| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't decide if I want to know or not where he put that contract! What a great chappie and as always these two dance so well when they argue!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:13 PDT
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I totally agree with Valerie's final thought.. what did he agree to exactly?? Lemme guess - the contact is buried with the mom? Even if V works this out for Evan, how th heck are they ever going to reconcile? Urgh!! Thanks for the speedy updates Sue! You make me smile!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now i'm definitely curious. i hope the contract isn't where i'm thinking it is. thanks for the wonderful update!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 13:02 PDT
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Okay so I thought the girl being there would help but now I'm not so sure! I can't be totally sure V won't kill him. And I'm sooo scared to find out where the contract is! Lol
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 11:54 PDT
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I know I'm late, but it's not a problem, I've been reading the Purity Series, since Purity, lol, and I've fallen in love with how you give each and every character such depth and dimension. Evan is, by far, my favorite of Inuyasha's family! Such a complete and utter pervert! Thank YOU for continuing to give us such wonderful stories!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! So glad to see you updating again! Boy is Evan going to get it! I hope Valerie realizes her feelings, and "Zel" quits trying to hide his - I hope h's not too hooked on her - hate for him to go through what his mom did. Looking forward to more as always! Sometimes, you make my day!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 23:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NOES! Evan needs to get back in here and make things right again! I hate seeing them fighting. AWW!! It makes me tear up! Poor Evan and V... and Marvin. I hope things get better between them soon. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 20:56 PDT
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Great, Jillie asked her brother to escort her, and Valerie's about to pop a vessel at him for courting 'jailbait'. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 19:48 PDT
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Your right the last chapter was the same as the others, The difference was I skipped half of it, lemonade will tase better when i'm older :P. I also read your stories all in one go I've never had to stop in between chapters so it was a little different for me, sorry if I sounded rude.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 13:32 PDT
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So I know its hard to admit when you generally care for someone, especially when you don't want to. But goodness she way past denial and moving straight to oblivious! Lol! Then Marvin and V spend a few days of boredom together, being bored and having incredibly bored sex! Well ewww. Lol she knows Evan is the one for her hopefully this girl will help stir up some of that lovely emotion known to man as jealousy! Great chap Sue glad to see things are working out, the seem to always find a way don't they.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 06:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor V she's all confused and Evan's being a big idiot. I hope she yells at him for it!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 01:53 PDT
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Augh...Marvin and V havin sex....auuuuuuugh. Lol. Girl you are on a ROLL! Keep the chapters comin! Seriously, I cant wait to get to the end of this story, not because I want it to be over, but just cause I wanna know how the heck this is gonna work out! xDD Another wonderful update Sue. Ill be checking back everyday for the next one! =D
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew it! valerie has fallen hard for the zel roka. i mean who wouldn't? love your story! thanks for the updates. you are the best!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 16:04 PDT
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so I think that my roomie is getting annoyed with me. I scream and squeal like a pathetic fangirl every time I see another update on this story. To be quite honest...without the hope of seeing an update, I was getting really bored...I think I might live for these stories way too much hehe anywho as always great chapter...though I do admit I want Marvin to do something not kosher so I can find a reason to dislike him other than him being a little wimp. So bring on the Evan LOVIN!!! :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 15:29 PDT
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So the chick is still unknowable lol. Well at least Valerie came clean; however, I'm still wondering who the girl is.
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