| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 18:52 PDT
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lololol that sounds like so much fun. :D i played with sparklers the other night... very fun. lots of harry potter impersonations. ("luminos!" "ack! don't point that thing at me! you're going to set my eyebrows on fire or something") very, very fun... fun chapter. :) even though it's of no importance, i always wonder.. what did she do to get Mike away.... hmm... weeee Patiently waiting,your Purity♥er,~FF7I
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 18:24 PDT
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"No, you'll just have to deal with perfume-y shit," Lol, you write the best stuff Sue xDD. I so totally knew they were gonna end up shooting those fire works off the bus roof! I said to myself in the beginning "Theyre gonna end up shooting aerials off the bus arent they!" and I was right! XDD That so sounds like a fun time...and it was totally sweet too! The way V just couldnt help getting into it, all actin like a kid and everything, shes so perfect for Evan! XD And now I think I finally know what V meant back in that chapter where she talked the tiniest bit about her parents "They lost me" I think she said...She was taken from her parents and put in a foster home wasnt she? And that just...totally messed her up somehow and she turned into one of them rebellious teens and got shuffled from home to home I bet! Mm mm mmmmmm, the plot thickens!
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Reviewed By: BlkbltVette [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 16:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't wait for the next chapter. Sue, I simultaneously love and hate your writing. It's so good, but it ends up making it that much harder to wait for the next chapter. It really is addicting.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahah I loved this chapter, that's a great way to have fun. I'm really curious to see what happened next and if V finally opens up about her past.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 14:12 PDT
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Aw. That was cute! Fireworks and hot rock goddesses! haha What more can Zel Roka want? :] I'm glad they're getting closer and now they're holding hands!!! That's ALWAYS a plus. Well, keep up the wonderful work. I wonder when Evan's going to piece together all of V's reactions when it comes to different things and gain some insight on her real past. Can't wait for the next installment! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 12:25 PDT
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Sometimes Valerie's reactions to what Evan says or what he writes makes me so curious as to what happened in her past. Thank you for this new chapter Sue and cant wait till the next one come out!!!
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 11:16 PDT
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So hopefully this is a lead in to Valerie's story. I know she was placed in foster care, which is why she was so offended, but why, and for how long, and what happened while she was there? Ugh! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 05:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I'm wondering why it bothere V so much - but I think I have some ideas. Awesome fireworks too :)
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 04:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with your stories. I've read all of your Purity stories..and I loved them all. I can't wait to read upcoming chapters of this story. I love reading about Zel..what a charmer! Keep up the amazing work! woot woot:D
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been super busy. I LOVED the last chapter. And I'm dieing to know more of V's story.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 00:04 PDT
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Heh, that was cool that Valerie knows at least some of the basics, and now we know that she has music senses too! Once again though, I wonder just what happened that she practically treats herself like an orphan. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more I see of Evan the more he is growing on me, before this story started I felt a little sorry for him but I also thought, like Bas, that he needed to grow up. After this story started, in the first few chapters I really didn't like him, but as I said before he is starting to grow on me. I had faith that you would end up making me like him and that faith is being upheld. I really liked the peeks we have been given of the inner Evan and Val's past though I can't wait to see more. I feel that Evan will appreciate his family more after he learns about Val's family though he might not fully appreciate his father until he is one himself. Keep up the great work and keep the stories coming.
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 20:40 PDT
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Awww, I really liked this chapter. The playful banter made me laugh, and the serious moment was touching. Ive been hopeing for the longest time that Valerie would do something like that, sing something, or play an instrument. I'm so glad you put that in there xD. It like it connects her and Evan a lil bit. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 17:08 PDT
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So some of V's history? Its kind of a shame that she writes Evan off just like everyone else, though I see his actual nature getting to her. Seeing the real man behind the persona that is Zel Roka. And poor Evan he's grasping on to anything V throws his way just to get to know her. He doesn't know much about what makes her her. I love that V is opening her eyes to him though and this tour is EXACTLY what they need. Great chap!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 15:28 PDT
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Ah!! V's history is killing me. I'm glad we're getting closer and closer to the big reveal but I wanna know! I'm also glad that she's learning more about Evan as they travel. You know, I have to say that everytime I read a chapter, I learn something new, when it comes to music of course. I have officially downloaded every song you've used so far and put it on my ipod under my 'Purity 9' playlist. So whenever I read a chapter I listen to the song. It's an amazing experience. Well KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL JOB! and keep on picking that AMAZING music!
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