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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 › » ] | Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2010 16:40 PDT
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Yay update! 8D I was so happy when I saw the new chapter was up xD. I'm glad things are getting back on track for you! That shower did sound wonderful :3. I also read your post on your website, and I was like "WHAT!? Shes only half way through!?" lol. Man, 90 some chapters and were only halfway... damn xDD. I guess Evans is gonna be the longest story of them all? =P Not that I'm complaining, far from it! I'm just really surprised xD. I thought since we were getting up in the 90's that the story was coming close to being finished =X. Oh well! I'll look forward to the second half 8D. And and, I'll also look forward to seeing those rewrites of Purity! You really are too hard on yourself though xD. It's always been one of my favorites! Multiple times I've read that one =3. Keep up the good work girl! Cant wait to see the updates 83.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost missed this update amidst all the editing you have been doing and then I would have been sad. I love the sounds of that shower and I wish I had one in my house. It was interesting that the creep remembered Val and then didn't use it to try to get more money from Evan. Knowing you I suspect it will come up again with some sort of twist. You are good at doing that. I bet Evan is going to behave as much as he can since he got Val in his house and he won't want to do anything that will make her want to leave. It is going to get interesting to see what he does to keep her there.
| Title: gah
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 19:56 PDT
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gah. if only those existed AAH that sounds so darn NICE omigosh now i feel like going to a spa asap... oh if only awesome-super-nice-rich-guy-Evan actually existed, he could spare me some dough? don't you worry, soon that type of shower shall be PATENTED and I shall be the inventor (and ok... you get 3% earnings. MAYBE 5% if it goes well. x] hehe..) this was a nice, relaxing chapter.. glad to see you back (alive?) :D waiting patiently (and i do mean patiently in my dull and unimportant life), ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 00:38 PDT
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Oh man, I can't believe that Justin guy remembered Valerie at the end of the meeting. Hmm...wonder if he'll really grasp on why Evan beat the crap out of him now or not. Thanks for the chapter, Sue! Now, back to finals. :/
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That new shower description was very intriguing.
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 16:51 PDT
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((Okay, I wrote more than that but it got deleted apparently.)) But it basically said: I'm excited for the part when they express their love for each other. But how will it all play out? Will V tell Marvin? Or will it be like Gin and Cain where Evan in his pursuits to make V happy would give her to Marvin only to have her pick for herself? Your stories bring me extreme happiness and enjoyment. I want to thank you for that. -MSMND
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 16:48 PDT
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AHHHH!!! HE'S BAAAACK!! I MISSED MY EVAN!!!
| Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 14:58 PDT
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Welcome back! I've been noticing your revisions on the other ones and was hoping they were a prelude to the next chapter of Subterfuge. And they were! You keep me coming back!
| Title: Chapter 95: (Oh, let me gush a bit, Sue...): Purity 9 is BACK!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a happy camper!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...DETEST…Justin. Yeah, just had to get that out. V's a friggin' super attourney-a veritable pitbull when it comes to her client (or, in this case, defending her as-to-be-claimed mate)….you GO, V! Then again, 'shit-damened' DOES rock for originality! Right up there with Ryo's 'balls!'…otherwise, Justin's the scum of the earth IMHO. I'm a Hentai I guess because, imagining all those shower functions and the possible, ahem, USES…whoo, is it hot in here? I'm with V; I'd wanna say screw reality and let's get…slippery… Okay, being good, now. I. Am SO glad. You are back! **glomps Sue till she squeals "Mercy!!"** A great chapter after the hiatus and I'm smiling in a day that was truly screwed up, so thanks for that and this chapter-it was right one time! V-ness: Venus! Cute, Evan! You're kinda…casual about that bathroom interuptus, V…getting used to him, huh? LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Signing off, now, Kool-Aid smile firmly in place! Your loyal fangirl (and Zel's stalker, ahem, admirer…?), -iloveanimecartoons P.S. Take care of you!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 05:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That shower sounds heavenly! And you just know Evan would do it for her :)
| Title: Chapters 91-94 (Geez, I'm slipping, here..._
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 13:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so much has happened to our unlikely pair...Evan goes all quiescent--didn't it at all, with his simple "Okay."--and V, of course, ws suspicious...then, V got STONED--HAH!Evan beat the hell out of her ex and is now getting sued, and Mr. Roka is SO not repentant--didn't expect him to be, though. LOVED how Cain stuck up for Evna and how Evan couldn't think of a snappy rejoinder--the mask is slipping, Evvie--Maddie's hardcore! She's got a sharp tongue and guts! LOVED how she took up for V! Go, Maddikins! GAWD, these last chapters were good! Loved the TEASER and am looking SO forward to the installment. As for you, Sue, take care of you. ;)
| Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I CAN'T BELIEVE IM STIL READING THIS....HOPE YOU CONTINUE UPDATING.....
| Title: You are absolutely AMAZING
Reviewed By: emertheawesome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I have never left a review for you, but I have read your stories multiple times. (I think I have read Purity 4: Justification about five times, all the way through--I love Gin and Cain!!!) You have amazing characters and intricate plotlines and whenever I read your stories I am completely sucked in. I cannot wait for you to get the next chapter of this out. Seriously, I am on the edge of my seat. I love V, and Evan and they're jigsaw personalities (they're so different, but they still fit perfect!), and I'm so curious as to when/how she will figure out he's youkai. On a side note, I just reread Purity 8: Vendetta, and I really wish I could see more of Ben and Charity. That seems like the cutest couple ever, and you're always dropping hints about them. I hope to see more in the future. Alright, now that I have written this massively long review, I'll stop. Just wanted to say THANK YOU for gracing the fanfiction world with your presence. I can't wait for more!!!!
| Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric i love your work! You are one of my favorite arthurs on this site! I love your work and how your characters have passion and come alive as I read about them! Keep doing what you do! Love ya!
| Title: Delectation LMAO
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 17:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Well, Cain, to what do I owe the delectation of actually drawing the notice of the oh-so-busy tai-youkai?" Delectation-- thats great! I've only ever heard delectable so I didn't recognize it-- I had to look it up in the dictionary LOL while thinking the whole time, yup.. Evan is a walking dictionary. Very clever to put that in there. Good stuff. I loved the last couple lines too; he is heart-wrenchingly adorable and yet still frustrating somehow. I can't wait for the next chapter. I forced myself not to think about the update or check for one for at least a couple of weeks cause I was hoping there would be one or two when I got back. So, I don't know how long this one has been out, but I'm hoping for a while cause that means the next update is coming soon!! But honestly, your characters are so awesome. I think about the story and really, about the people in them as if they are friends of mine in trouble. That is how real they and their concerns are! Awesome. Awesome. Job. You are the only author on here I read anymore. P.S. I always read the english version of Inuyasha and they translate that he says "wench".. but reading your work made me reread inuyasha and this time I read the Japanese version. Big surprise, but Inuyasha's language is REALLY bad! XD So its not surprising to find that he calls Kagome "Bitch" instead of wench or woman. Somehow, I like bitch better... LMAO.
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