| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 15:54 PST
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Valerie just can't catch a break can she? Either drunk or high lol. However, Bone is going to get a talk of his lifetime when he sees Evan isn't he? Thanks for the update, Sue; I hope things start to look up for you and your family soon!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 04:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She is rather funny and endearing when high :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:12 PST
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She'd better not have to go in for a drug test when she gets back to NYC. I just have to wonder what she'll think when she sobers up and realizes what happened... She may never leave the hotel room again. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 19:22 PST
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I laughed, 15 to 20 degrees? Celsius or Fahrenheit? I'd be walking outside in a t-shirt, granted I'm from Canada, so that's not cold to me. High V made me laugh, it amuses me how Evan puts up with her when she's drunk and now when she's high…well I wave a science exam in less then 10 hours so I should start my study notes…anyway love the chapter, as always, can't wait for the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 19:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, First off I do hope things with you are getting somewhat better. I read what happened on the blog and that's just horrible! I hope nothing serious happens! I'm sorry that you were a victim in someone's vendetta. It really sucks to have that happen,especially to someone as nice as you. As for the chapter Amazing. You never cease to amaze me with all the wonderful things you come up with. I feel bad for Bone. He's always getting the short end of the stick nowadays. And V never seems to get into anything but trouble, so that doesnt surpsise me. I will not be one of those people who insensitively push you for an update, however I will tell you that I am looking forward to another one!This story makes me smile and I hope that before you write the next chapter you are able to genuinely smile too. So, do cheer up and persevere! I know that something good will come for you. Keep up the fantastic work! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 16:50 PST
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I am totally addicted to this story, although I haven't been reviewing....hope things are getting less crazy. Really appreciate each and every update.
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Title: oops... typo >_
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 14:04 PST
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sometimes my hand and head are out of synch... what I MEANT was "And I'm sorry and I hope that your family will be alright!" oops... that was confusing and could be misinterpreted!
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Title: WOOHOO
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 21:29 PST
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You made my day!!! :D Once again another wonderful chapter!! And I'm sorry that your family will be alright! (I hope that those stupid people bothering your family choke in their sleep... well not really, but close enough).
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 21:16 PST
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Aww poor Evan, so Dieter is the reason he agreed 'cause things just aren't the same? That's sad :( I hope there's something Valerie can do to make Evan better; but I'm also excited to see Madison!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 20:59 PST
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Hmmm, I wonder what it is Evan has to do... curious! Im sorry to hear about whats going on with you and your family right now Sue. That really bites, and that woman really needs a kick in the pants *shakes fist*! Im sure that if there is a parent somewhere that should get their kids taken from them for their own good, it is definitely NOT you! I may not know you personally or anything, but I can tell that before anything else, you are a mom, and a damn good one! I hope, with all my heart, that things work out for you (and I hope that lady gets hit by a stray recliner). Ill be looking forward to your next update, when you're up to making one. Take your time girl, and dont pay attention to what them impatient pests say!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I AM SO HAPPY U ARE UPDATING NOW.....THIS STORY JUSTS GET'S BETTER AND BETTER......I LUV EVAN!!!!! I HOPE WHEN THIS IS FINISH THERE WILL BE A PURITY 10.....I THINK YOU ARE AN AWSOME AUTHOR!!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 05:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel really bad for evan he misses diet so much. I wonder what he's got planned though....
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 22:51 PST
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Evan can't be innocent and purely 'good'. His reputation and general attitude won't allow it. That's why its so hard that he's willingly holing himself up in the hotel. Ironic that Valerie will most likely be the reason he sneaks out of the hotel. Or more like she sneaks out to see more of the fest, to have Evan follow and be her conscience/guardian angel. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 19:12 PST
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I'm happy you updated, especially with all that's going on right now for you, shows how dedicated you are to us! I'd love to help with the money, however, I'm fifteen and don't have money to give, or a way to give it, but I'll pray for you!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 18:22 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He did agree way to easily and I join Val in being suspicious. I know he is missing Dieter but he is up to something and I am very curious as to what. I am sorry to hear about your roof and the possibilities of something happening to your kids. Someone should tell that woman that since she got a restraining order her estranged husband cannot come to fix whatever or he could be arrested. If he was arrested then he would never be available to fix anything again.
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