| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: iheartinuyasha426 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This big blow-out was bound to happen eventually. The passion they both feel (whether Val has fully realized/accepted it or not) had to have led to this clash. I must say, I can't wait for this situation to be resolved. I miss them being happy together. |
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:17 PST
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Wow...what a chapter... |
Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:15 PST
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long time, no review from me but I'm still reading. And no hate mail for Mel because yay breakthrough! Feelings are out in the open now and Val's in need of some soul searching. And Evan's done glossing things over. Maybe even with his family too? if you can't be honest with your family, who can you? Things may suck for Val and Evan right now but happily ever after will happen! And just so you know, yours are the only Inuyasha fan fics I read anymore |
Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:06 PST
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… I’m speechless… and… ahhh I don’t know what to think… I wonder if he’ll really go through with it (sleeping with someone else that is), ahh I can’t wait for the next chapter :D |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was great! I was actually pissed at that guy for manhandling Valerie as well. I dobn't care what these people are saying. I love your story. You're giving your characters plenty of time in order for them to grow and not be forgettable. I think Valerie has the most growing to do, out of all the others. I just want you to know, that I'm behind you one hundred percent! Hope you have a great weekend! |
Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 10:37 PST
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I honestly can’t remember the last time I sat down and was able to read, the latest chapter it self took me two days as it was. Between school, work and my parents who need me to do everything and three siblings that can’t do anything for themselves, my day’s are so full. But I was shocked when I found out that people are bagging on the characters, I mean me personally the only time I didn’t like Evan was when he pulled the thing at he charity function but that was really it and the only thing I don’t like about V is that she’s still with Marvin, ‘cause what I see is that he uses her more then anyone else ever has and I hope, ever will. I then went and read your blog and other people’s views started to make sense, kind of. So because you seemed sad I though it would be a good time to say you’ve done a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious amazing awesome perfect job I love the story, keep doing what you’re doing :D. |
Title: Reviews
Reviewed By: bubbles111 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 09:32 PST
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The one thing i really love about you as an author is that you take the time to put the names of the people that review for you at the bottom of each chapter. It's nice to know that an author appreciates their reviewers. I don't usually comment on authors stories, even though i've been using mediaminer for years, but your stories are just so mind blastingingly good that I had too. I've been reading your stories for awhile, and wanted you to know i appreciate your imagination and talent. Anyways! Good luck! |
Title: Much Love
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 08:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the chapter and continuing to write. My life is so much better with your writing in it. :) |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 07:50 PST
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Resistance is futile, young pups! Bwahaha! Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 01:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I am so glad you decided to update! I hope you are feeling better. Don't listen to the haters, I absolutely ADORE your fanfic!! I have been following the purity series since the very first one! I have watched this story evolve over the years and I have enjoyed every minute of it. My favorite Puritiy volumes are 5 and this one because I can relate to those characters relationships. But I love every last one of your stories, and the vivid characters you create are totally believable; I respect the fact that you go through extensive character development and that it's not just pwp smut. Overall your stories are insightful, tasteful, delightful treats that I thank you for sharing with the rest of us. Please keep writing and I will keep reading! Your loyal fan, KittyBoBo =^_^= |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 01:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was rather intense moment! It looks like Evan's starting to see that V isn't just any other gorl. They fit so well together especially at the end - there like a ciouple I just wish V would see that. I don't like seeing Evan so unhappy.P |
Title: O.O
Reviewed By: JaneyJane [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2011 21:19 PST
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Because I'm running on maybe 3-4 hours of sleep, and I'm just naturally awkward at these things, please forgive my potentially rambling and off topic review...XD Now that that'd out of the way...you are an amazing writer, with amazing stories and characters so real and perfect with their flaws (if that even makes sense...)that they come across as living, breathing people(does that make me a voyeur..? or a stalker...). Don't let flamers get to you; I think this story is perfect just the way it is. Evan shows his strength in various facets, and how could anyone expect Valerie trust so easily after so many bad experiences? I'd love to go on and on about how much I really do adore this story, but my lack of sleep is short circuiting my brain XD You may never hear from me again (because I'm one of those horrible people that fall in love with stories, but whose inherent laziness automatically counters almost all attempts to show my appreciation in reviews...), but I just hope you keep on going strong and never stop writing (your legions of fans will have severe mental breakdowns >.>). |
Title: Sueric is the best!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2011 10:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been leaving comments like I should I just get so excited to read your new posts that I read them on my phone as soon as I see them. As always you are my favorite fanfic author, if not favorite author ever. Your Purity family updates are the highlight of my day! Valorie and Evan are no different. They have grown a lot, especially Evan! I just hope this series is still as fun for you as the writer as it is for us readers! Love your work! xoxoxo |
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2011 08:14 PST
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OH and you know what I just noticed? when I go to MMorg's FanFic page, they have a list of 'featured fictions'... and PURITY 3 is on the list!! XDD i was so happy when I saw that.. you probably already knew that it was there, but i felt like sharing the love. :3 i think it's great that you're the most popular author on this site. (most likely, haha) |
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2011 08:12 PST
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glad you're feeling better (?). :) Evan's so cuuuute and he sounds so cuddly. i don't know why... "In fact, it hadn’t hurt all day, now that she thought about it, and that was strange, wasn’t it? After all, the cut needed stitches, so it wasn’t a measly injury, by any means . . ." -does double-take- OOOH IT'S CUZ HE LICKED HER. (was my epiphany in the middle of the chapter. :p) |
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