| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 13:19 PDT
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No V...No. You can't keep second-guessing your feelings. You haveto embrace what Jillian and Sydnie say. EMBRACE IT. and realize how much you care for Evan and how your life would be soo much more interesting and lively. Well, this was a great chapter. I hope that V realizes her feelings before its too late... for the both of them. Continue to keep up the good work! I hope things get better for you and your family! I wish I could help with more than just words but... Do perservere. Thank you! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 15:02 PDT
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That was really cute!! I loved it. I can't believe Gin said that though!! I was like "No she didn't!" Great chapter I'm looking forward to the next one!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2010 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love building snowmen and you have one fantastic snowman described here. And roping Bas and Gavin in to help build it is priceless. Olivia preferring Val to Evan had me ROFLMAO. I always thought the girls preferred Evan and here he is taking a backseat to a woman. I do have to wonder if Gin wanted to be "punished" by making those comments about Caine being chubby though. I thought both Bas and Evan's reactions to the whole thing was great and poor Val is soooo confused. It should be interesting to see what she thinks of Inuyasha and Kagome if she sees them, or at least pictures of them. She is already questioning how young Gin and Caine look so Gin's parents looking so young should be a real eye opener. Looking forward to updates whenever you can get them out.
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2010 11:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm always willing to beta, if you need one.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 17:00 PDT
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Haaah, it's been awhile since I reviewed anything. >.< But I fell behind, and honestly, I was too hooked on Evan's story to stop and review all 100 chapters I read this week. @.@ I loved this chapter; seeing any of the Purity families gathered is always cause for lots of laughter, haha. I really wish V would stop being so damn stubborn though.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 11:55 PDT
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Thanks for this chapter Sue. My favorite part was Evan wrapping Valerie in his arms. I can believe her reactions are so normal around Evan but she cant realize what she's doing? I think that should be an indication of how much she belongs with Evan. Again, thank you for this great and much needed chapter. I hope things are better for you and your family.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 11:15 PDT
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AAWWW! This was a cute chapter! Thanks for the update even in your rough patch. I appreciate it! -MSMND.
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 11:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! That was so cute!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter! *blush* Gin and Cain are just too cute! And I love how close Valerie and Evan are getting.... and she doesn't even realize it...lol! I hope to see an update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 10:54 PDT
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ok, that was just too doggone adorable. =D
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! you had me laughing out loud :)
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 05:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your personal things get straightened out for you sweet *hug* this was a great chappie. But I'm desperate to know what Violca did.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew she would end up in Maine with Evan and family for Christmas. Does she find out the family secret there? I can't wait to see how Marvin does his final bow out of Val's life. And Christmas will be a hoot with Val and the Zelig clan.
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Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 20:13 PDT
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It almost seems obvious that Violca put the moves on Cain or Gin (or possibly both, since she had an incident with Valerie, too), but it also seems like that should be Evan's first guess as to what happened, so it's a little odd that he instead assumes Cain did something wrong, no matter what bad feelings there are between them. I'd like to think that if Cain was at fault, he'd at least apologize to Gin right away, but I don't think there was any mention of that. It's kind of tricky to separate what may have happened from Evan's bias since he's one of the main characters here. On top of that, most of this happened just after Dieter's death, so Evan could be lashing out at convenient targets for the most part. I'm still not really sure why Evan thought Violca would do well living with his parents in the first place. Even if Cain and Gin weren't the attractive sort, Violca just doesn't seem like the type of girl you'd want around anyone's parents, and certainly not your own. Anyway, I hope things work out well for you. You're one of the few truly decent people out there that also happens to be a talented writer, and it's always a joy to hear from you again.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goodness. Valerie is one lucky girl. Great update! You are doing a fantastic job!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 14:34 PDT
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Sorry to hear that things aren't going well for you! I've always enjoyed your writing, and I hope you will be able to continue when you get back on your feet. There is nothing I look forward to more than your chapter alerts. Take care and good luck with everything!
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