| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2010 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great it's just the kind of thing were you really wanna be there.
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 22:23 PDT
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[insert big, long, feminine, girly, AWWWWWW] long time no read~ i was so behind... i believe i caught up with the past 5 chapters! everything's just so cute and snuggly now~ now that the car mystery's revealed, the only thing left is the long-awaited-but-sad destruction of pinky (pinkle? piglet? o-o). lol. Ryder. XD high school must've been hell. hope your summer's still going well! ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 19:46 PDT
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Aww, that was sos cute! I giggled the entire time :) I'm happy that you updated that. "o"
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Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 19:05 PDT
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Another wonderful chapter. V and Evan are just so cute together. Thank you so much for the updates.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 16:41 PDT
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Well that's good that Mathis is able to take a few steps! Now, what was Evan trying to tell Valerie? Curses Madison stole her away before we got to read it!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 12:24 PDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY TWO FAVORITE THINGS IN ONE PLACE!! ROCKY HORROR PICTURE SHOW AND EVAN ZELIG
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 10:36 PDT
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Loved how everyone started to do the Warp dance in Evans living room. I think that group created its own little unit. Its pretty cool when you get to see them all together and how they act. Thank you for this chapter Sue and update soon!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW. How sweet. They like her. I definitely liked how this chapter was played out. LOVE IT!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get excited every time I see a new chapter update! You are so awesome! ^_^ I love how things are flowing between Evan and V... and honestly I think that they're my most favorite couple. Evan is HILARIOUS!!! I hope to see your next update soon!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 15:11 PDT
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Thanks for the chapter Sue! I loved the part where Evan showed Valerie the video and hearing Valerie's accusations? Hilarious! Thank you for this chapter and hope you and your family have a blessed day.
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 08:42 PDT
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YAY!!! Thank you for the update you made my day!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 04:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thios odd feeling that either Evan will end up in Vermont on Marvin's going to cop out again :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
with Marvin's turn outs so far for V, I wouldn't lay down any bets... but the fact that I am saying this it MIGHT actually happen....
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 22:28 PDT
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Now tell me why I have the feeling Marvin will cancel skiing at the last minute? Lol, I loved the remembrance of sex with Cain and Gin! Poor Bas, he's traumatized!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice follow up to the previous chapter. It was so funny how Val started in on Evan's Thanksgiving dinner without second thought. And Bas being delivery boy was great. The banter between Evan and Val sounds so comfortable, like a long timed married couple going back and forth. I have to admit I really started laughing when I read what the PSA was about. Of course Evan uses a condom every time until he is with Val. Val will understand when she learns about youki mating that Evan has always used a condom. It will be interesting to see 10 years into the future if Evan still thinks his dad is a pervert for nailing his wife whenever. I think he will be traumatizing his own children with a bare ass and mom's legs in the air. The concerts were a good idea for Evan to do his community service and restitution. I can't wait to see how Christmas unfolds and if Val's rejected birthday presents make a comeback.
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