| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 21:53 PDT
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hee. So CUTE. i love reluctant momma's boys (such as my brother)-- it's ADORABLE. wai. x3 that car.. dude... patiently waiting~ hope your summer's been better than mine. :)MBZQ
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why am I not surprised that Marvin bailed on her birthday? He makes a lousy boyfriend/fiance. Would he be more interested in Bugs maybe? I am not sure if he knows that he doesn't deserve a wonderful girl like Val and is making it easier for her to find someone who does deserve her or if he is just oblivious as to how to maintain a relationship. I knew Evan would not return those gifts. I have a feeling that the party is going to be very interesting. I can't wait to read about it.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like I'm in love all over again! No guy in the world will ever ever ever match up with Evan! Thanks for the wonderful update!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 12:16 PDT
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I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. School work had me for a while. I can't believe Marvin backed out AGAIN! I wonder if Evan will ever pay him a visit like he wants to. That car he got Val sounds so cool too.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvin.... just GAHHHHH!!! He's so frustrating! How could he ditch her on her birthday :( I'm glad evan was there to cheer her up. I really loved that moment on the beach :)
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW!! He's starting to open up to her! I'm excittted! and this is FANTASTIC!! I'm glad Marvin's not there. LOVING IT. Keep it up! - MSMND
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 21:36 PDT
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if you include the prologue you're at a 100 chapters! only 11 more and it will be the longest of the purity stories so far, i can't wait! do you know how many chapters are left? antway i was reading a purity short and i love how you comected Evan's hate for marvin back when he was a kid, it made me laugh. so whats purity 11 going to be about? ben and Charity or was it chealsea?
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 21:28 PDT
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Now I'm curious who all is going to be at her party... Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 13:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you......I really love your series. I just giggle and laugh when Iread this one in particular. I mean you really bring these characters to life and make them real. This kind of work only comes from a true author at heart. I'm about to burst into happy giggles right now actually! Anyway, I was wondering what's Evans ceremonial color, and how long do you predict this story will be? All right, have a good weekend!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2010 20:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE Evan!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2010 01:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AN UPDATE SWEEEEEET!! Ok now that I got that out of my system lol. I just don't see Evan returning the other things he bought for Val. I see him socking them away to give her after they are mates or on later occasions. But the car sounds fantastic. If I can't have the shower from the last chapter then I want that car lol. You have a wonderful gift for descriptions, I can just picture it in my head and don't see Val turning the car down. Evan will help convince her conscience to accept the car. After she does Marvin will either want to use it to impress donors or be upset because he will think that the donors will assume that he, Marvin bought the car for her using the money he has collected from donors. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 22:14 PDT
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Heh, I get the feeling that those presents will show up again some time soon. There's no way that Evan is going to return them. Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if he already has a few rooms in his house just for her use. Question is, where's she going to park that car now? There's no way she's going to leave that on the street, let alone even in a parking garage. I don't doubt that Evan has a plan for that too. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 19:57 PDT
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i love the chapter. i want a car like that!! anyway can't wait for the next one, until then i hope everything goes good for you
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 16:54 PDT
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wow.... thats the best gift ever. Lucky Lucky V. Poor Marvin (I always want to write "Moravin")He's probably a really sweet guy but... V's EVANS'!!! Well keep it up!-MSMND
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 14:08 PDT
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car. car. car. I WANT A CAR AAAAAAAAHHHH -_-'' i guess this is why i really do read... where money is limitless and impossible things are possible (such as refusing such a thing-- V WHAT THE HECK??) man i wanted elaboration on the lunchbox thing. >=* much fluff available in that little corner. LOL and then Evan brushed right past it with his dumb car.. xD
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