| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 06:11 PDT
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Ball on a table? Wasn't that the one cain got qa pissy for because Gin was raving over it. The one by Pierre L'amont? Hahaha that's so funny.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 05:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say I like the way V thinks. I'd be pretty pissed at Mike too even though Evan was being an ass. I hope she likes the painting :)
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 05:21 PDT
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GAH!!! with all of your updates its like Christmas came early this year! ^^ I love V's dynamic in this chapter and honestly I wish she would give mike a run for his money because he was a jerk! well...maybe not but he was always annoyed by diet right? so how could he of all people miss diet:? great chapter sue!
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 00:46 PDT
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Im so glad your back !!!!!! sorry its taken so long to get a review written but its good to see you again along with Zel, V and the rest. I would so not want to be Mike right now hehe. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 16:42 PDT
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HAHA! Too Cute! "The Black Devil"...Violca is too funny. I like this. It was a nice, humorous chapter, considering such daunting topics are on their way later on in the story. Well Keep up the great writing. I can't wait to read more! -MSMND
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 07:00 PDT
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it's nice to settle down during a hectic week and read some of your fanfiction... :) i have an idea of what happened, but i'll just wait until it's explained. oh Cain... poor guy. :P we're getting closer to the possible mini-tour! and a tiny step towards the Evan case... =] waiting patiently, your faithful Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 23:13 PDT
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I love V's 'fear' of Evan's dogs. The dogs obviously love her and she starts hyperventilating when she sees them XD I never understood how some kids were afraid of dogs growing up .___. they only want to love you XD
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 21:36 PDT
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Hmmm...did Violca try to show Cain her "appreciation" now? Rofl xDD. Man, now I really wanna know what happened between Cain and Evan...I mean, something musta right? They seemed to have a fine relationship when he was a kid...what the heck happened!? xD Loved the update, made me laugh! PS: I love that song by Pink, the video is hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 21:34 PDT
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So I have an idea that Violca did something disturbing to Cain and Gin walked in. So the question is whether or not Evan will "pull it out his a**" when he finds out he's wrong. I do have a question Sue, will Evan get to the heart of his extreme dislike for Cain in Subterfuge? And if so will it be resolved, will we see a happier relationship between those two? I've always felt bad that they had such a harsh relationship, especially since Cain seemed like such a great dad, hot but great lol.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 19:21 PDT
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I wanna know what Violca did!! I think she did something sexual to Cain and Gin walked in on it and that's why she left and that's also why Cain won't talk about it, he's to embarrassed. Anyway love it as always! Can't wait for the next one!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 18:38 PDT
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Well that was entirely too amusing... Cain... poor Gin! Anyway wonderful as always... God I feel like a broken record!! Can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 10:51 PDT
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I think oblivion is right :) I hope v buys a pretty dresss for herself!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 10:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. valerie is such a sucker for evan. i love them! thanks for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 06:44 PDT
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O god Violca did or tried to do something sexual with Cain didn't she? And poor Gin..oh boy....I can only imagine.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 05:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that match up might not tgo so well. Fingers crossed Maddy can sort Violca out :)
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