| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2011 01:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do believe the wheels of change are in motion I just hope it's sooner rather than later. There both unhappy and they could make eachother really happy that's pretty damn clear. |
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 20:06 PST
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Great foreshadowing. I like the change of heart V is starting to go through. As someone who was with someone and grew feelings for another I can understand her feelings. The guilt, the self-anger, the tribulation of the heart, and feeling like a double-crosser. Your imposing the tribulation part, the internal battle of her heart. I can relate so well to her. I eventually left the guy I was with for the man I'm with now. He and have been together for over three years now and I still somewhat guilty, somewhat responsible for the other man's broken heart. I feel as if I have changed his life and each decision he makes now I still feel as if I have somehow influenced. The feeling lessens over the years but I'm sure I will always remember it. Anyway she is a very real character now, at least to me. Thanks for being a spectacular writer. ~Cricket42 |
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw gosh. Poor evan, getting ahead of himself there at the end, thinking she would choose him just that easily. I'm surprised youkai didn't chirp in... Hes going to be in a world of hurt and disappointment. ;( Poor evan!! Also, I totally know how V feels being torn between safe and who you really love. I chose safe guy for too long, and lost the guy I loved JUST when I decided to give in... It was a bad, bad, bad mistake. It took me a year to realize that though he had given up on me, he still loved me. And by then, it was too late-- again, lol. Seven years later, I still have nightmares about it though I've been going stead with another guy for four years. Love. Jeeze. |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 12:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ughhh, just when things V starts to loosen up a little, Melvin has to come and send her crashing back to reality! LOL thanks for the update! |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 11:57 PST
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After the Christmas that she had, I wouldn't be surprised if she honestly had forgotten that she was already tied down to Marvin. And now that he's actually physically there to remind her, all of her previous mental conflicts are shot right up to the forefront of her mind. I just hope that the scales are starting to tip in the side of Evan. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 10:46 PST
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I knew it! I knew there was going to be something that would make this too good to be true. Darnit Marvin! UGH I wish he could just see that V deserves better than him and then ACT on it. Let her go for the best of things. See her love for Evan and let her go be happy. No hard feelings. UGHH While he's a nice person, he urks me. (Could be my preference for all things Evan Zelig)HAHA. But I hope his reappearance doesn't change V's mind. I really really do hope it doesn't. Again, great work. I loved every minute of this chapter! Keep up the great work! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 05:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this chapter Sue. I love reading how much closer Valerie and Evan get. I wonder if its going to follow through after the case has been solved. Also what are the both of them going to do once they won't have a reason to see each other once Evan's case has been dismissed? Questions questions. Thanks for the chapter Sue and seriously cant wait for the next one. Seriously. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2011 19:35 PST
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I have a feeling that those two will become friends in the near future, especially with Evan being their connector. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: Wheretheliliesblow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 17:51 PST
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Loving Even and V's story, i'm always checking for updates. I was just wondering are you going to do Gunner's story next? I would love to read it. Thanks and God Bless! -A fan from the 1ST Purity. |
Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 14:00 PST
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cute chappy :) |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 12:41 PST
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Aw, I'm glad to see that Miss came around in this Chapter. I was wondering how things were doing for her and Daniel. Good to know that they are doing well. I'm also glad V didn't close up on Evan after the kiss. Maybe the tides are turning Evan! Hopefully!! Well, great as always. Keep it up. Love your updates -MSMND |
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 10:12 PST
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Hello im sorry for such the late review but im now living with my sisters and we don't even have a computer much les the internet so im using my sisters droid to write this....im still here just may not always to be able to review but im glad to see this story back in motion and I hope your family is doing good!!! |
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 07:22 PST
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definitely just cried a little at the end. Oh poor Daniel :'( |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 02:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was lovely darlin' though the last part has me sniffling :) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year :) |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 02:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was lovely, so tender and heartfelt. |
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