| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 22:16 PST
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Those jerks! I hope Evan really does track em down and beat the hell outta them *angry face*. Stupid fools, doin stuff like that to V... I bet drunk V isnt gonna give up on Poker though! Shes gonna end up baring something isnt she? XD Silly Evan! Youre gonna regret makin her lose! (Then again, maybe he wont, rofl)
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 21:46 PST
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Hm, I swear Evan and V had that talk about her accent and where she came from like...two times before already XD. Yay drunk V! Shes funny xD Cant wait to see what happens next! Also, I cant wait for the Christmas special! Im sure itll be another one for the books!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 21:45 PST
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Ah, so we have more information about Valerie and her musician boyfriends. Well, looks like Evan is going searching for some punching bags huh? Lol....uh oh, how far will Evan get her undressed?
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 21:28 PST
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Oh thank you for this extra chapter Sue! Poor V! I hope Evan has a good ass plan for Valerie! He has a lot of work ahead of him. Thanks again for the early chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 21:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The holiday treats right on coming. Now I am very interested in seeing how close they get to being naked. I know Evan only has his pants left but the tide is turning against Val and she might end up completely nekkid and drunk. That would probably humiliate her the next day when she realizes what she did, or maybe not. She seems to have a definite wild streak to her character. I feel sorry for her about the ex-boyfriends. I have a feeling the next time Evan runs into Jass at an awards show Jass is going to end up with some serious hurt going on. And if Evan ever finds Duff someone is going to have to hide a body. Now poor Evan is starting to realize what he has to overcome to get Val to take him seriously he is going to have to show Val that he can be serious. The trial might be a good opportunity for that to happen. I know you have it all planned out but the more I read the curiouser and curiouser I get. Keep up the great work I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 20:34 PST
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wow! blew my mind!!!!!! poor valerie. her line of ex-boyfriends suck! i hope she sees that "evaann" is the right one. i love it!! thanks so much for the update!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy thanksgiving Sue! Great chapter, I'm really curious to see what trouble V and Evan get into.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 15:39 PST
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V likes her liquor doesnt she? Haha that's funny. I liked this chapter it was cute, and a welcome surprise! I understand your excitement. My sister is coming to visit me this holiday too and I can't wait! I hope the two of you have fun! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 15:13 PST
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hahaha i love the southern in V its funny, shes also an awesome drunk the next chapter is gonna be funny. anyway loved this one and can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the early Thanksgiving treat, it is better than pumpkin pie. Enjoy your Thanksgiving and your visit, I hope you have fun. I can see Evan having all kinds of fun egging Val on to do crazy things and pumping her for info about her past. If they start playing strip poker Evan will stop letting Val win until Val is at least partly stripped and then she could distract him and start to win again. I can't wait to see what devilry you have planned for them. It was nice to see Mike being human after his mate shows up. But Val always being cold worries me, I hope she isn't sick with something and that she is just one of those people with lower internal thermostats. More tidbits from Val's past are always good to see but you have just managed to whet my appetite for more. I am sure that was your intention you evil plotter. lol. See you when we see you and I look forward to seeing what you dream up for this Christmas but it will be hard to beat some of your past contributions.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 13:23 PST
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Uh oh, why do I have a feeling Valerie is gonna regret whatever happens while drinking the sake? Strip poker? Evan might not go so easy on her lol.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 12:38 PST
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Why do I have the feeling that Evan is going to win this game? I mean he proved the better player in all the other card games he played with Valerie. Who's to say that he isnt just humoring her? We'll find out in the next chapter! Thanks for the chapte Sue and cant wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 08:25 PST
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bah ha! strip poker. So now Evan should stop letting V win ;D As always a good chapter, though I still wonder what V is really hiding about herself... why she cant see her family etc....
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 06:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. The next chapter is going to be very interesting. Can't wait!!!
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Title: Another great Chap!!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!! As always another great chapter! I honestly think Evan is starting to wear V down... strip poker huh? lol, tho the alcohol isnt helping... well, they can blame it on that if anything happens right? I look forward to your next chapter, as well as the oneshot! keep up the good work and have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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