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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 › » ] | Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 12:44 PDT
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aw Val... don't know why but those were the first words i had to type. lots of Val angst in the past couple chapters. lol Marvin's kinda cute... but as far as relationships go for the guy i can't imagine a woman who'd fit with him. Val's a lot like some prized doll Marvin takes off the shelf once in awhile to make himself feel better, where he pulls the string and hears her automated pep-talk words. at least, that's how i see it... and i'm starting to think it's gypsy girl. i almost forgot about her until i read another person's review. she obviously has some kind of significance... slow progression, but we're getting towards Val and Roka's next meeting. nice chapter! patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 20:29 PDT
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Umm... that 'thing' sounds like a ghost from his reckless past. A fling during a foreign tour that has now turned stalker, huh? Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: Ch-chapter 56: Good Googa Mooga...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 12:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit, Sue! You just started me smoking again! Shame one you! LOL! Good GAWD, that wet dream was intense. Only, Evan... Anywho, HAD to comment on that dream sequence after I went to the bathroom to, um...use it. "You've got some in your hair"-HAH! Pricelessssssss! Moving right along... I'm not just a hentai; I'm a detailed, if not random-as-hell, commenter--lemme prove it: First of all, I have a new outlook on Bitches-homegirl's hilarious! I though she was eccentric before but her teasing of Evan had me emitting helpless barks of laughter…couple her with Madison and…well, I choked on a grapeskin in mid-chuckle/giggle/snort/howl/guffaw. Okay, there's not gonna be much deep probing to this comment, I guess, Sue. This entire chapter had me in fits of laughter. Only thing to squelch the bubbles of humor was "The Mystery guest". Yeah, I'm intrigued. Is she a stalker, a past lover, a mother of one of the kids he tutors in music at the rec center, a Psychic? Whoever she is, I'm curious…okay, then I laughed some more. Couldn't help it. You do comedy justice, woman! Love, love, LOVEd this chappie! Wh00t!
| Title: Chapter 55: Oh, Val...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I read snippets of her past, her attatchment to Marvin rings so true. In her own way, she does love him. How could she not? He's calm, unassuming, doesn't smother ('cause he's 92% of the time at an out-of-town-health seminar or some such...)...yeah, even with the distance, the connection is there. Something for her to honestly say, no matter how lightwieght the relationship may be in intensity, passion or reverence, "He's mine and he's good and he's not gonna leave me". Sometimes, Sue, I just wanna cuddle your characters, V, prickly pear though she may try to be, is one of them. Very in-depth chapter. Learned a lot about V and loved it! Off the chapter 56! (My bad about the slip in the forum--won't happen again)
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 08:18 PDT
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hmm... stalker? or creepy ex-girlfriend turned into stalker? probably most likely the former, huh... it's too early in the morning so i can't figure out her nationality... awesome that you updated, hugs! :) way to keep me guessing. not much happening, but we're getting there! aah i really want to know what happened- right now i'm guessing it involved him being a youkai and all or something. waiting patiently, your Purity♥, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 20:44 PDT
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Oh no, whos this little hussy throwing herself all over Evan? I bet its that gypsie girl! Nah, I dunno xD. I wonder if there will be fireworks in the future....not the good kind though xD. Its been a while since weve seen a hissy Valerie hasnt it? Great update Sue! Evan having a wet dream, rofl, that cracks me up!
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the best! made my day! i hope everything has been going great for you. you've got so much talent i wish you the best of luck!
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 17:33 PDT
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yeah you updated again i'm so happy!!! can't wait for the next one, hope it's soon!!!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 16:24 PDT
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So, some chick finally found Evan? Wonder who she is!
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 15:06 PDT
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!!!! I also missed Evan and V! DX It bothers me; does anyone else think that Mr. Pinkle might be cheating on V O: maybe.... This new secret girl is probably going to cause more trouble between Evan and V. god damn they just need to get over it and realize that they have to be together DX
| Title: UR AWSOME!
Reviewed By: Patricia Amber Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!! I missed Evan and V a LOT. I want V to forgive him, and to see the real him. She won't be able to deny him after that... jeje
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sings* "I see trouble ahead...." So who is the mysterious guest. we all know whe's gionna cause Evan and V a whole lotta strife. :) Great chappie darlin' :)
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its awsome, little short, but awsome; anyways can wait for the next one, hope it comes soon
| Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 14:16 PDT
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I am so glad you've posted another chapter, and was wondering if you still needed donations? If so, how do I go about doing that?
| Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe. poor Val, now I can see why she's with Marvin. Evan needs to find a way to prove his unyielding love to her.
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