| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 12:00 PST
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Poor Evvie! Its a bit if a shane when he thinks its all his fault for everything that happened. I am soo sure that V is partially at fault for things that happened if not completely at fault. So I am wondering if we will get to know the real V behind the bravado and scary facade. Great Chap Sue! Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 10:18 PST
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Poor Evan. V's hell on earth for him isn't she? And V...at least now she's realized that Evan's not ALWAYS the culprit of their mishaps. That's good, But I'm with Evan. I hope that she snaps back to herself. Great chapter!Have a Happy New Year! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 03:45 PST
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Oh, I wonder how Valerie is gonna tell Marvin. I'm actually looking forward to seeing how her and Evan get back on their normal ground lol.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 00:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is going to be interesting to see them tap dance around each other before they realize that neither holds a grudge about what happened. For a while there I thought Evan was going to take her as his mate and then explain it to her afterward. I should have realized that you would not let that happen. This is going to be a very interesting twist in their relationship and I can't wait to see where it goes next. I loved the Christmas presents that you left here but sadly I could not read it until late so it was a wonderful belated present. I hope you had a great Christmas and have a wonderful New Year filled with Purity and light.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 23:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I must say first that i love you for posting early! Second poor Evan and third your Christmas letter made me cry! Enough of that! Dear God! I'm just wondering when the heck Valerie is going to get it through her head that she's in love with Evan and NOT Marvin Pinkle!!! (ick) She really will kill Evan if she doesn't a have a sudden and harsh epiphany! (Poor baby Evie suffering from blue balls...) :( Anywho, cant' wait for the next update! (Merry Christmas... be-lated and have a Happy New Year!)
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 16:10 PST
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Poor Evan! Hes not suffering that weird break down of the body thing because hes denying his mate is he? Its weird, cause Im knda torn between hoping he is and hoping he is xD. Of course, I dont want him to suffer that pain, but it would just add some... something to the story ya know? Cause I would imagine that could lead to him having a chat with Cain or something like that... some sort of resolving between him and his daddy! I hope and yet I dont xD. Cant wait for the next update Sue! *claps*
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 03:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gl;ad V's finally realising that it her fault too. It wasn't fair to blame evan for everything. great chappie darlin'
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2009 17:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh mama! Valerie's in big trouble now. Who cares about Marvin when sexy Evan is right there! Wow! Loved it! Kind of curious now with the texting Evan did. Hopefully it isn't anything bad. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2009 16:55 PST
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YAY!!! i was so happy when i saw you updated early : ) Im so glad V is taking responsiblity about what happened and start to see that Evan is different from all the other guys! can't wait for the next update : )
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 04:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome Christmas treat sweet :)
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Reviewed By: Patricia Amber Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2009 07:19 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my family officially think i'm crazy!! jajajaja i was laughing so loud and then i couldn't stop! It was a great long chapter and i love how you wrote it. Please update soon! i want marvin to disappear so Evan can be happy!
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 23:26 PST
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My mouth was hanging wide open while I was reading this. I was totally not expecting this...I'm still reeling as much as Evan. And i love you for it! :D Thanks for the chapter, happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 17:41 PST
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AH Sue you did not disappoint that long wait was definately worth this chapter...if V refuses to acknowledge what's between them after this...I might make up a fictional me and beat her ass! :) hehe I loved this chapter and honestly it was one of the best Christmas presents I received!!!
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Title: Cold shower
Reviewed By: loisen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 09:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I need a cold shower for myself. Thanks for the great xmas present. :-)
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 23:42 PST
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Ahaaaa~ I laughed so much this chapter! XD A great ending to a good Christmas Eve! Darn V and her engagement to Marvin! *shakes fist* If it werent for that ring on her finger!! *shakes fist more* Poor Evan, cant have his woman even when shes throwing herself at him! XD Merry Christmas Sue!
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