| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2010 13:58 PST
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i think im in love with Evan....*sigh*
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 04:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Evan isn't violent like that so who was the mysterious person! Whatan intense chappie darlin' :)
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Title: o.O?
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 22:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck? HE MUST KNOW SOMETHING (about what happened to Valerie's left breast)!!! AHHHH NOOOO CLIFFHANGER!! Evan is so sweet. :) Er... protective. lol Keep up the awesome work. Soon! Update sooooon! ~Chaos~
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Title: PAAAARTYYYYYY!!!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 21:42 PST
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An update!!! I hope this means that you and your family are well. I must tell you that you're updates make my days!!! Whatever is going on in my life that sucks your writing never fails to make me feel better... I hope that is how you feel while writing. You truly are one of my favorite writers... bar none!!! (Sorry J.K. Rowling!!lol). Of course I'm looking forward to more but I also understand that it's difficult to write when there's crap around you. Good Luck!!!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 20:27 PST
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i'm thinking it had something to do with diet ... but that's just me. Anyways i'm happy you took the time to update, when you are really busy with your own life. hope things get better!praying for you.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 17:47 PST
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How come I get the feeling that it was someone from Valerie's past that got Evan so pissed? I have to wonder how long it'll take for him to notice her scratch too. It was just one of those days where nothing can really go right. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 16:35 PST
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DEFINITELY her Ex who used to get her high and pass her around, I wonder how V will take it when she finds out who it was and understand his reasons for it. I hope everything is going well with your family Sue DX I've been busy lately so I've net been on the forums to check for updates. But worry about real life and not about the dumb dumbs who demand updates on here My spam Filter says "BELT" lol.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 16:10 PST
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OOH!!! Oh dearie me oh my!!! What has Evan gotten into?!?! It has to be one of two things... It's either about V or Diet, I'm leaning more towards V, only since He's ridiculously protective of her. So this dude could be one of her exes. Most likely is! OOOH! Juuuicy stuff.(I haven't used 'juicy' in the longest time.See what your writing does to me? XD ) I am excited to see what happens!! This story just keeps getting better and better. AMAZING chapter! I hope things are getting better with you and your family! Don't worry about us readers here. We understand the importance of focusing on your family! So keep up the fantastic work and I hope things are well for you soon! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 13:07 PST
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Umm yea he definitely ran into one of V's cockfaced wannabe rockstar x boyfriends
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 12:59 PST
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short and sweet. I bet the guy was V's ex who use to beat her and stuff. can't wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 12:48 PST
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Hmm, I wonder who he beat up, maybe one of V's exes? But it seems a bit more personal than that :/ Once again, thank you for the update, Sue!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2010 15:00 PST
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This story is getting so good! I hope things for you are getting better and i cant wait for your update : )
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 04:44 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't outright ask for an update. I will gently encourage updates by mentioning how much I look forward to them and enjoy them and appreciate the time and effort you put into them, but I won't blatantly ask for one. :) I look forward to hearing how Bone "lost" Val in the crowd. Also I am curious as to what other mischief she got into while trolling the booths for the freebies. Poor Val, without the youkai resistance and metabolism, can't resist the fumes and is flying high. It will be interesting to see how much Evan takes advantage of this mood and situation. It will also be interesting to see how much of that tape makes it to air. The outtakes would be worth a fortune on the pirated black market. Sorry for poor writing here, my cat keeps pushing her head into my hand as I try to type. I am trying to catch typos.
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Title: thank you.
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 01:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;((( oh my god the one where she talks about her past is so sad. it reminded me of mine but worse enough to make me feel better if that makes any sense..im going in my last year in college studying to be a genetic engineer and not a lawyer but for the same reasons.. i dont think i need to say how much this chapter touched me. thanks. ~chaos~
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 11:18 PST
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I love stoned V she's funnier then drunk V! LOL I like that they seem to gravitate towards each other without realizing it. Evan however is going to gravitate some anger towards Bone when he gets back. Glad she was ok, he would've blown an ass gasket lol. Great chap!
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