| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 09:52 PDT
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so when are they going to learn that they met in college and that they were always destined to love each other? When is he going to sing the song he wrote for her on that night so she can have her revelation? :( poor evan
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Title: OOPSIE--meant chapter 57
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 07:56 PDT
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my bad, Sue...
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Title: Chapter 56 (Dude, I'm behind...): Decisions, decisions...and doubts...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 07:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V, V, V...indecision sucks, huh? With a past like hers, I can see why she so resists finding trying to find anything appealing about Evan--anything with staying power; but even she has to see, has to be starting to see, how uneven the relationship with Marvin and herself is. She doesn't like her job, she's lonely (but doesn't want to admit it--hell, the biggest jolts to her system, outside of hanging out with Maddie when she can, is "babysitting" Evan and observing his "way out there" associates), and her life's being balanced out with a, well, let's face it, rather hit-or-miss relationship with a pretty insecure-therefore-guaranteed-to-stay boyfriend. Oh, wait...FIANCE. Damn, no wonder you wanna cry...repressed feelings about Evan notwithstanding...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they can both realise that there doing nothing but hurting each other the way there going. IT's really sad to see them both so un happy.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 23:06 PDT
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"Mighty Morphin Midget Merrywether" *heart* I see development! LOVE DEVELOPMENT! NOW JUST CLUE IN ON IT V DAMNIT DX
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 21:43 PDT
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so, i dunno if i've told you this before, but this is one of my favorite stories...actually, pretty much all of you stories are favorites of mine. lol. but aww! poor evan! i just wanted to hurt V! and oh my gosh..."Mighty Morphin Midget Merrywhether"...that KILLED me! i laughed so hard! and i can't wait until they get together! if V would just stop being stupid and give in! lol. great writing sue, you're a real talent(: can't wait until the next update!
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Title: Wonderment
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Valerie is going to turn out to be the girl from the beginning, isn't she? I just know it. OOO, I can't wait for them to get busy so that they can figure it out, and also, for Evan to reveal what he really is, I wonder how V's logical lawyer's mind is going to process that? I am SOOOO excited.
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 20:57 PDT
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"he'd very nearly lost his temper since he did want her to wear something but he didn't appreciate that he was starting to sound like some uptight old bastard . . . or like Cain . . ." Ahahaaaaaa that part made me laugh xDD. Evan, telling a naked girl to put a damn bathing suit on like an uptight old guy. That was good. But poor Evan! Suffering a heartache he can hardly do anything about! T___T At that moment I just want to hug him! T____________T But it was a great update, despite making me sad! xDD Cant wait for the next one Sue! You must be butter cause youre on a roll! xD /corny
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 18:16 PDT
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great chapter! i'm so happy! and i guessed right on the whereabouts of the contract, but the content of the contract definitely caught me off guard! great job!!!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 17:46 PDT
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i really, really wanna know where the contract is!! good chapter hope you update soon
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 16:56 PDT
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um... where it was? @-@ unsure of how to take that. oh well, yays, they finally got to see each other again! marvin's a sweet guy, but for girls like valerie, long-distant relationships don't work too well. actually, they don't really work for anyone. loved the chapter! patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What did evan do now? Haha He's always getting himself into SERIOUS trouble. But this takes the cake. A gypsy girl?! and now I'm wondering...where exactly is this.... "contract". *shudders* My mind goes a number of different places. anyway, Great chapter! Can't wait for them to get together and be a big happy family! (Maybe without the gyspy girl XD ) -MSMND
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:15 PDT
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Ha! I knew it! Man, the kinda messes Evan gets himself into, really *shakes head*. Poor V xD. Heres hopin she can get him outta this one! Excellent update Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:02 PDT
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Why does Evan always dig himself in a bigger whole. I feel bad for him lol.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:26 PDT
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lol the contract is going to be like, tattooed on the girls boobs or something along those lines XD what an interesting way of fortune telling... XD totally Evan
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