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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 › » ] | Reviewed By: Patricia Amber Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 10:32 PDT
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let's start by saying that you're the best!!! thank you for updating again! I'm dying to know about Valerie's past... I know you gave us a peek a few chapters back but i'm still so curious. What could be so horrible?? I'm also holding my breath till she dumps Marvin on his ass. Or maybe he found a rich old lady that will fund his investigation if he becomes her lover? jajajajaja unlikely i know... anyways... your story so you're the boss. Once again thank you so much for updating. Please keep it up
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
clearly well written. i swear i could feel evan's sadness through my laptop screen. i hope for the best for evan! and valerie should hurry up and realize that marvin is a such a waste of time. lol! thanks for the updates!!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was lovely darlin' it was softer more personal and yet infinitly sad. They are both hurting but for different reasons.
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 19:30 PDT
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Ah, so close (#901)! Mike better watch his backside for a while, 'cause Valerie's likely going to be on the lookout for his blood. She may be appeased for the short term, but there's a determination that just won't let things be at times. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 12:01 PDT
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Wow, Val's really warming up to Evan huh? I wonder when she will realize it. =p
| Title: Chapter 63: I'm gonna beat up Mike!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 10:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He hit my baby!!!!!!!! **sniff** And, V, you feel my pain, don'tcha?!!! I totally feel V on her final thought. But, oh, the "he hit my baby!!" vibe I got off of V when she saw his mouth--though, honestly, V, that was a hardcore way of getting it open...eh, whatever works--made me go "yep, things are moving along rather smoothly, friendship-wise between these two. Yeah, Evan can be jerkish but I think Cain'd rip a hole in Mike if he found out he his his son...and Evan wouldn't know how to take that and would get all defensive as to give Cain to leeway into regular father/son relations. Ah, the drama I concoct in my head....
| Title: Chapter 62: Violca! What'd you DO? LOL!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 10:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The mind races...homegirl's quite a handful, huh? What DID she do? And what's up with Cain and Gin? And, yes, I was SO looking forward to reading about the animostity Evan has with Cain but, alas, 'tis a tale to be read later. And when V made that about face and hoisted Violca on Maddy, I had to giggle. V's...not very touchy feely, huh? Well, except with hitting and nudging and all around pestering Evan. **says in a singsong voice** V knows she likes him...she wants to kiss him...then off and pop him... I'm silly. And, yeah, I'm done! Nice read, this one!
| Title: Chapter 61: I miss Diet!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 10:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But, I was glad to get an update on Miss and Daniel. Glad they're doing well. I never was totally in the know as to the specific bond between mates where Dieter and Miss were concerned. So, what, is Evan like Daniel's godfather/surrogate big bro? Curious. And, yes, I smiled at "pookie-pooh"--Evan continues to tickle me. GAWD, to see a fanart of V in that jumpsuit and scarf-filled codpiece--HILAROUS thought! This chapter gave me some much-needed/appreciated laughs, Sue. Well, outside of the slight sniffles I suffered in the beginning. **waves a lit Bic in memory of Diet, Bass Player to Zel Roka**
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 06:19 PDT
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love! cant wait fir the next one!
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 21:22 PDT
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DIETER!!! :[ AW! I miss him! Poor Evan! I completely forgot that Mike was like Evan. Threw me for a bit of a loop. Oh! I have a quick question... How long is Evan's hair now? I went back in previous chapters, trying to estimate his hair lenght now but I can't seem to figure it out. But yes. AWESOME chapter!! I'm EXCITED! They're getting closer!!
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 19:42 PDT
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Ive been meaning to ask for a while, but I keep forgetting. How do you pronounce Dieter exactly? Ive been thinking it was 'Dee-ter' all this time, but I wanna know for sure xD. And whats with the ball on the table painting?? I dont get it! Is it really just a ball on a table!? Well, that was a bittersweet update d(^^)b keep em comin!
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Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 18:23 PDT
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lol i love her first assumption. xD he's corrupted her, that Evan... judging from where the conversation was headed, i want to say he's going to show her something Diet drew, but when i think ball on a table, that art thing that french-art-dude-that-Gin-idolized-so-much made. or was it Cain...? anyway, way to step up the action-- Evan finally cracks, as does Mike (lol go Mikey). um i forget... did we already establish what kind of youkai Mike was? for some reason i think skunk. no idea why. can you clarify? (whoa. rhyme.) also, exactly how old is Evan right now? i know what he's supposed to look like to human people, but i don't remember anyone mentioning his actual age... oh and we finally get to hear from Evan's youkai side cuz i feel like we haven't heard from him in awhile. much Evan/Diet angst in these past few chapters. will it continue? patiently waiting, your faithful Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 15:45 PDT
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It's nice to see you updating again, because as always your stories are oh so amazing. Just thought I would comment and show my support. Oh, and for some reason I thought you might like the song Beautiful Place, by Good Charlotte. Not really sure it goes with this story, but I thought you'd like it all the same. Peace, love, and literature! :]
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 09:26 PDT
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What kind of ball on a table. Lol! Purity updates brighten my day, have I ever told you that Sue? I also discovered not one hour ago that they are making/airing Inuyasha; The Final Act. I only just heard tell of it by chance and I am SOOOOOO happy XD I'm going to watch the first episode right now~
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 06:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last line of the chapter was hilarious. thanks for the great update!!!! it always makes my day!!
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