And it will be interesting to see whether Naru goes along with her therapist's idea. -- All this, and we still have another wedding to come yet. Woo-Hoo!! -- As always, awesome stuff. Can't wait for more! T
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Title: another good way to tie up loose ends
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter to let us readers and fans know about some more loose ends to be taken care of. thanks. i'm still hoping to see keitaro get into kitsune and haruka's pants again before too long. just a little wish of mine(similar to my own FF i'm writing where here gets plenty of both of them) i'll being hanging on until the next chapter. Chris
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: January 07, 2009 22:33 EST
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Talk about a hum drum wedding, that and Shinobu and Nyamo getting it on with Kei the day after. Pretty cool stuff. Like your other stories I love your writing style keep it up!!
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Title: now that's what i like
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's nice to see shinobu and nyamo have their way with keitaro, now how about kitsune and haruka( before she gets too big). it's nice to see that koalla is back up to her old self, though now as an adult, can't wait to see her and keitaro go at it. also, i may not be a huge naru fan, but i like how she has calmed down. i also like how submissive motoko is to her new husband, and protective too. please don't end this story before some of the kids are born, it would be interesting to see what they turn out like. as i said, kitsune needs some more of keitaro and if you write a tryst with them, make it steamy and very romantic. a whole night of those two going at it like a couple of rabbits would be satisfying. sorry, just that i like that pairing the best. great chapter and i am anticipating your next chapter(s). thanks, chris
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Reviewed By: BlackWolfHowls On: January 04, 2009 04:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again you exceed expectations on the continuation of this wonderful story. I love how everyone is coming together to make the reality of their plan come to fruition. I'm wondering what conflicts you have planned(if any) in the future for the newly formed family. Looking forward to all future updates.
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Title: Whoa, this is different
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 19:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a different way to do things at a wedding, one whale of a wing-ding orgy. but, we still have to have a bit more hetero to sate some of the women here. call this chapter done and put away wet. until next time, chris
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 12:11 EST
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Oh yeah, this one was worth the wait. Another well written chapter and it worked REALLY well. Things seem to be progressing at a nice clip so I guess the next stop will be Mol-Mol. If there are other "Weddings" on the horizion I don't know how you are going to flesh them out but Kitsune, Kanako, and Haruka haven't had some type of ceremony yet. Of course they may be falling under the title of concubine. Keep this up. This is a good one and I think it is your longest story to date. Nice work.
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