| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 07:06 PST
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The dune buggies are something that everyone needs to play on at least once in their life! Things are still very fragile, but at least they're trying to make things at least somewhat comfortable for each other. Keep up the good work, dark |
Title: Must..Keep Up...
Reviewed By: reina q [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 06:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you update so fast! It's becoming the norm for me to check my email for an update twice a day. Cute chapter! Dune buggies! |
Title: *le sigh*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, thanks for starting off my weekend with a beloved chapter. I like how they now have a cautious relationship, as that's how I feel most are after a huge blowout. Can't wait to read more! |
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 03:22 PST
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oooh I've ALWAYS wanted to ride a dune buggy before. XD they're just so... awesome. EVAN HURRY UP AND TELL HER AAHHH THE SUSPENSE THAT HAS BEEN KILLING ME SINCE CHAPTER WHATEVER IS STILL THERE!! |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 01:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy they had a nice day together and that there trying to be more real with eachother. |
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 19:54 PST
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Nice chapter. I have to be honest and say that valerie has regained some of the respect I had for her previously. Well done. By the way...snow storm in NY. i noticed you broke the 4th wall a lil bit there. Lol...But seriously the amount of snow that has accumulated in the 5 boroughs this month is disgusting. My birthday was the 27th and I got snowed in. I'm like valerie about the cold ugh I hate it. And snow forget about it. But Bloomberg was on his job at least I was able to drive down the main streets and still enjoy my birthday. lol All hail the mayor and his gps trackin devices on the snow plows lmaooo. Thanks for the extra chapter. Good night and God bless Sue. |
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 07:36 PST
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Ok, I can finally write a review! I've been meaning to do this for a while but the site wouldnt keep me logged in. Oh well. First, about your rant thing: I love this arc and your stories. You said something about appealing to the male readers, I am one of them and have no complaints, so keep it up. Anyways, I knew this kind of confrontation would come, but not this soon. I was wincing the whole time, its a hard thing to read, but it had to be done. I'm going to read the other chapters now. see ya |
Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 05:33 PST
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awww this is perfect 'cause i just had a huge exam and to come home to and see this it was like christmas all over again |
Title: Le sigh
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 03:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay extra chapter!!! I'm glad those two worked it out (sort of) lol! As always, I can't wait to read more! Have a lovely rest of your week Sueric! |
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 03:11 PST
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YAYYYY I was totally thinking today, "hmmm, I know that Sue said that she'd already posted this week's chapters, but should I check anyway...?" and you put up an extra chapter!! XD Happy, happy. The scene was too tender and too cute. Haha, I hope V doesn't leave during the night, too. :) great chapter. Waiting patiently ~FF71 |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 01:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extra chappie! Thank you so much for this darlin'. It was sad, melancholic but I feel that the air is a little clearer and I hope it means these two can start moving forward. |
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 01:32 PST
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As I'm still crying from this chapter, I'm writing this. I always check to see (just in case) if maybe you updated and suddenly there this chapter was (much to my joy). Thank you and this is kind of a silly thank you but thank you for having V tell Evan what I've wanted her to say for so long, that he deserves to be cherished too :) Crap now I'm crying again. Fictional or not, I don't think some people never truly feel worthy of being loved and I just thought that this was a really beautiful part of your story to point out that yes they do. So really thank you a bunch. -Monique |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 22:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* You're awesome, Sue! That is all. Thanks for all the updates and the extra! =D |
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 21:17 PST
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I do love the way you write conflict, resolution and etc... oh the drama!!!! I'm glad Evan figured out that sleeping with another woman is not the answer. Looking forward to Friday!!! |
Title: is trying to become a regular reviewer...
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 20:01 PST
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You beautiful liar, you updated!!! Yay! I just realized, I can't read Marvin's whole name without wincing or grinning. Anyway, this chapter was a pleasant surprise. I was sure that even if Evan and V managed to apologize using their inside voices, someone would get up and leave in the end. And Valerie almost did, so thank goodness Evan stopped her. I was little annoyed that while Evan was explaining what things he didn't want, he didn't just tack on an "I want you" at the end. Sure, Valerie has heard it before, but it was a totally serious moment, and no one's allowed to lie then. Likewise, Valerie could have listed a few more things that made Evan amazing (the car gift, the demented sense of fun, the ability to insert sexual undertones into any decent conversation, to name a few). But I get it, they're making up slowly, no place for blurting out genuine feelings just yet. Oh, and one thing I keep forgetting to ask: Evan's tongue and/or saliva has healing properties? I'm shocked he hasn't tried to use that line on V (or anyone else) before. Well, it sounds like a line coming from anyone, him especially. Though if Valerie actually realized it was true, I'm not sure how she'd take it. On the one hand, he did it to help her, but on the other hand, she could probably never get hurt around him again and feel entirely comfortable, assuming she'd deny liking being licked, in true V fashion. But it would make for an amusing recovery, at least. |
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