| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 21:08 PDT
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I love waking up to your updates. Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 14:56 PDT
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated again?!?!?! Seriously Sueric you are spoiling us!!! After a really crappy day at work it is so nice to come home, curl up on the couch with my puppy, and just read a chapter of one of your stories. It always leaves me wanting more but that is so nice because I get to enjoy it longer and seriously all sucking up aside, your chapters make my day. Anyways this chapter was great and I'm glad that V can read Evan so well now; it deters a bunch of fights. I've noticed that out of all the other purity stories, you seem to really have spent a lot more time developing Evan and V's relationship, which is awesome! And even though it is apparent who the mates are in the beginning, I really like how with all of your stories the characters don't fall in love so easily. So again good work and can't wait to read the next one! P.S. How are things on the homefront now? (I noticed there were no new updates on your webpage) Things here in music city are starting to look up so hopefully you are seeing some improvements as well! JA!!
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 23:05 PDT
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Thank you for another awesome chapter. I'm still trying to figure out why Evan would let Ms.Barbie have her way with him after she was so annoying...it's gonna be on my mind all day now lol.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 23:00 PDT
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I almost have to wonder what would have happened if Valerie hadn't become the cavalry at that moment in time. Personally, I don't understand the Barbie Complex either. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:26 PDT
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Sorry about that weird review for the last to last chapter. Stupid thing chopped off the rest of it. Anyway! I gotta say, Im a little disappointed V didnt do one of those two options. I seriously did not like that reporter xD. I was like "Cmooooon pull her off and shove her out the door with a witty comment or something!" But oh well xD, I'm glad Evan did it at least! Good too! He better NOT enjoy having anyone else do that besides V! *nodnod* By the way, did you like, update two chapters at once or something? I swear I read that Insanity chapter only a day or two ago...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 18:52 PDT
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That reporter girl is a STR-AG-UH!! Feelin all on MY EVVIE! PFFT! FEH! TUH!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAH!!! I loved Evan's final thought, "they bounce". I was wondering what he was talking about and then it clicked. Valerie's goodies while they were running! Brilliant Sue. You are brilliant!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V could have pulled a few handfuls of hair out, I would have enjoyed that. Hahahah Loved the chapter Sue and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 18:07 PDT
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V's a jealous kitty isn't she? Haha. I like How Evan wants to keep on her good side so he does everything to make her happy. That's cute. Such dedication to a girl who doesn't know he's the one for her. Which makes me think... was V the girl at the beginning? I've been straddling the fence on that one. I feel she might be but I'm not sure... there are so many amazing twists in your stories that you never know who's who, or what's what. Haha I love it. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: AnimeSweety [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 17:14 PDT
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Ok so is V the girl from the prologue or not? It's killing me not knowing.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 16:20 PDT
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CLOSER AND CLOSER!! EXCITING!!! Yay! Evan and Valerie sitting on a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G. haha not even..well not YET. XD Keep up the great work! Can't wait till the next chapter! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 13:56 PDT
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So, at this point I really want to figure out who the girl is from the beginning of the story. I mean, it shouldn't be Valerie because she's never had an orgasm, but what if she was just like a bit drunk that night and doesn't really remember it. Where did she go to college? Ugh! The beginning of this story is the thing thats killing me.
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Reviewed By: brownie31 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 12:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a very thought filled chapter. i like how close they're becoming haha.
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Reviewed By: Ninj4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 12:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 11:47 PDT
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AHHHH!!! so close so close...c'mon V just put two and two together will you? :) Love the chapter! I can't wait till the next one!!!
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