| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: CheshireAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2010 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Loved the chapter Sue, can't wait to find out where this goes. :)
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2010 10:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!! I see things are slowly patching themselves up. I can only imagine how Valerie and Evan will get together. Awesomeeee!!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2010 07:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sorted now so don't worry about it! I hope the time out next week is for good things :) Again another amazing chapter, I'm glad they have at least started talking.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 16:40 PDT
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I liked this chapter. I liked the absence of V's point of View, it helps us get a better look at the way Evan Zelig thinks and how he's taking the new developments. (Not that I don't love V cause I do, but you know...) But this as a great chapter and I'm glad Evan heard those words from Miss herself because I think they will mean more to Evan that way. Especially since he's told her that he will do anything for them. I think Evan should remember that promise and let what Miss and Dieter want to happen happen, no matter how much it hurts him to do so. Now... What about Miz. V? How is Evan planning to get back on her good side? and I have a question: If the charges are dropped, deosn't that mean V won't be his lawyer anymore? So how is he supposed to rekindle their flame if she's going to be distanced from him?!?! GASP! well, I will look forward to the next chapter! Thanks for all your hard work!! -MSMND.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 13:18 PDT
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I loved the final though! I love zombies though, I know total geek girl, ah well! Well, I'm glad Evan saw Miss so she could give him a reason why she did what she did!
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 10:14 PDT
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And yet again your beautiful language makes me tear up!! Although I have to admit that Miss' final thought was probably my favorite part!! Excellent chapter, though that isn't really surprising given who wrote it!!! Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm going to cry... That was so touching and yet so simple. And I didn't mind the missspelling it just nice being at the bottom ;)
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Title: Upheaval
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Poor Evan tries to be the hero and not only misses saving the day but gets the one person he most wants to impress mad at him. He can't seem to win. I wonder how he is going to mend his fences with Val after lying to her. I also wonder what he is going to do when he realizes that his excuse to be with Val has just gone away. I foresee some naughtyness in his future to justify having a lawyer on call. lol I hope he manages to bump Marvin out of Val's life soon so he can step in. I can't wait to see how it all works out.
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Title: Dead Leaves
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I knew that Dieter was driving but as you know (since I told you in other reviews lol) I have been wondering how Val was going to find out. I never suspected Missy coming and telling her though. I did know that the report would give her some clues but I thought that she would have to drag the info from Evan or trick it from Maddy. I also liked how the two of them were missing each other and wondering if they had each done something wrong to upset the other. I am curious as to how Val is going to react to the news. I know how to find out read the next chapter that is waiting for me lol. Happy writing I know I will be happy reading.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 00:35 PDT
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I knew Diet was driving, I just knew it! Glad I got something right for once lol. Thanks for the early chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 23:39 PDT
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Please, don't take me wrong but I really, REALLY dislike this Dieter character. And I don't think I like Evan's reaction to Valerie's position and attitude. In fact she is the only one I admire right now.
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Title: November Rain
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 22:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I somehow missed updates so I am reading three now but reviewing after each so I don't forget anything to praise you about :) "mmm ... Boogers"! ROFL I almost died reading that. It must be love for him to not be grossed out by that... but then we are talking about Evan, I wonder if there is anything that would gross the boy out. I know that there is something in that accident report that will help exonerate Evan when Val finds it, just because every time you have her mention it she says that she hasn't finished it. I wonder when Val will realize that Evan is not lying but leaving something out about the accident. Such a pensive mood she is in too, is she thinking about her family that "lost" her? Having Dieter give Evan that album was perfect. It would have to be a musical memento to have true meaning between the two and that is a great album. It having "Stairway to Heaven" just adds another dimension to it. Well on to the next chapter. I will review it when I finish it. I am looking forward to seeing how it all works out. I just noticed that you are over 100 chapters so I know it must be ending soon, not sure if I am happy about it yet or not. Looking forward to the next story but I think I just might miss Evan. Considering I didn't like him from the previous stories that is saying a lot about your skills as a writer.
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 19:08 PDT
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So wonderful!!! I must admit I have had a nagging feeling that Evan was covering for Dieter from the start. This is turning into a nail-biter, the next question is of course how on earth is Marvin going to make his exit... I am excited for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 18:51 PDT
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This chapter is truly epic. I can't tell you how this chapter seemed to make me wanna wet my pants. I was appalled at how you twisted the story, so that I'm confused again(it's a good thing!) You have truly devasted the world of mediaminer wtih this chapter and left true awe in your wake.I think I expressed how this chapter made me feel. Good job and well wishes to you and your family.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 18:21 PDT
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i'm glad that Evans no longer in trouble and i like that dieter is a good enough person to own up to his mistakes. Thanks for the early update can't wait for the next one.
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