| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 06:00 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a sneaky suspicion that Evan is going to realize that Val looked at him while sleeping. He is going to know that she at least touched the sheet because of her scent on it. I am not sure if he would call her on it though since he has no way of explaining why he knows but I can see a few fantasies being conjured up by him and his youkai over it. From the beginning I have believed that she was the girl from the prologue but her reaction to his penis in this chapter is making me start to wonder. I do feel bad for Evan if he won't get any sun time in Hawaii. Or at least some sightseeing, there is gorgeous scenery there that he could get away to see. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Title: Well Well Ms. D if your nasty!
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 23:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Sue LOL! I can understand her fascination I mean come on its Evan, I mean a pysch major would probably LOVE to get into his head! LOL I figured though that where Bas is broad and scary Evan is lithe and alluring! Which explains V's inability to disregard him completely. Its so nice to see their barriers come down a bit, however if Evan wants to know about V then he should start reciprocating if you know what I mean! Great chap!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 23:20 PST
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Yes, V. YES! XD Evan was totally awake after she touched his ... piercing... lol I haven't reviewed in a few chapters, sorry DX. I think this Purity might be my favorite one yet, Sue. lol
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 20:48 PST
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I know I haven't reviewed in a while, school work has been catching up with me :(. But I found this last chapter interesting, Valerie being curious about Evan and his anatomy. It was very intriguing :)
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Reviewed By: Ninj4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't believe what I just read. What was that all about. Sneaking a peek is naughty naughty V. A wonderfully insightful chapter. Just can't believe she looked haha
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Reviewed By: brownie31 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 16:23 PST
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HOMIGOD! (as Evan would say Im sure xD) Valerie....hot damn! xD Rofllll, maaaaan I hope Evan was actually awake for that and had to roll over to keep himself from doing anything! xDD Maaan, that made MY cheeks flush, and Im not an easy flusher! Rofl, that was GOOD. Yet, for the life of me, I cannot imagine a piercing through a mans wee-wee, it just...sounds way too painful xD I dont WANNA imagine it! So! Evan and V are coming to Hawaii huh? Can I meet em! XD Lol, I hope those chapters will be fun! Ive been wanting to see some of the Purity characters come to my home state! *claps* Bring on the tropical romance comedyness!! Oh...oh...I hope Evan plays an ukulele at some point, lol xD~ He could serenade V like Morio did!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OK... I about died laughing when she tweaked the stud.... inu-yasha had the ear and Evan has the stud... hahahah can't help touching ... Well loved the chapter sue can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 15:06 PST
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V, V, V, V, V...WE-EL. That was interesting to say the least. LOL Didn't anyone tell V that curiosity killed the cat...or pussycat I guess I should say. XD OMG that was amazing. I laughed soooo hard at her reaction to Evan's... endowments. I think she's starting ot realize her need for him. Wonder what's going to happen in Hawaii... CAN'T WAIT!!! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 12:54 PST
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Valerie is extremely lucky that Evan didnt wake up and see what she was doing to him. That would have been hilarious not to mention extremely embarassing for Valerie. Thank you for this chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out!!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 10:44 PST
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Curiosity killed the cat V... Yay I loved it! so so so close!! bring on the FLUFF YAY!
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Reviewed By: alessa186 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 07:18 PST
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omg i practically pissed my pants with laughter reading this chapter. LOL!! (whisper) it kinda brought back memories of old times *^_-* Great chap. Loved it. ^^
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 07:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Curiosity killed the cat. though I am pretty sure Evan won't mind V looking :) though he may want to get his own back.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 06:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was hilarious! I would not be surprised if Evan had done that on purpose! Great chapter! Too adorable. V is falling hard for him now! And Hawaii... I bet those are going to be some great times! Thanks for the wonderful update as always!
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Reviewed By: brownie31 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 15:51 PST
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Please update soon! This is just an amazing story I can't stop reading it.
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