| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 06:03 PDT
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Aw! V's birthday and...*shudder* Marvin. Ick. I'm sure he's nice fr all intensive purposes of the word, but he'll never be an Evan therefore, making him unfit to be with V. Well, keep up the grand work. This was a much needed break in my quest to finish school! Thank you! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 05:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he image of Evan with his face stuffed full is just too funny!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 01:58 PDT
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I have to say, I'm hurt to find out that my review was deleted. You told us not long ago that you sometimes feel like you post things online and no one reads them, and that you appreciated the reviews you DID get. I wasnt trying to critique, I was just letting you know that I noticed that. Whats more, if I remember right, it was only a small part of my entire review, and I was being entirely polite. And you deleted it? I'm sorry if you didnt appreciate that little tid bit, but I dont appreciate that you deleted something I took the time to write for you. I dont think I will be writing anymore reviews for you from now on because of that. It really did hurt my feelings. I will still read your stories, because I'm selfish and want to know what happens, but my name wont be coming up in your reviews anymore. I'm sure you will only delete this review as well, and that's fine. I still hope for the best for you and your family. Take care.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 01:58 PDT
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I almost choked to death when V called Even and complained cause she was bored. I love this story, I love all your stories, but this one, I remember some snippet from the storyline, and wind up laughing like a hyena while at work. My reputation is going from bad to worse. they think I'm losing my mind cause I can't tell them what I'm laughing about. Your stories make me forget all my troubles. thank you
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 00:43 PDT
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I luv that ur updating again! I hope this means that things are looking up for u and ur family. i nearly cried from the joy of seeing new chapter updates in my email inbox! (How pathetic am I? lol) Now onto my review. I'm irked by valerie again for not realizing how much she is leading Evan on. Its rude and incredibly over assuming of a woman to ask a man to buy her an expensive gift especially when said man is interested in her and she already has a dipshit fiance. Tell his cheap little ass to get u something expensive. EVAN is MINE! :D (I love the biscuit scene my boyfriend inhales the cheddar biscuits that i make from scratch like that too. lol hell he inhales everything he should be obese!)
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 23:12 PDT
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Figures you update as soon as fnish a three hour read-o-thon till my eyes hurt and I have a headache. oh well now i'm officially caught up. ~cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:39 PDT
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Finally caught up in the reading. took me about a month of striaght reading. but i did it. great universe. :D ~Crciket42
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Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:49 PDT
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exciting-- rereading. :) lol. V's messages. "a priest!" :D so when you say you've added on chapters... that is to all Purity's? (purities?
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2010 20:58 PDT
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Oh I forgot to mention that even though I know I'm probably reading too much into it, that last phone message from V kinda had me worried...
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2010 20:55 PDT
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grrr I haven't checked your story in a week but I guess thats good because I flipped when I saw there were two chapters!!! I love how you can finally start seeing Valerie figure out just how much she is in love with Evan. That instance with the towels really made me smile! :D Sue I have missed you a whole lot!! I'm glad you have started writing again your chapters always seem to make my day. I hope everything is finally falling into place for you and your family? You guys are always in my prayers! anywho until next time! Mary
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2010 04:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved V's calls!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2010 01:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always suspected Evan did things like this and hid his light under a bushel in his family. Bas and Caine would both be proud of him too along with Gin if they knew about the doctorate. He really needs to show his family the more serious side of himself more if he ever wants them to see more than the rocker. I loved Val's attempts to get him to respond to her calls. I am surprised she didn't end up on his doorstep. I suspect that Evan will end up regretting erasing Mike's calls without listening to them first. I eagerly await seeing what comes next. While waiting I will do as you suggested and reread Purity.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 18:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read a new chapter I smile. I have read all of your Purity stories and they're all amazing.. and honestly I've read them a few times! lol I cannot wait to read more. You're an excellent writer Keep up the great work:D:D
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 10:23 PDT
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Ooh! My favorite man is a doctor! That just makes him even more scrumptuous. I love how V called him over and over to keep herself occupied. That's cute. I can't wait until she realizes it's EVANNN!! The suspense is killing me haha. Keep up the fantastic work! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2010 21:19 PDT
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i'm glad your back with your regular updates. cant wait for the next chapter and i hope you have a good week
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