| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 21:32 PST
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i read this chapter on my phone on the way to a christmas eve party and for some reason i can't make a review on my phone so i'm doing it now. LOVE i'm really happy that you updated i've been hoping and hoping and here it is, i'm so happy!! anyway loved it and can't wait for the next one! merry christmas and happy new years for you and your whole family, ohh and i was on your website and what your son did was adorible you have a good hearted family and thats nice to know that people like that are still out there!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 17:17 PST
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YAY! a chapter for christmas : ) that was good. i hope V remembers how she was and doesn't blame evan. Im ready for things to progress between them! She needs to start realizing he's different and she really likes him even if its scary. and she should stop teasing evan.. it really isnt right lol can't wait for the next update! : )
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 16:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahah!! The was the greatest update!! My favorite line was: `She . . . she's emancipated her panties!' OMG, could not stop cracking up!!! I'm so glad Evan and Valerie are getting much closer!! Thanks so much!! Have a safe and happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about something to make you laugh and blush! AMAZING! muuuch more than what I thought you'd come back with, and I LOVED IT! It was... I can't even find words to describe it. Just know this is a chapter I will NOT forget! I LOVED IT! V, EVAN... AMAZING. LOL Wonder what the "morning after" will be like. Can't wait!Have a MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 10:35 PST
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Evan was doomed from the start wasnt he? LOL! I just hope that he can convince Valerie that she's hismate in time to save his well balls! Merry Christmas Sue and a Happy New Year!!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 08:38 PST
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woot first review for this chapter 8D Once again, I adore V and Evan, this chapter was great! Now we really need to get rid of Orwell lol Merry Christmas Sue!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 22:33 PST
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omg this story is so good!! I just started reading it and i can't wait for the next chappy!!! hope all is well and update soon : )
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Reviewed By: alessa186 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 22:38 PST
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Heyyy when is the next chap coming out :( im dying here.. (figure of speech) Its getting so interesting :D ^_^ please update soon! Merry X-Mas and Happy New Years!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 21:58 PST
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"sober Valerie had flicked, and if she'd done that before adding booze, there was no telling what she might do now." - I lol'd xD poor V, no wonder she doesn't want relationships with guys like Evan ;_;. although ll her past boyfriends were dicks. Evan would treat her good dammit DX she must know shes got him around her finger by now.
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 20:30 PST
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Yay, character development! Best holiday treat ever! Now things are much clearer now. V is a HILARIOUS drunk, I hope that later on she can say some of these things to Evan while she's sober. Thanks for the treat and have fun with your sister :).
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 20:15 PST
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Okay so that completely explains why V is so wary of musicians! I mean first dirt bag bf who took her V card. Then Justin who thought she was a toy! I mean really then beat down Duff who so deserves an Evan ass-kickin' for hitting on her like she was a damn man! I mean its crazy because there are some twisted dudes out her who will do exactly what you wrote about Sue, and more. Poor Evvie he has such a mountain to climb! Hope V cuts him some slack or throws him a rope, shoot maybe even build him an escalator. Great Chap!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 19:45 PST
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haha evan wanted her socks, funny. loved it, it was awesome, cant wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 04:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That explains a lot! But what will V think come morning... if she remembers LOL
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 23:54 PST
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Her socks... Evan's going to do everything in his power to try to stop Valerie from stripping down to her lingerie, but she's going to go until one or both of them are baring all! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 22:19 PST
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Poor V! That's terrible! No wonder she despises the rocker type. If that was my experience I would too. Well it's definitely nice to get closer into the life of Valerie Denning. NICE. GREAT WORK. -MSMND.
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