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Title: Chapter 78: I'm right with ya, V...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 08:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish I could peep at Evan, too. After the stripping in the last chapter and now this? I'm melting into a fangirlish puddle!!! And I NEVER thought Bas would have competition but the line has been said once again: `Has he killed anyone with that thing?' LOL! To be a fly... Um, you know I reread this chapter 3 times, right? **lascivious and quite unrepentant grin**
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Title: Chapter 76: Madison know V so well...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 07:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE reading of those two together. Evan being all jealous and pouty was too cute. Maddy's insights were very much what I've been assuming about V; about V and Marvin, too--a relationship as a band-aid that can be removed painlessly, but is so at home with V she sees no reason to remove it. I don't think of it as cold but the way V can cope and feel secure and, in a lot of ways, she does love the dude...just not a forever kinda deal. Okay...after all that mental probing, Evan strips! Puh-LEASE, Sue, draw a fanart of THAT! I'll give you a dollar and a case of Pocky and a cube of Diet Coke!!!! LOL! Wow, I haven't laughed myself sick in a minute...poor V (?).
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Title: Chapter 75: I may never stop laughing!!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 07:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I think the title says it all. For once, no 3-paragraph comment from me...it was just that damned funny! LOVED it! Ah, me...the trails of V in the throes of boredom/curiosity. Priceless!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 06:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. poor evan. he really likes valerie. but i loved the names you gave them in the marriage certificate. those are classic!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs* for you sweet - sorry your havig a bad day. I really loved to hate this chapter. It was awesome as always but made me very frustrated at Evan for not seeing how upset V was and then annoyed at v for saying something so hurtful. You really do know hopw to make people connect with your writing! Great job sweets.
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Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 01:37 PST
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Everything up to the end was... AWESOME! Hilarious stuff I have to say. Then it got all rough and I was sad... You just cant leave me sad Sue!!
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 22:10 PST
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Love it... and hate it at the same time. Poor Evan! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 22:01 PST
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Ya know if I never thought V was such a dumbass until NOW! I mean that was harsh she acts as though he has No feelings what so ever. I mean can you talk about stomping on poor ol' Evvie's heart? I mean if I was him I wouldn't have jack shyt to do with her for the rest of the trip. That was heartbreaking, Evan seemed so happy and I do mean happy! When has Evan been ginueinely happy? Sue I'm going to cry if you son't fix this for poor Evan! I'll cry and cry!
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Title: OMG! LOL!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 21:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOrry I haven't kept p in the review area - but I have been reading, and I'm glad I read this one at home! I was laughing histerically the whole time! I find it funny that getting this to us would make you feel better, when you're really doing us a favor! Poor V REALLY wants to get married! I tried not to think of Evan's face at the end though, I'm sure he was very hurt. But everything before that - Man can you write "funny"! Thank you Sue! As always, great work and looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 21:11 PST
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wow shes really mean hope she says sorry! hope the next one comes soon!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 20:55 PST
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wow v's a perv :P. loved it cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: Patricia Amber Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE CHAPTER WAS WAY TO FUNNY!!!!!! i laughed so loud!!! jejejeje I have to admit though, i kinda hated V on this chapter... i mean... evan is like an overgrown puppy. How can you stay mad at a puppy? it's humanly impossible! anyways... another great chapter for a fabulous story!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 20:32 PST
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BIIIIIIIITTCCHHH! She's a bitch! That was terrible. I'm sorry but I gotta say she doesn't deserve him. Period. I hope Evan finds sum1. Else I really really do. If he never said another word to her that still wudnt be enough. Evan should take sesshoumaru up on his offer for a different lawyer. And Valerie can go suck it with her little 'marget pickle'! Long live Evan. (It was her fault and she still treats him like shit. ugh!) P.s. can't wait for the next chapter sue :-D
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 20:22 PST
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awww that was a little harsh of V... I feel bad for Evan now. At first this was funny but I think V went to far, maybe...
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Title: Another Genius Chapter!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2009 19:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi There!!! Once again you have humored me so! You know I LOVE this fanfic right! I am SO glad you're working on it again! I waited so patiently, and read some of your other works while doing so... Ah... this chapter was TOO funny!! Val is slowly losing it! I honestly think she would have touched it if Evan didnt turn over! LMAO!! The way they think and interact with eachother is priceless! I just love their relationship! And I love how Val officially confirmed that Evan is her friend... I look forward to the next chap! Thanx and keep up the AWESOME work!! ^_^
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