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Title: Eheeheheheh!!!!!
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 03:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I held out for a few months and wouldn't let myself check for updates... and now, to celebrate me finishing a difficult bit of work, I finally checked!! Let me say, I am not disappointed. Infact, after reading CH95 I'm grinning and giggling over here and it is 5:11am. EEHEEHEEHEE!!! I love it! Looking back, there is no doubt that you have improved as a writer, and I think these are your deepest characters yet. The chapter was short and sooo sweet. It was just perfect! The density of character is amazing. I can't say enough about this chapter so I'm going to force myself to stop before I drag on.... but I can't convey my excitement enough. Just believe me when I say I am on 7th heaven, and this was just the PERFECT treat for me after 16 hours of work. WOOOOOT!!!! YOU GO GIRL!!!!! P.S. I happened to check your profile and saw links to your website. I looked at one and red some of your blog posts. I had no idea of your situation, and I admire you greatly for your strength. If I had a job right now, I would be donating to you. I've been a fan of your work for years, and it pains me to hear how much you and your family has been suffering. Stay strong, and remember the small things in life. One thing at a time. And thank you for continuing to give to us, your fans, even when your home life is so difficult. You are the most amazing person I know of. I sincerely hope you get everything you need, and at least enough to scrape by. Stay strong, and remember that your fans love and support you!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2010 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's so upto something! I can't wait to see the party!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2010 23:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry to hear about your troubles. As much as I love updates I can wait to see them when you can make them. I will pray for your situation. On to a lift for your spirits (I hope). I am not surprised that Evan asked for information about V's past or who he asked. I have been expecting it for a while. I am sure that there is more to this story because with you there always is some surprise twist. That is why I love your stuff. You don't do the common and predictable. The only predictable you do is that there will be the unexpected. I am sure that Evan will be dressed in a way to compliment V's costume and the party should be interesting especially with Sydnie there to check out V. I have suspicions about the accident that I am waiting to see if I am right about. I am sure that Evan will get off somehow since I don't see him coping with prison well. I look forward to seeing what happens next when you can get around to it.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2010 12:41 PDT
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another exam for me, another chapter from you. you're awesome sue! i'll pray for your son, i hope he gets better.
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Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2010 07:11 PDT
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no words. just smiles and grins and tears and butterflies at pure awesomeness. that is all :)
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Reviewed By: MirrorDarkling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2010 22:25 PDT
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I smiled the entire time. When Evan was first introduced in previous Purity stories, I fell in love, and Val is lucky to have somebody like him in her life. I simply cannot wait to see when she finally gets it through her head that he's the one she's meant to be with. Wonderful chapter, as always! As always, looking forward to the rest of your work. -Mirror
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2010 12:21 PDT
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V? with butterflies? 8D sweet. now we're getting somewhere. lol jk... i'm plenty good with the angst and fluff already present. ackpth, Evan angst is so cute!! so many chapters @-@ waiting patiently, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2010 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That man is truly precious, I hope to God that she doesn't let him go.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 23:11 PDT
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Sometimes the simplest things can become the best memories. Evan could have done half of what he did and it still would have been one of her most memorable birthdays. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter especially made me almost cry I was so happy. The story just speaks to me, you know? You bring the characters to life and I thank you for it.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 14:19 PDT
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SWEETEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE V and Evan! Evan's the sweetest guy I know and V is the luckiest girl to have him want her. I'm glad to see her finally opening up to him and considering letting herself fall for him, maybe even eventually love him. She doeserves someone who will treat her the way a girl of her caliber should be treated and trust me, Marvin is NOT that guy. He didn't even stay for her birthday. SAD. V needs to realize and take Evan while she has the change of heart. I can't wait for the next chapter! Their relationship is starting to pull my little hopeless romantic out of the box I put her in!! I love this, keep up the OUTSTANDING work!- MSMND
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the looks of it, V is finally fooling around with the thought of letting herself love Evan. Gradually, she's becoming aware of her feelings. Now all she needs to do is admit those feelings, even if it's only to herself for now. I can't WAIT to see how you bring about their confessions to each other, although Evan's actions make his feelings MORE than obvious, V isn't taking the hints very well. lol. This is, by far, my favorite story and i get bursts of excitement when i see a new chapter! you are soo talented and i'll see this story to the end, and beyond. Evan's my new dream guy ;P Thanks for creating him! Update as soon as you can, please! Thanks(: -Skye
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 10:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My my my... The way this story is going, I never want it to end!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 09:36 PDT
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i'm glad you updated ir was a nice to come home after an exam and hav this to read. can't what for the next one!
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Title: Chapter 99: Awwwww...mushiness goosebumps all over my body!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 13:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Three sentences: Merkin--HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Evan's so sweeeeeeet! V's eating UP the attention-squeeeee!!!! Okay, one more sentence: **smacks Marvin upside the head** Okay, one more...I LOURVED this chappie so MUCH, Sue--ju rawks!!
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