| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 06:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! Prudence? Probably one of the greatest names on the planet earth. LOL! I loved how Valerie claimed Evan as her girlfriend in front of big john. one of my fav scenes. thanks for the amazing update!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 05:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY for more family meetings :)
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 17:51 PST
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long time no review.. yah.. lololol i know this refers to a few chapters ago but i totally 'lmao'ed at the "Evan's father's grandfather"? thing. xD Cain set them for life for a good few hundred years, did he? of course we all saw the V=Evan's dream girl thing, but the revelation is always nice and very cute as well. and i XD myself to death at "Bambi"... might as well have been "Barbie"... xDDDD much love more development the marriage thing was great... very Evan-angsty, loving that part. sulky Evan=totally irresistible Evan. loving the recent chapters!! patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Title: hair?
Reviewed By: onmyown [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 16:13 PST
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does Evan spend like an hour and a half every morning dying his hair? or is there a special futuristic device that does it for him?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 23:49 PST
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Wow, I come home from a fantastic birthday and find a chapter waiting to be read! AWESOME!! Aw poor Bambi lol, but she seems really cheerful! Oh I wish Valerie would see that the guy wasn't just all in her head but that he's right in front of her!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 21:00 PST
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LOL. One of my friends from high school is EXACTLY like Bambi. xD She's scatter brained, an air head, utterly lovable, and incredibly naive. Oh, and did I mention she's working on her doctorate towards becoming a chemical engineer? Haha, that's amazing, I'll have to show her this, she'd get a kick out of it for sure! I'm glad you've gotten back into the swing of things, I had been starting to wonder if the series was over there for a little while. But you've certainly proved me wrong, and I love reading your daily updates to the series! I can't wait to see how Valerie and Evan's relationship really continues, and it's definitely kept me guessing throughout the whole story so far! Keep it up, I'll be waiting to read more from you! :'D
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 20:50 PST
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Smart and sexy... Valerie's judging Bambi where she's practically in the same boat... I just hope she doesn't ruin the night by bringing up Marvin's research. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SO EXCITED U CONTINUED THIS STORY!!! ITS JUST SO GOOD!!! U ARE AN GREAT AUTHOR!!! KEEP COMING WITH THE UPDATEZ I LUV EVAN LOLZ!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 15:58 PST
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lol i love her mikes wife is just awesome. loved it cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 15:40 PST
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WHOA! Mike is married...to a busty bazillionaire. Niiice. She's crazy smart. I guess you really can't judge a book by its cover. Hm... well, I liked it. I'm glad Evan has realized that V is really his mate and now he'll fight for her. Where does Mickey-Lee come from? Is there something we don't know about Mike? LOL oh and Bambi Deere is HILARIOUS. laughed so hard at that. I'm one of those people who'd name their kids something because it's funny. LOLOL. Can't wait for the next chapter and more Evan and V-ness! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 15:32 PST
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Lol, Mickey-Lee xD. I'll REALLY laugh if Bambi is in fact a Deer youkai, or something like that...that would be ridiculous xD. So, Sesshoumaru's house is on the west side of the island right? Since it overlooks the sunsets? That means they live near me! *makes plans to search out the house and sneak onto the beach* Rofl xD. This was a fun chapter, I love that burying V in the sand bit xD. Totally something I would do! But I gotta say, Seems like our beaches dont ever actually smell "briny" unless its just stormed or something. It really doesnt have a smell, except for a slightly saltyness, when its a clear day...unless Im getting the definition of briny wrong, lol xDD. *goes to look it up* Ope, yeah I was rofl xD. For some reason I was thinking briny meant...fishy...The smell we get after it storms cause fish die on the reefs rofl xD. Oopsie! Man...now I wanna do a pic of V and Evan on the beach watching the sunset...thats gonna take some research!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 08:37 PST
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I think I have to go back to the beginning to review. Mickey-Lee is a youkai right? I don't remember what kind DX Or is he a deer like Bambi? (Coincidentally my niece and I were watching Bambi II *it just finished XD* while she went for her nap) Also, I don't remember what kind of youkai Bone is either D8 *must research* I'm so excited that things are really going to get moving between Evan and V. He can't let Merman have her! He doesn't deserve V! V belongs with Evan.... and little 'the hEvan' XD
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 07:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hahaha V is the girl... (happy dance Happy dance) I can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm dieing to know how Evan's going to hook V.
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Title: Chapter 80
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 06:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It figures that Evan would have to get that piece of information cleared up first. It's going to be great seeing a new side of Mike next chapter, and Bambi Deere is absolutely hilarious. Good stuff.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 06:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute! "mikey-lee". i love how the story is progressing. now, if only valerie can figure out that she needs to be with evan and not mar-gay. =] happy writing!
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