| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The truth will out. I'm proud of Dieter, al;though I know it's causing Evan a lot of pain.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 14:08 PDT
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Y'know, usually people would be happy that the charges would be completely dropped. Evan does have a point to want to take the fall though, he'd do that for any of his friends in Dieter's situation. It's pretty much how he interprets how he was raised. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: Chapters 104 and 105
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 11:35 PDT
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Ugh! I keep missing the updates! But, I digress. Moving on to my reviews! 104: WOW. We finally know who it was Evan was protecting. I had a feeling at the beginning that it was Dieter. Dieter and Evan were too good of friends for Evan to not want to help him in any way. I think it was courageous of Miss to go to V and tell her the truth. I know for a fact that Evan would have probably never told her or if he was going to it would have been after he had been convicted or something. Oh, Evan... trying again to be everyone's hero. It's cute in a way- very noble quality to ask if you ask me. 105: So, V confronted him. Good. I'm glad she did. Evan needs to understand that he can't just get away with every master plan that he comes up with the remain the hero. I'm glad Dieter wrote the letter to Miss too. It's so like him to want to own up to his actions. Hopefully now, Evan can get past it all and focus on V and regaining her trust. Because if he plans to get anywhere with her, he has some smooth talking to do. Poor Evan though. I feel bad that he's upset about not being able to take the fall for his friend. I hope he doesn't feel like, by doing this, that he's showing his worth. That by taking Diets' place he can feel that he's done something meaningful in his life. But knowing Evan, that's probably the train of thought his mind is taking. well, do continue the excellent work. I can't wait for the rest of this story to unfold. It will be phenomenal I can rest assured. This is by far my favorite Purity installment (Because its Evan)!! Keep up the great work! And I hope things are sailing smoothly for you and your family now. I know it's 2 days late but also I hope you had a Happy 4th of July!! - MSMND
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 09:35 PDT
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That was quite a turn of events. Definitely looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 22:17 PDT
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I knew he wasnt driving!! never thought it was dieter tho. I'm glade we're getting close to the trail. Then V can come to terms about how much she loves evan : ) cant wait for the next chappy
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 22:06 PDT
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ha ha, so i was right it wasn't Evan that was driving, though i thught it was Maddy not dieter. anyway thanks for the capter can't wait for the naxt one
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Title: Oh Lordy!!
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 18:59 PDT
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Oh my god!! You have managed to make me love Evan even more!! So...everyone lied about Evan driving so he wouldn't go back to jail or is it something about being youkai? I'm not sure. Anyway good jpb on the Chapter I LOVED it!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 18:51 PDT
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That changes things completely. Not to damn a dead man, but that could save Evan's record. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 11:48 PDT
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o wait i had to add something else because i see another reviewer asked Evan would be protecting Diet. Well if they go back some chapters they will remember Evan telling Diet not to worry and don't say a thing. And Diet reluctantly letting the subject drop. But I remember Evan saying that Diet has too many strikes on his record, and that he has a family to worry about, so let Evan handle it. Hope that helped refresh ur memory fellow reader. :D
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 11:44 PDT
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Oh shit...Sue I knew it! I really did. That's all i can say. But on another note. This story is nowhere near done and its already 104 chapters...this one is going to take the record. I'm anxious for the next chapter. P.S.- Death to Marvin!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 06:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew he was protecting someone. Now I need to know why :)
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Title: oh my...
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 22:11 PDT
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This chapter was achingly beautiful especially the end. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 13:46 PDT
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i wonder if Maddy was the one driving and Evan's just taking the fall for her, because it was Maddy that went to get V for Evan. i don't know just a thought anyway loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 01:08 PDT
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Hmm, so is it time for Evan to fully divulge what happened the night of the accident merely so Valerie knows he does trust her?
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 00:03 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not get an alert for this chapter, so I'm a little late on my review. However, I have to agree with V that, with this new development, there is something to question in Roka's statement. Now, we just need to find out what he's hiding and why Evan's willing to put his life on the line for this person. I hope Evan doesn't close himself off too much to V, but I can see his reluctance to bond with her over the details of his trial. I do hope he opens up with her, because even I want to learn a bit more about what makes Evan Zelig tick (and the issue Evan has with Cain and where that stemmed from). Well, I hope things are all well for you and your family and if they aren't where you want them to be yet, then I hope for the best for you all. I will keep you in my prayers. Thank you for working so diligently in the midst of all your personal commotion. I know I for one greatly appreciate it and honor your perservereance. Continue the phenomenal work! -MSMND.
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