| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 06:34 PST
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well duh, Sue nevermind about my question on hiding the youkai features. I realized I never read P8 only the Prologue, I was waiting for P9 so much all others were dismissed. Well I read P8 this weekend... Man I cried and cried during that one.. Need to hear from Evan soon or I will be crying in this one.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 19:23 PST
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aw! I hope V can reach his family and find out anything. update soon!!
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Title: omg.....
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y!??!??!! Evan?!?!? where are u!!!?!??!? i feel for V.....im wondering too. please write the next chappie!
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Title: ...eep...! Um, Chapter 43: ...uhhhhh...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 11:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, you have written me into thevoid of speechlessness. It was...that good. Seriously, that's all I can think to say without sounding like a nerd. And poor V. ...and Evan. Wow.
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 22:53 PST
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I for one am not worried about Evan...he's made of tougher stuff than that...he's almost full youkai after all!!! Please guys do you really think a bullet would take out the devious sexy rock star known as Zel Roka? the answer to that SHOULD be no. GREAT friggen chapter!!! FINALLY V is starting to realize a few things...
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Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It hurt. this will probaly be like kurt sensing sam in chapter 34, evan will sense valerie's pain too. this fic seems to take longer to develop, P8 was fast.
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Title: NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 23:14 PST
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Okay so I KNOW Evan CAN'T die... because well then that would be the end of the story!!! So... I'm worried and pulling out my hair (more for Dieter's sake than Evan's) but I REALLY want to know WHO did this and why and how Evan's going to kill them if anything happens to anybody that he loves. Oh... and poor Gin :( Although this chapter pretty much made me want to cry, I must agree with the others, this is one of your most intense and best chapters EVER!!!!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 13:48 PST
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WhisperingWolf got it in before me.. I was thinking maybe this was how he was going to drop the Zel Roka persona since he knows V's the one and wants to settle down. But part of me is not so sure he planned it like this either. I guess in her panic she didn't think of Maddy. So I guess it's time to learn what he really is. And I agree with the others - this was such a powerful chapter - I was practically chewing my lip off and my hands were shaking too! Can't wait for a next update! Thanks Sue!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 13:35 PST
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A definite killer to come back with. NO PUN INTENDED! :/ Oops!!!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 13:31 PST
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OMG...Evan. I hope he's ok! He can't die... that'd be catastrophic and...and just downright terrible! Poor V she's freaking out and she's obviously frustrated. Poor thing. This was one of the most powerful chapters you've ever written, out of your whole series. Tears came to my eyes when I was read this chapter. Not only is Evan my favorite character out of your whole series, but this chapter really depicted those things you see but never really experience. It was very VERY real. A definite killer to come back with. I hope everything is going well with your family! Keep up the outstanding work. ~MSMND
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Title: Shot
Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 07:14 PST
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WOW you got us all on that. Now here is the big question youkai live for like EVER right. How many times do does each one have to "die"? But I wouldn't think that Zel Roka was ready to die, but the closer Evan gets to V I think it would be time for a new life right? I was wondering I really don't know if it was addressed in any of the Purities, maybe I will go back and reread and find my answer, but how are youkai traits hidden?
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 16:06 PST
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You hear so much about those memorial services for celebrities and you think 'that's got to be the stupidest thing ever', but sometimes, it just makes sense. I hope that Valerie is able to find some way to talk to somebody that knows something. That is the question, though. Has Valerie tried Madison yet? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 14:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor V... for a WHOLE chapter you haven't let her find him.. OR have him directly involved... (note on my quest to reread Purity during the school holidays, and during this heat wave, about 104 F, or 40 C (or more...) although tomorrow should be the last day! I reading Purity 2, which I downloaded off you website as an Acrobat document...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 13:13 PST
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OMFG! I can't wait for the update. I'm standing on pins and needles in pain, DYING TO KNO WAT HAPPENED...WHAT HAPPENS! Aaah! I hope we get a chapter tmrw. What about Evvies family?! P.s. Happy birthday shoutout to i think it was your brother or husband I'm not sure which one you said shared my birthday, but I wish them many more :-D
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 12:14 PST
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OMG... Evan CAN'T be daed! I mean, he's Youkai, as long as he doesn't get it in the heart or forehead, he should be all right. Right? Right?!
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