| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. I was rereading Phantasm, with Bas and Sydnie, and I couldn't help but wonder if Bas and evan would ever salvage their relationship. As always, I cannot wait until the next chapter. You will hear from me then. :D
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... Evan's finally getting it out huh? I think he needs to, and singing is definitely a good way to do that. Nothing to me, besides maybe words can express feelings the way a song or a melody can. I love how he calls her "baby". It just makes them so much cuter together. I think Valerie is starting to realize that she does feel something for him. I almost lost a friend over the last week, so this chapter and this story is really starting to hit home...but that is what makes your stories so remarkable. I can't wait for the next chapter. this was truly amazing. ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 14:17 PST
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XD I sometimes tell my boyfriend I love him like Jet Turbines XD, or a potato masher etc. but never said like bunnies lol. I love how V is just drawn to Evan, I have a feeling she is starting to realize feelings she doesn't really want to have, but really she does...sorta thing, but knowing Sue's stories :P V is going to do the backstroke down de Nile. It still bothers me that she still says she loves Pinkle, she never sees the guy, and when they interact it doesn't feel normal, like they seem to kind of act business-like together if you will. Admittedly I am biased to Evan, but V knows the guy, probably better than she knows Pinkle, and shes only been with Evan for a few months. She is comfortable with Evan, understands him better than either of them think...sometimes XD. And Evan loves her DX really, I just wanna get rid of the Pinkle XD
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 13:23 PST
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Bunnies... I have to wonder how he came up with that line. Music's always been Evans escape, and I'm not surprised that he's recording these raw moments. He's not just the hard-core rocker that everyone thinks he is. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 10:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I love you more than bunnies"? Awwww! That's officially my favourite love line now... the angsty-fluff between Evana dn Val was beautiful, too. I don't know if I've rated this story yet, so here you go!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez! I need a happy chapter, I think. You keep making me cry. lol. Great chapter. And V's starting to see that maybe he could be good to her - for her. She really doesn't need to ditch Mayvin. I'm guessing the money is for her sister. That was very nice of her. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 08:20 PST
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I have had two thoughts about this story. 1. Dieter was actually driving and Evan was covering for him so he wouldn't go to jail/prison. 2. You know how there are drawings of people with a devil and angel on each shoulder. With Evan I always picture two devils just one is better dressed HAHA
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 06:47 PST
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That was beautiful, especially toward the end. It makes you wonder, will the facade of Zel Roka fade out over time; will the artist Evan Zelig once more make an appearance? Or is this simply a one-time musical showing of the real Evan, without the stage face? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 05:16 PST
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They are so meant for each other it's sad. Poor Evan must suck to love a woman who is engaged.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 03:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again I'm so close to tears. This was a lovely hapter darlin' emotionally stunning.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 03:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right on time!!! I'm now a uni student. I have finished my first day and will tomorrow be going too... Pressing her hand against her heart, she pressed her lips together as she stared at her favourite image. He was holding himself above her, his arms taut, strained. There wasn't a doubt in the world that the man was bare-assed naked in it since his profile was entirely visible, including the length of his very erect penis, but that wasn't what had caught her attention. I hope her Fiancé doesnt find out about that picture...
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Title: Chapter 49: Excellent song choice, Sue! I LOVE 'Paralyzer'!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 13:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, I love to see Evan catering to V so uber domestic-like after a good cuddle but, in the midst of all that fluff, Evan is just...so horny. Poor deprived dude WOULD just read that article about V's undies and get a good chuckle but then--then--he sees the pics--the line that made me choke on a honey roasted peanut: `Fu-u-u-u-uck . . . I'm gonna come . . .' he half whined, reaching down, idly rubbing his burgeoning boner. Mental masturbation, indeed. I think it was very telling that V piked the photo of her and Evan lying together all contented-looking. Are we reaching subconciously, V? I think yes! And, $300,000? Well, SHIT! I'd probably collapse from shock! Go, V! You're quite a looker! And Marvin gets none, huh? Evan, you're so open...and possessive--a TRUE Izayoi/Zelig!
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Title: Chapter 48: From LOL to pouting in 1.7 seconds...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 13:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I mentioned lately how much I love Maddy ie and V scenes, Sue? Cuz I SO do...yes indeedy! I nearly choked when V lost her panties so the further emancipation of the undies sans Maddie was CLASSIC! So, we get to see a tad bit more of her life via the parental units. I just wanted to cuddle her there.V's past...I've got a feeling I'm gonna be able to relate to her a LOT.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 22:06 PST
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Yeah, that is a lot of zeros. With more to come! Heck, V would probably try to retire with just the royalties, with how reserved she is about money! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 19:34 PST
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aw cute. im ready to get into the deep stuff though with V and Zel. update soon
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