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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 › » ] | Reviewed By: halestj [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 15:25 PDT
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I love your purity stories. I'm always checking to see if you've updated. Your stories are the only fanfics I actually read. I'm not a huge fan of fanfics since most of them are so badly written. I really appreciate how detailed you make your characters. I sometimes feel like I'm going crazy waiting for the next chapter but you always deliver and it's always good. I don't mind when it takes a long time because you don't seem to just write a chapter so that the readers stop nagging you. When I find a story or series I love I don't mind waiting a long time for the next part when I know it's going to be good. I just found out the conclusion to a story I've been waiting for has finally arrived. It's been four years. Totally worth the wait. I can't wait to go get the book. Anyway, thanks so much for all your hard work. I hope everything works out well for you with your roof. Good Luck
| Reviewed By: Kilikina616 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 14:14 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2010 10:01 PDT
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I haven't commented in awhile but just wanted to let you know i still LOOOOVVVVVEEEE this story. Here are the top 3 things I want to know SOOOOOON lol 1) V realizes she loves Evan and breaks it off with Marvin DUH! lol ( I feel like he's having an affair or something bc nobody goes that long with out seeing the one they love and want to marry like he claims he does. I understand why V doesnt care bc she doesn't really love him. I think he's being sneaky) 2) V tells Cain how Evan feels about their father son relationship and Cain is forced to confront Evan about his true feelings and explain y he's so distant with him (bc I don't all the way understand either) 3) WHY DID GIN MOVE OUT????? Im dying to know what really happened between them. It had to be something serious bc she moved out. I know cheating is OUT of the question bc he loves her and inu mate for life. So i wanna know what happened. ok thats all :) I hope everything gets better in your personal life. Your an excellent writer and everything will get better. update soon!
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 15:28 PDT
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YAY! you're back! That's good to know. I liked it and now I've been left in suspense! GREAT STUFF thanks! -MSMND
| Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love in when they spar. It's so interesting. I also imaginig my own family doing that sometimes, and it's so strange to think about. Thanks for the update! Love ya!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie babe, I'm still trying to figure out how there getting away with it when there otherness is so very obvious!
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 13:02 PDT
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LOL. first she's like O-O then she's like @-@ and then she's like o.o then OoO then
| Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 10:32 PDT
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Loved this chapter! Very descriptive. And I really like the little glimpses Valerie is getting into the true nature of Evan and his family. Can't wait to see how the Big Reveal goes! Eve
| Title: oh, hell...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:28 PDT
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Last one was for Chapter 115.. me bad, Sue
| Title: Chapter 114: LOVE the Evan Xmas song!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shot my load in...LOL! My, my...love that guy! This chapter was just a virtula squeeze to the heart with all the family togetherness and the kiddies and the Snow Cain and I just sprained my jaw from smiling! It's a sweet read, this chapter and funny as hell, too! Loved it!
| Title: Chapter 114: Downy...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, wild what sticks in my mind. The thought of the smell of Downy on Evan's baby clothes is too precious!!! I love how shy V was to start--it was cute--and how everyone instantly took to V. The small talk on mates--potential--withe Evan and Gin was nice. She's cutesy and kinda naiive but insightful when it counts and I think she can see the potential for them mating more than Evan can...then again, he's go t a long way to go. Cute, lovely chapter.
| Title: Chapter 113: 2 words: Yay, vacation snuggle time--potential!!! (okay, that's 5...)
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a feeling something MIGHT happen with Marvin this time but thought I was being pessimistic--I wasn't. Gawd, it reminds me of this audiobook I listened to called 'Bet Me' where Fate was LITERALLY making scenarios for these two people to continually meet up and communicate/date/be around each other. I do feel for Marvin but it seems the dice are rolled against him this time...others? Well, the label of "busy professionals" works for BOTH of them with their distance but REALLY works out wonderful for ole Evvie! Yay, family bonding time with the fake girlfriend!
| Title: Chapter 112: "He's what I need..." Damn, V...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think Evan knows a lot about Marvin, even in the things he doesn't know, by V's pauses and silences and changes of subjects and fits of pique or sarcasm. He's reading you well but some things NEED to be said. The chapter covered a few things but this part stuck with me the most. To me, it seemed like an unconscious SOS: Evan, this is how I cope and you're...a bit much to process--but don't be offended." Okay, the "gift" from Evan to Marvin...oh, that book! Help me, LAWD, I LAUGHED! Sue, you are a friggin' RIOT! Lastly, the big question of forever and "the pull"...I never get enough of that! **fangirl sigh**
| Title: Chapter 111: I love Evan's friends!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...then again, I'm random, so... NEwho, this chapter made me laugh and smile and laugh again and then sigh at that invisible pull between Evan and V that makes pseudo-dirty dancing a normal thing. But those are the moments I likve for. The little dance party was cute and Bitches, as always, tickled me. OOH, Maddy and the cockblockery! Although I understand her wanting to put the brakes on things for bothe her friend's sakes...still... **le sigh** I almost whimpered with Evan.
| Title: Oh, Evan....
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 05:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
,,,,;_;,,,, I know just how Evan feels. I'm the oldest, but I've always been the odd one out no matter what I do. I tried everything for acceptance, instead of going bad like Evan did. I always pretend I don't care and that I don't need my parent's love, but, the truth is that my whole personality and all my skill set is derived from me trying to be good enough for them. How did you know about this type of feeling? Did you grow up the same way? I'm impressed with your versatility in inventing the problems that different characters will encounter, the problems that define their personalities. Very believeable. I can connect with both valerie and evan... thus, they're my favorite couple yet. :) I'm sorry to hear that your roof is still in trouble... I suppose tacking up a trash bag or a tarp wouldn't work temporarilyl, if you've not done that already...? Maybe the neighborhood would complain though. =/ Perhaps if you let it slip around that you need help with the roof, someone in the area would help you.. maybe talk to a shelter or something, ask around. Community service groups? A 4-H? Boyscout troop? Used to help out when I was in 4-H to people in need. Just don't know what to do in that situation. It sounds tough. Try not to worry too much, if you're not careful worrying will eat you away!
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