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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 › » ] | Title: Crap...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 11:53 PDT
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Urk! Erm, the last comment wasfor chapter 103, Sue...my bad!
| Title: Chapter 102: **le sigh**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 11:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just WHO are you protecting Evan? It's not cool to decieve your mate, yanno... I used to wonder if it's Dieter he was defending but now I think it may be someone who could expose him in more ways than one. Pure conjecture, of course. That parting line from V, Sue, I've been thinking it for MONTHS now. "Trust me, Evan, 'cause I don't give MINE so easily--RECIPROCATE, baka!!" she seems to say. Sometimes I wonder if she wants to give up under the lack of assistance Evan gives. Hope she doesn't, though...though that MAY just be the wake up call shorty needs to open up. Good though-provoking chapter.
| Title: Chapter 102: Juat "Awwwah"
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 11:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Evan and the kiddies! His gifts for ALL the kids was so sweet. And he's so silly with that costume! I KNEW sydnie was gonna lick him! I just wanna huggle Bailey and Olivia to DEATH! Great comfy-squishy chapter, Sue!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 05:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very melancholy chapter. Trust is such a precious thing.
| Title: a calculated guilt trip?
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2010 23:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouch. a painful ending, but a necessary development.... Come on Evan, don't let her down!!!!
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2010 21:15 PDT
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I could easily see V's line of 'why does November rain feel colder than December snow' in one of Evan's songs eventually. It seemed to set up the whole of how Evan's day went, despite the somewhat failed attempt of truth or dare. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 14:46 PDT
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I love it--it's such a tease, with remarks about the "kitten's" ears--I can't wait until V finds out the "truth" about Evan!
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I am surprised that you didn't title this chapter Halloweiner. snicker snort snicker. I loved Evan's costume ideas for Val and himself. I also loved how he sweated, at least a little, when Olivia talked about already having cat ears. The interaction between Val and the kids and Evan and the kids were great. Bailey is turning into a wonderful big brother, just like his father was. The party sounds like it will be fun and it was sweet of Evan to arrange for all the kids to get a prize, Val just has to figure out which category fits which kid best. I hope everything is going well on the personal front. Until next time I will stay tuned into the same dog channel at the same dog time. (Sorry Batman for the liberties I just took)
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 06:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was adorable and hilarious - great combo darlin' :)
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 23:36 PDT
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Hmm... Did Valerie just say that she loved Evan... Sure, it was a specific thing, but in the wrong hands and wild imaginations, that could be dangerous! Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 10:30 PDT
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Aw, He's such a sweetie! I love that guy. Evan's amazing. Well, I hope all gets better for you dear. Keep writing! - MSMND
| Title: Chapter 101: ...because...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 07:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh, what's Evan gonna be? A Power Puppy, A fireman, a drag queen? He really is a pretty man, I've heard. LOL! The mind races... And Evan digging into V's past-I KNEW he was gonna go there! I hope he doesn't alienate his standing with V, though, in his possible words and actions towards her parents after he gets the info from Bas. Bas was calmer than I thought he'd be with Evan and they, for the most part, had a pretty calm conversation. There's hope there, I think, for a mellowing of assumptions between the two…of course, we could just be seeing another Sesshy/InuYasha situation-a constant under tension between the two, beneath the general respect. I'm sure they love each other and aren't open to those kinds of emotions towards each other. To see where the strife between them started from is gonna be an eye-opener for sure! I wonder if Sydnie is a calming force between the two and maybe I'll find out this when they're all together again. Ah, well… Conjecture and all that… I'm rambling… I do this a lot, ne? LOL! Okay, I'm done.
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 19:50 PDT
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hehe, Bailey. very cute. :3 i guess i can't find much to say for this chapter.. the dogs are back? |)
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 16:34 PDT
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I have a feeling that Evan's planning a group costume (or at least a pairs costume) based on his favorite show. Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: Chapter 100 and 101: **sighs dreamilly**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm conpletely fangirl sighing here and can't come up with many coherent thoughts. Gomen. Simply put, in my tomboyish heart, after reading these last two chapters, I. Want. A. Boyfriend!!! LOL! Evan ws so SWEET and I loved his "threat to get V to keep the gifts and the chop stick lesson and okay, gotta go sigh some more... **sighs and melts into a puddle** Okay, I'm good for now! LOL! You get my point though, ne? I'm just in LOVE with these two! Sue, you do plot development justice and I love, love, LOVE the way you're pacing this story and the developing feelings in the fated duo! Makes it all the better after any long periods between chapters! You always come back with an awesome chapter that more than makes up for the wait! Thanks for this, really. My life is in limbo right now and this and the manga I DLed from your site really lifted my spirits! Again, I hope your situation turns around VERY soon! God's best to you and yours! When I'm out of sigh mode, I have most comments for chapter 101! Later!
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