| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2010 16:37 PDT
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AW! I missed this chapter! SO CUTE! I loved the exchage between V and Evan. They really are perfect for each other. I can't wait for them to get to the conversation where she asks what his problem with Cain is and why he feels the way he des about his family. THAT should be interesting. Can't wait!Great work! - MSMND
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sweet chapter...I smiled the whole time! You truly are the master of fanfics.Your mad, mad skillz always surprise me. I put a `z' there because your just so awesome like that.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 13:01 PDT
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Okay Evan putting the mistletoe on his private parts in hopes that Valerie would kiss him there? I was laughing so damn hard! Thanks for this chapter Sue. I absolutely loved it! Hope to rad more very soon. Glad that things are looking up for you as well. Hope they continue to do so.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 11:29 PDT
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Well, at least V is fitting in with everyone else during Christmas. She's gotten the ok from the family, so that's wonderful! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 11:02 PDT
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Aunt V??? Olivia is clairvoyant, and oh so adorable. =) omg with the mistletoe! rofl
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 08:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWW! They are so CUTE!!!! Valerie and Evan's little moments together just brings a huge smile to my face!!! I love this fic!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 08:22 PDT
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they ARE!! (cute, that is. :3) i don't know why, but the whole Cain-daddy-giving-approval scene gives me fuzzy feelings all over. =D such quick updates~! it's like a real Christmas! (lol... or Hanukkah...)
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 05:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it odd that I now want it to be Christmas????
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 23:38 PDT
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That clam bake sounds really neat! I love seafood! I hope this chapter does help Evan open up to Valerie more in the future that way she can see that he's not like the other guys she used to date.
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 17:42 PDT
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FLUFF FLUFF FLUFF IT'S SO FLUFFY (Despicable Me ref.)! love 'em bits... and i've adored the last couple chapters, with 'em family-ness, reminiscing the good ol' times with the Zelig family. =3 adorable. yay~ (and yet, i am waiting expectantly for the Morio/Maddy fic :|>)
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Title: Perfect ending song
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::sniffle::... isn't that song hint enough about how he really feels? >_> Can she deny that he picked it on purpose? Wah!! ~Chaos~
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 00:42 PDT
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Ok so if Valerie doesn't admit to herself at least that she loves Evan I swear I'm stealing him from her!!! ...nah I'm just teasing!! Wonderful chapter as always. I must say that I adore Evan he's so sweet and romantic and thoughtful... Marvin doesn't stand a chance!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 23:19 PDT
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That was definately a 'girlfriend' thing, not a 'hired help' thing, not even a 'friend' thing most of the time. They're learning what it is to be two halves of a whole, despite not actively knowing what's happening. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 20:43 PDT
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That was a lovely chapter, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, and god bless.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitly nice :)
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