| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 10:29 PDT
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Wow that chapter was kind of sad during the end. I think that Valerie is the key (obvisouly) in helping Evan sort out his doubts, insecurities and his boredom. Thank you for the chapter Sue! Cant wait for the next one to come out!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 05:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, but kind of sad in a way. I'm dieing to see what happens and when it happens with V and Evan.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 05:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder just who it was he couldn't find,
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Title: I have a question
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 04:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When Evan is up on stage in full Zel Roka persona who do you picture him as? I mean as an artist do you base yourself off any band vocalist to create the feel for him? Sorry to ask but I'm just curious...
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 21:53 PDT
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sorry if you've had one less review recently... i've been out with a fever for the week... anyway loved the last couple chapter. i'm kinda sad Gage wasn't involved as much as i'd like him to be, because he seemed to appear just to get rid of Violca... i lol-ed at that, btw, when i saw how easily Violca was disposed of. :P you keeping a list of Marvin-names so Evan can use a different one each time? o wow i just realized this... i feel stupid, of course, this is a reference to inuyasha and hojo/hobo/hoho etc.... duh... wow that took awhile for me to catch on.. haven't inuyasha-d in a super long time... :) great reference. yea i'd be pretty irky too if i were in Valerie's spot... actually i'd be super cranky and probably keep my mouth shut in silent mutiny the whole way... but we can't have our main charactress not speaking, now can we? (and charactress should totally be word.) lol very cute Dieter/Evan stories. :D patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Title: Chapter 67: Okay, I guess I'm a sad cynic...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, Mr. Matthis seems to have no ulterior motives and Evan did good--really good! That was so nice. It wasn't to butter up the defendant or make his case look good. He just did it out of the goodness of his heart. No wonder V could just kiss him--shucks, I could, too! Great chappie and I LOVED that Kiss slip by V...wonder how often Evan's gonna throw that at her? Wonder if it will be mentioned more than the whole "why were you hiding in the bushes? thing... LOL! That was a good rolling in-joke! Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 10:40 PDT
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Seriously, HaloGirl if this P story isnt up to your satisfaction do yourself a favor and dont read it. But if youre going to read the story (even knowing you dont like it) then dont complain about the story not reaching its end. On a lighter note Sue I thought this new chapter was excellent. I especially loved the little peck that V gave Evan. Simple and yet that small action meant the world to Evan. Thank you and update soon!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2009 04:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Evan I hope V can find a way to help him.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 20:44 PDT
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i was so happy, i just finished reading the last chapter and then this chapter was put on. can't wait for the next one!!! are we gonna find out what happend between gin and cain?
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 19:56 PDT
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"Ohahaha! What!?" *slaps hands on her cheeks*
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahh that was great, and V is not a person I ever want to piss off. And I'm dieing to know when are we going to get to hear about what happened in V's past.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 19:19 PDT
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Y'know with all that time on the bus, really doing nothing of real importance, maybe Valerie could start learning a little music. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love Evan's lyrics for Mikey! They were hilarious!! Thank you sooo much for the splendid update! Glad everyone knows who "V" is! =]
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 18:39 PDT
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I missed another one, I feel really bad now. Well I guess its better that I was reading your stories all over again not just doing other random stuff. Anyway I can't wait for the next one!!! and what happened with Gin and Cain have you not told us or did I just completely miss it?
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 18:32 PDT
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I think the new lyrics rock too! lol and I'm glad Violca's gone. Valerie is standing up for her man and protecting him even if she doesn't realize it yet. aww on to the next one!
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