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Title: good tie-ins
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good way to tie up more loose ends. only thing is, please don't end this fic like you did Ai Yori Aoshi one, where I was left hanging about which of the girls was pregnant. Be that as it may though, you stories are always excellent. i hope you continue the great writing because this storyis one of the best ever. Chris
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Title: best story ever!!!
Reviewed By: ulquirroalover666 On: October 27, 2008 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for more of this masterpiece youre making!1!! i wonder whats gonna happen to kentaro and Shinobus teacher lolz i need more!!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Spartan429 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 07:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, your writing is top notch! Definitely better than me! Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this story! Peace Out!
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: October 22, 2008 23:07 EDT
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The marriages have begun... and it seems all of Hina's Planning is coming together. As always excellent work, Looking forward to more!!!
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Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story. good angle at using his imperial majesty. and great moment with the wedding couple on their special night. i can't wait to see the who's married next. Chris
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Reviewed By: Blackwolfhowls On: October 22, 2008 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story continues to flow together brilliantly (much like the ladies in the story). I have read this story over a number of times just to make sure I don't miss anything and it ensnares my interest, in style and creativity. I know it takes a lot of time to write a story, but I look forward to a hopefully long and enjoyable time reading many future chapters.
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 23:08 EDT
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Oh yeah! Right on! The first wedding is completed. Now I'm wondering who is next. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say Mutsumi first, but I'm probably wrong. No big deal. Great chapter and again well written. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: darthme1011 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY Favorite love hina fic i have read to date i cant wait for more updates
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 20:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting update. I'm curious to know why you made Keitaro's mother Hina's child instead of the father (more closer to the cannon). Very that Kanako didn't know Keitaro's parents either, as that is in a bit of contradiction with the earlier plot, if I recall correctly. It still flows and reads quite well and there are few, if any, errors that I can recall from this pair of updates. Again keep up the good work, it isn't easy to write well and you seem to be doing a good job of it. Look forward to the next update and I'm also curious how far you are going to go with this story. It has been quite a ride (no pun intended, honestly). Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: October 11, 2008 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Shinobu needs to find other ways to please Keitaro, she should have Kaolla teach her how to use her feet. :D Great story so far~
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Title: good tie ups
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent job of tying up loose ends. Hina is such a pistol. and, now i know Haruka is pregnant for sure. i wonder she'll let the cat out of the bag and tell everyone else. i can't wait to see what you do next Chris
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: October 08, 2008 01:27 EDT
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So far the story seems to be coming at an end, with Keitaro and the girls getting the ceremony prepared. Overall excellent writting I've been missing updates cause of work...Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 21:17 EDT
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Getting down to the brass tacks here. I see Kaolla is waiting until after her ceremony, potentially. Going to be interesting on how Keitaro, Naru, and Shinobu will deal with their families to say nothing about the elders of the Ayoma family. Been a fun one since the start and borderline torture awaiting the next chapter(s) release. Well written and it still flows very nicely. I'm curious what the former teacher will do and what his current mental state is. I have a feeling that the upcoming lemons will involve more than just Keitaro and a single girl. Keep it up and please try not to keep us haning so much ;) Great job.
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Title: better and better
Reviewed By: pak40l46 offline On: September 30, 2008 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are better at this than the original author. and i have to say, that it will be a pity when this fic end. the people in this story are extremely well fleshed out and that you have brought them to life very well indeed. i hope keitaro enjoys the knowledge that he is a father and the haruka loves him absolutely. plus with all the ceremonies coming up, our keitaro is going to be a busy man (and an exhausted one too). to bed that many women, hope you give him the stamina and a bottle of viagra. and, my enjoyment of this story(and one similar in ai yori aoshi) is total, you have inspired me to write my own fanfics. thank you, chris
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Reviewed By: Bookworm4evr On: September 21, 2008 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally write reviews but I do enjoy your writing. Especailly the way the characters seem more real than a lott of the other writers protray them. I am most looking forward to what the Urashima curse is and what you've done about the annex is very intrigueing. Another item I hope you will explain is why Keitaro cn't practice the Urashima arts. I the impression that even Amalla will be part of the marriage and Nyamo also. Keep up the great work. I hope in the furture you can do a story from Tenchi Muyo GXP. I believe you could have a lot of fun with that anime.
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