| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2011 10:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loooovvvvvveeeeeedddddd it!!!!! Evan and V are sooo cute :) i'm so excited your back to updating and hopefully on the regular again. I missed this story! I hope you had a WONDERFUL christmas and new years! update soon :) |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOVE! Oh my goodness! Hot and heavy and sensual and sweet and adorable and gahh! I loved this chapter! They're getting there! YES YES! *Does victory dance* I'm soo excited for the next chapter and the next!... Wow. I'm practically hyperventilating from excitement and schoolgirl giddyness. haha Great great work as always Sue. Loved this...This made my night! Happy belated New Year to you and your family! Hope this one is easier than the last! :D Your fan forever, -MSMND. |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 13:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Evan's planning on taking Valerie to Hawaii sometime soon, right? That guitar strap was wonderful. I wouldn't be surprised if that ended up being one of his most cherished things for when it comes to his guitars. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2010 13:10 PST
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Two things Su: 1). I completely blame you for laughing out loud everytime I read a funny chapter. This time I happened to be having "reading time" with the little boy I nanny. He asked me what I found funny and as he is 10 and the content was a tad mature for him I could only apologize and say that I can't help but laugh when I read a chapter of Sueric's stories. 2). EFF CAIN!!!! Hahaha. Perfect moment RUINED :) |
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2010 12:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see i told you i'll keep being good. ~Cricket42 |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2010 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness, I wish that I was Valerie!!! Lolz Thanks for the update, Sue! Happy New Year to you and your family!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2010 16:21 PST
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haha This was a cute chapter. A very lighthearted vignette to show the closeness of the family, while showing Evan's slight resentment for Cain. I liked this. Well, It's good to hear from you again Sue, I missed your chapter updates. Hope you and your family had a merry christmas and here's wishing you a Happy New Year! :D - MSMND |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 03:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely to see an update and I hope it means things are going well with you sweets. Hope you had a lovely Crimbo! Great chappie, made me chuckle none stop :) |
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2010 21:36 PST
Comment/Review:
awesome keep up the good work. please dont make us wait so long for more it is the holidays. please I promise I'll stay good. anyway great job ~Cricket42 |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2010 20:15 PST
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I have to admit, after that commercial, I just had to look up more of those names... And woe is the guy that has to go in and get the keys... How many numbers did Gin have again? That's one ways to clear a room! Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2010 16:25 PST
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Fantastic as always. i cant believe cain is such a sore loser hehe. cant wait for the next chapter glad to see your back hope your holidays were great |
Title: Chapter 117: **snigggers**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 09:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love seeing Evan tease V. the continuous 'baby' monologue was cute. I see V thinks like me: why so touchy about your dad, Evan? The portrait room scene was good and touched on some things I wondered about, while giving me new questions to ponder. I'm guessing this is the first time V's "gone home to meet the parents" because she's so careful and kind of nervous and self-conscious (which I'm finding rather adorable). Cain'd make an AWESOME father-in-law...and Gin would keep V laughing and full of warmth...like the parents she never had. i so want her in this family and...happy. I literally smiling, here, thinking about it. I'm rambling...I've had sugar, today...I'm done! Great, thought-provoking chappie, Sue! |
Title: Chapter 116; Meeting the folks, cont...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 08:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just occured to me that I never finished commenting on all the chapters. Wow, I'm sorry, Sue. Well, for THIS chapter, I feel for V and her slight insecurities, first about Cheara, then, in degrees, with Sydnie. She really doesn't grasp how into Evan she is so that's probably why it's easier for her to disregards those feelings as exasperation on Evan's part. I love how frank and down to earth Madison is with her and when she said to chop Evan's balls off, I chuckeld HARD. The scene where Evan let the "casual friend" kiss him kinda frazzled my nerves and the passive-aggressive questioning from V had the potential to blow up in a possibly positive way--a moment of clarity, feelings-wise--but, alas, Gin walked in. Hmmm... Picutring Gin in a white formal dress...like a chibi Barbie--cute/sexy...I would love to see a pic of Evan standing next to Gin, DWARFING her! LOL! |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2010 21:22 PST
Comment/Review:
Finally! My mm.org account was shorting out and not letting me write a review. But, anywho. I love your story, as always. and I want you to keep up the awesome work! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2010 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I have read all of your original stories and fanfictions on mediaminer but have never commented. You are a very talented writer. I have been reading fanfictions for years and I have never read any fanfiction that can compare to your work. I wanted to thank you for posting such amazing fanfictions that I can read and enjoy over and over again. I absolutely love your Purity series. You give such life to each character and your stories have so much detail. Although I love all your stories, Purity 9 has got to be my favorite. I visit your website and mediaminer every day to see if you’ve updated. I have read your site and understand why you won’t be able to post. I hope things get better for you and you’ll be in my prayers. |
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