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Title: Chapter 85: I think I just came.
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 13:25 PST
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kidding! But, goodgawlamighty! V comes on STRONG, huh? Yeah, I saw lots of yearning in the mix and felt for her and knew she was drunk off her arse and emotionally linked to Evan much more than she realizes (not understanding the bond of mates, notwithstanding...), but, V... You were WILD. I'm not knocking it on the passion and all--LOVED that--it's just, phew, V, you had ME sweating. Lots of POW hidden under those conservative clothes, huh? And I was so proud of Evan--such a gentleman up to the end but I knew it was overwhelming for him to keep denying his mate and he gave in at last. Thank goodness the sake kicked in to a nice snorefest to cool things off. And the "never-ending boner" thing? Man, I laughed as much as I felt for Evan and cringed. **shudders** Makes me glad to be female, for now... Done rambling. This, I can honestly say, I one of the hottest damn-near-mating scenes I've ever read! You lived up to your reputation, Sue! And, yeah, I rearead this chapter the next day, somewhat Hentai I may be... (Urk! Did I just say that? **shifty eyes**
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Title: Chapter 84 (the last one was for Chapter 83): Wow....V...
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 13:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOMG, honey! What a past. Made my throat clench a little. I'm just...that's...well...I guess it explains much. Damn, girl. I'm at a loss for words.
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Title: Chapter 8: V...you tickle me, sometimes!
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 13:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How'd I miss so many chapters, Sue? **scrathes head** Well, I loved watching V get more open with Evan in this chapter--even if by the help of el vino--did she REALLY suggest strip poker? Homegirl's FEELIN' it! I laugh a minute!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 03:58 PST
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Ooooh, I bet theres gonna be some family confrontation coming up huh!? V was from Louisiana wasnt she? Or was it Tennessee... Kentucky?? Bah! I cant remember! But, Im going to guess that it was her sisters journal thingy she was checking out that time in the hotel! *nodnod* Im looking forward to the opening of that can of worms xD. Nice update Sue!
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Title: ARGH!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 20:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been keeping up with th estory, just not reviews. Evan's whole predictament was hysterical but now what is V thinking? I can't stop thinking about what she COULD be thinking! Argh! It's a worse cliff-hanger then some of your other ones in it's own way! Can't Wait to find out what happens next! Keep it coming! Thank you! (Can you tell I'm excited? :p
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Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 19:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Baby, it's only a good story if it ends in the emergency room." Just had to review and tell you how much I loved that line. Okay, I'm done, you can go back to being awesome now. ^_^
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 15:32 PST
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OOh... is V getting closer to home? Or at least closer to the girl whose page she's been perusing as of late? Hm... questions questons. Well, we'll see soon enough, and maybe it'll be something juicy, something so...so...heartbreaking and mindnumbing that she'll need Evan's presence to even make it through the day. *Punches air in victory* But perhaps that is a bit of a stretch. LOL I can't wait to see what it is that's plaguing V but I know it'll be good no matter what it is! Love this story! Keep up the fantabulous work! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 12:30 PST
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It had to have been her sister's page she was looking at, now whether she's in the state where her sister is or her sister is going to see Even at a concert, or something like that, humm wonder where this is going. Loved this one can't wait for the next one, hope it's soon : D
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 06:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I really wanna know what's up. I think it has something to do with were she is or the fest but I guess I'll have to wait and see!
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Reviewed By: Fairia13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 00:56 PST
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Interestingly enough, they hold a Rocktober Fest here on Okinawa too, at a local Army post. It's supposed to be pretty wild, but I'd never heard the term until I arrived on island.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 00:23 PST
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So she was looking at a teenage looking profile, so she must be checking on her sister. I wonder if she's gonna sneak off to see her.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 23:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun dun dun. Methinks it's Marvin that poor Valerie is sweating about. Seriously, sometimes I forget that that man exists! And poor Evan! But I love this story! Thanks for the wonderful first 2010 update. It was superb! And my favorite quote from this chapter this time was: "Can't let anything happen to the future Mrs. Roka, right?" And of course, Evan's reply was absolutely adorable!!! I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 20:47 PST
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glad you put in another chapter, i don't think i could have waited till monday :P. Loved it and can't wait for the next one. hope you and your family had an awesome new year!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE STORY IS STILL AWSOME!!! PLZ CONTINUE UPDATING!!!!!!!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 10:54 PST
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this is kinda weird. are my reviews not getting in? or am i blocked? i don't know. i feel like i might've reviewed for the last two chapters... but i'm not sure i can find them anymore... if it ends up you don't get this one, then something's super wrong. anyways loved it as usual. short, but a nice clearing of V's head kind of chapter. ...that drink actually sounds good. peppermint... banana... strawberry... sounds like a really good smoothie. mm jamaba juice.
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