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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 › » ] | Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 12:30 PST
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Wow. That's all I have to say. Amazing. I stand humbled and corrected. Wow. | Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 08:22 PST
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They really did do it this time. It'll take a long time, but hopefully they'll be able to heal, though at the moment, neither of them want to say much of anything, yet they want to say everything. Then again, they already did say everything, didn't they? Keep up the good work, dark | Title: 136-138
Reviewed By: inugurl338 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 07:05 PST
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Great as usual. i appreciate the triple update :) There is so much emotion in this story! please tell me this will not be the last major story in the purity series! | Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 02:21 PST
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I have to say the imagery at the beginning made me wince. I really felt that desolation, the emptiness that those kinds of act's seemed to instill. It was almost painful. It was good to see Evan's realisation, the fact that there both doing something tfar to similar. | Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 02:11 PST
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This was a sad but good read hun. It's nice to see V working through everything and understanding just what she's done however accidental.They really have been hurting eachother. | Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 02:04 PST
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I was shaking like a leaf through the whole fight and crying by the end. I don't have enough words to describe exactly how I really felt but you've done a brilliant job... truly amazing. I can only point out one main thing that has stuck in my head. Valerie wants most to show him that she cares about him and that she's sorry because Evan is hurting so badly and she's helped add to his hurt. Evan really is hurting so much more than I ever realized until these chapters. I knew it ran deep, but...just wow. So he in turn has shown us that he's sorry and he cares so very much about Valerie and I love his youkai (can I just say that) who's like a conscience and friend all wrapped in one. I'm looking forward to next Monday with an open mind and heart. I thought I would hurt and ache if Evan slept with other women but after reading it, rather than hating the act and Evan, I find myself hurting so much more for him and not hating him, not at all. Hearing his thoughts at the time was unreal. It was like witnessing an out of body experience combined with a train wreck. You've amazed me yet again and I thank you. Awaiting more, Monique :) | Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 01:56 PST
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I had a feeling this was coming but oh my god! you had me wincing and worrtying and just ouch. *hurries of to the next chappie* | Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 22:48 PST
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And there it is...the air cleansing fight, the arguement that puts it all out on the table and forces each of them to confront each other and themselves. Being truly honest with yourself and others is, maybe, the hardest thing a person can do in their lives. Kami, I just want to hug them both and tell them that it will be OK. It will be hard, uphill work, but worth it in the end. You know, I started to get mad at Val when she was insisting on going to the Bahamas with a "He'll thank me in the morning" attitude, then stopped myself and thought about who she is, and what she went thru in the course of recreating herself. When my son was in his mid teens, when I saw him making decisions that had him heading for a brick wall, I'd stop him and tell him what he was doing, and how bad it was going to hurt when he hit the wall full throttal. I'd do this twice, then the third time, I'd get out of the way and let him hit the wall. Sometimes it is the only way to learn. I'd say that Evan and Val just hit a couple of walls and it's going to take time and work to repair the injuries. Thank the Kami they are both smart, strong, and too stubbrun to back off or quit. I love this couple. It seems that the Inubaka gene isn't restricted to InuYasha's bloodline. LOL | Title: I don't hate Valerie..
Reviewed By: maidengarnet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 22:08 PST
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I don't really get why people would hate Valerie. We've all been able to see this from her side and know she's a very vulnerable person. Maybe people who haven't experienced a... 'shaky' family upbringing can't understand exactly how that would affect someone for the rest of their life. And I TOTALLY do not approve of Evan having sex with nameless girls. I have to go with Valerie here in the opinion that NOT having sex doesn't kill you... and what a way to make the girl you want as your lifemate feel special! If you can't have her, you'll take ANYONE! Yes, I can understand where he's coming from too, anyone who wishes to come to his defense, but that understanding is NOT a free pass. Really, he chases after an engaged emotionally-damaged woman - full well knowing all the above, and he thought she would crack all her defenses and behavior just like that? He's the one hiding practically all that he is! Mr. Defensive Jokes... Really, I like Valerie, so don't worry that everyone out there is having an irrational hatefest on her. Sure, she's done wrong too, but if I had to pick a corner to back it would be Valerie - and if I was going to yell at someone for being stupid and upsetting the other? Evan. I would so be that girlfriend of Valerie's that smacks him into and wall and demands to know what the hell he thinks he's doing, screwing around with our friend's feelings! And I consider his latest 'indiscretions' cheating on Valerie... after all, SHE might not know they're mates, and therefore have to tell herself she can't be mad, they aren't dating - but HE knows! Gross, just gross behavior Evan... | Title: :)
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 19:36 PST
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Oh dear LORD! That was HOT! And sad and... I mean wow!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Seems like our dear Valerie is going to have some serious questions to answer for herself and a lot of soul searching. | Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 18:26 PST
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Whoo hoo!!! Go Evan!!! | Title: Chapter 135
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 18:06 PST
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OH WOW!!! Evan broken it down to Valerie didn't he? I don't know if I should cheer for Evan for finally telling V what he thinks or cry for Valerie because she might lose Evan. I think I will do both. Great,great chapter Sue. Wednesday can't come quick enough for the next update. LOL! | Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:57 PST
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'WOW!' is all I can think right now!!! I have been waiting for Evan to reach the breaking point!! I kind of feel bad for V but then, I kind of don't...does that make sense?? Lolz Mixed emotions are what I have for her right now, hehe. Thank you for the udate, Sue! =D | Title: ...
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:55 PST
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haha... oh my.. thank you, for that. i guess we all saw that coming, didn't we? poor Evan... Valerie, run after him!! that was a great chapter. no hate mail from me.... simply happy with the step of progress in the relationship. obviously Evan should know better, but he also made a lot of good points. poor Valerie... | Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 17:46 PST
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YESSSS! THIS IS THE CHAPTER I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR! GREAT JOB SUE I COULD CYBER KISS YOU! Hate mail?? for What??!!! THIS WAS GREAT! ~OB out! | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 › » ] |
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