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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Nemesis Q Ravens [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 10:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I've been reading your stuff for a number of years now. I just wanted to let you know that I am always looking forward to your posts. As a busy college student, having something like your fanficion to look forward to is a blessing. Your stories are not only original, they are well written and so hard to not spend all day reading and rereading. So thanks. Keep up the wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 04:17 PST
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Ha! I knew it was him! Stupid little jerk. That Martel guy deserves way more than what he got! Go Evan! *roots and waves around signs* Ill say, I think its so cute, how Evan gets all up in arms when it comes to V xD. Theyre all like that, yeah, but its just... different with Evan, since he comes from such a... Mirokuish (woooorse) past xDD. The way he was being all gentle with her face when he saw the scratches made me coo x3. And that short talk with Cain! Ill admit, even I wasnt expecting that =|. I suspect there will be some father son relationship mending later on?? I hope so! xDD Cant wait for your next update Sue! Keep chill!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 00:17 PST
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I knew it!!! I knew it was an old boyfriend of V's lol. I understand that Evan doesn't want Valerie around Justin anymore, but paying him whatever he wants is a little over the top in my opinion. That punk would probably milk Evan dry if he could!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 06:33 PST
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hehe. 50 GINORMOUS big ones. xD huh. nice surprise. i really had forgotten all about the martel dude. :) aww family!cain/evan!! so cuuute!! can't wait for that to expand. waiting patiently!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 00:42 PST
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this made my night... errr really early morning. I love Evan. If he had gotten Justin's kneecaps like he was planning to he probably would have felt better after getting stopped XD (knee injuries worst thing ever!) O: maybe Gin is preggo!?
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 23:16 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES an update. I knew Val would understand, at least to some extent, why Evan beat up who he did when she found out the identity. Someplace deep inside Val she must be happy and surprised that someone cared enough to fight for her. She better get used to it because Evan and his whole family will fight for her it needed. I really liked the interaction between Caine and Evan. It is about time that Evan realizes that his father really does care for him and also the trouble that he caused his father over the years. It will be interesting to see how Evan deals with the consequences of his actions. Also how he deals with Bone "letting" Val get hurt. What will also be interesting to see will be Val's reaction to having someone in her life that will fight for her, defend her and protect her even if she says that she doesn't want it. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Evan gets his hands on Justin again to finish the lesson he started.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 20:34 PST
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he's so sweet! i love sensitive/caring Evan...and i love how he only comes out once in a while ;). i'm sure there's something going on with cain and gin - i guess we'll find out soon! ps - i hope all is well with you =)
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 17:03 PST
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HA! I KNEW IT! AHHHH! I LOVE Evan. He's so darn sweet! and I have to say that the part with his father was cute in a way, very heartfelt if I do say so myself. That was nice of him in a demented sort of way...beating on the guy that did his mate wrong... same thing almost any guy would do given the situation. Justin got waht he deserved... that scoundrel! Well, I do hope that things are getting better for you and your family. I sort of lost my password and username for the forum so I haven't been in to see any updates, however still hoping things are looking up!! Keep up the FANTASTIC work! I love it all and can't wait for the next installment! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 15:44 PST
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Well, Evan's successful, and he comes from old money... and then there's the inflation from the present to... whenever this story is taking place. Its still a lot, but its not as outrageous as what it seems like these days. I wouldn't be surprised if Cain ran a background check on Valerie some time and the Jerk's name came up at one point or another. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 13:15 PST
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i was wrong i thought he beat someone else up... oh well this was cool too. loved it thanks so much for updating can't wait for the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 10:37 PST
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yay! another chapter : ) I knew he beat the crap outta Justin! Its only a lil of what he deserves. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 09:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get why he did it but he's causing V a heck of a lot of trouble. Bad Evan *shakes a finger at him* :)
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
maddy/mikio? is it a guess, or is it already decided? I really wanted Maddy to end up with Gunnar.. they are just to hot;) great job as always Sue!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I suspect that Val will know why Evan got into a fight as soon as she finds out who it was he beat up? He is so protective of her that she will have to literally sit on him to keep him from going after the woman that scratched her. It was interesting to see Bone in action though Val is going to be surprised at how quickly his face heals. And Maddy was so funny throughout.."Let me get my steno pad..." roflmao On a personal note I hope everything is getting better for you and your family.
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2010 06:46 PST
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yay!! something happened!! lol i seriously love Bone now. seriously. he needs more lovin' and he's so cool with what he does. i think he'd make the awesomest guy-friend ever. xD 'cept maybe not for me cuz i'd just be some loser he couldn't shake off. good chapter-- and seeing Maddy reminds me of the next fic to come, which i cannot wait for: maddy/mikio and i LOVE Mikio♥. :)) waiting patiently!
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