| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 05:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitly an interesting evening! I'm glad that Mike does unwind on occasion though :)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 05:00 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bambi Deere??!! Hee hee hee.....(pause to stop laughing and wipe tears from eyes) I assume she is a deer youkai too. She seems a perfect match for Mike. She lightens him while she is smart enough to challenge him. Sort of a reverse of Val and Evan, he lightens her and is smart enough to challenge her. While Val grounds Evan and will, hopefully, keep him from doing anything too stupid. I love seeing them on tour but I am also looking forward to finishing the tour and seeing what surprises you have planned for us during the trial.
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Title: LOVEEEE !!!
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 23:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HE KNOWS!! HE KNOWS!!! WE KNOW!!! AHHHHH! So much emotion! Chapters 78 and 79 are AMAZING! I love it. Poor Evan, I wanted to cry when V yelled at him. All his sadness... T_T. But really, it was...phenomenal. I'm like... in love! You made my weekend one of the best I've had in a while! Thank you. You know how I feel about your work so, I'm just going to repeat that I loved it. :D -MSMND
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 22:51 PST
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I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please... more sweetness... if that's possible.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 21:54 PST
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There are so few times when life gives you a second chance. I wonder if Valerie thinks about that night as well in fondness. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: YEah! Finally!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this yesterday, and it so stuck with me I had to review it today! Yes, 79 chapters later - the prologue comes to fruition! It's been fun courting, but it's game on now! I think with as much left as we have to cover, we are in for a long fun ride even still! Now the readers can finally say, "he finally knows!" and we get to see what Evan is really made of now. Thanks for the quick chapters, and as always, looking forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: onmyown [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 19:28 PST
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aha, yes! finally, the pieces come together. amazing chapter as always :D
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 16:17 PST
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Finally, we move a little closer.
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Reviewed By: inuslilhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your stories are amazing. your creativity, passion, and imagination really shows through with each installment. how you manage to fit these wonders in with all the stresses of daily living and all the messes that life brings are yet again amazing. Thank you so much for bringing these characters to us, and letting us live their lives through your imagination.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 14:43 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad Val apologized to Evan about what she said even if he didn't totally believe her. I knew she was the one from the beginning but you so skillfully wrote enough that I started to doubt it. Evan is good for Val in that he brings the playful side of her out that we only get glimpses of when she is drunk. Hopefully she will start letting it out more as she spends more time with Evan. And Val is good for Evan since he will be serious for her and he will finally have someone to protect. He is so determined to win her but he will have to let her see the softer side that he hides so much before she will accept him I think. You do create great pairings that compliment each other well as good couples that have lasting relationships in real life do. I have to admit I am very curious as to what the comment about the "fifth time" means and when Evan is going to remember it and ask about the significance of that. Val's past is intriguing me more and more as we get glimpses. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 79 (see, I CAN count sometimes! LOL!): That slight tremor you just felt was the sound of me fainting...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Had to get tha out. The secret's out and I'm just too elated to elaborate forever as usual. Lemme justs say that as much of a challenge as I know Evan has ahead of him, it made my MILLENIUM to see that V is INDEED "the one" from the never-forgotten one-night stand. Loved the fruit tossing and catching scene, of course--something about that dog youkai reflex to catch grub tickles me! But, oh, I'm one ecstatic fools grinning proadly here! After one painful and tiring day in one depressing week, GAWD this chapter made my day! So, thank you, Sue! **bops left to right to the upbeat version of the Prologue song I made up**
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 07:07 PST
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o yay!!!!! now we're getting somewhere. mystery solved even though i already knew the answer!! happy happy joy joy. evan when u marry V lets work on her personality a lil bit...just a smidget really. ooooh oooooh! is he gonna tell her who she is to him?! i neeeed this story to be completed i must know! lol
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 22:03 PST
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OOOOOOH, I've been waiting for this moment!!! Evan figured it out! I wonder when Val will remember. Now I'm going to be brainstorming what's gonna happen next....thanks for another amazing chapter.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 21:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh! These two are so hopeless! I'm addicted to them though. They are so much different than the other purity couples. CLAIM YOUR MATE EVAN!! Take a hint from Ryo! lmao
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 20:39 PST
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awww he found his girl thats good. cant wait for the next one!
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