| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: Chapeter 148
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 17:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, but didn't see that one coming. With all of Evan's one night stands I should have. Do you think Evan's will tell V about his heritage? Will Evan tell Cain? Update when you can. HAPPY VALENTINE DAY =) |
Title: baby mama drama, oh noes!
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 14:40 PST
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I really hope Evan can get over himself and just give Cain a call. Lecture aside, Cain would help him, if only because Gin would insist. And better to get a lecture than to undo all the progress he's made with V. People like this woman are really annoying, though. Too bad Evan can't have someone like Bas go over and scare them off by flexing some youkai muscle. But hopefully this will teach Evan to at least make an attempt to recall everyone he sleeps with. |
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 14:28 PST
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I'm quite interested in how Evan's going to solve his little problem regarding the child and how he's going to win over Valerie again. Thanks for the early chapter! Have a great V-day! |
Title: :)
Reviewed By: inugurl338 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wasnt expecting that! lol great chapter as usual though! |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 12:55 PST
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Given hEVEN's propensity for "dipping his wick", it's a wonder that he hasn't been sued for this before, indeed! LOL, just when he thought it was safe to get back into the water. Poor Val, his laughter definately hit a raw spot, can't blame her for her reaction. Wish Even had seen it coming. So, how do you plan to get around the paternaty test...there has to be something that I missed...clever, sneaky wench. LOL |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 11:58 PST
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Well, this is going to be an interesting situation to resolve, especially with Evan not really being able to do a blood test...All else I can really think of is to actually tell Valerie the truth... And at the moment, that'd lead to more issues than answers. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 06:54 PST
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XDD Ah, pretty pink! Even if you had already thought of that, thanks for putting that in! It made everything worth it! Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: CoyoteKeyser [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2011 05:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric I must say this. You are an awesome author. Period. Don't let these nay sayers (not sure if i spelled that correctly) tell you otherwise. These two characters and this story are so complex and intense that sometimes people just so people just don't know how to properly respond. Look at it this way, if people are getting "mad" at Val, then that means that in some way they are connecting her as a "real" person. I'd say that it means you are doing quite a job of fleshing her out. Given her life, I'm not at all surprised by how she's turned/turning out. Readers often fail to realize that the characters they read about in stories aren't always as omnipotent as them. You're writing this story out like it honestly would play out in a real life situation and I applaud you for it. Despite all the magic and fantasy your stories have always had such an astoundingly "real" feel to them. Thank you for all of the time and diligence you've put into this ENTIRE series. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2011 01:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it odd that I really want a Munchies? He's so lovely and he took good care of V, even convinced her he wasn't a dog lol :) |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 20:07 PST
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I'd love to know what's going through the mind of Munchies right about now. I can't decide if he's oddly comfortable or just numb from being pink-coated. |
Title: keep doing your thing!
Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 18:36 PST
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Hey! I havent reviewed in so long, as it`s hard for me to find the time to keep up with your work, but I try as much as I can. I sense your frustration with the reviews, and I understand it`s hard not to let the negativity affect you. I just wanted to drop by and say that I absolutely love Evan and Val. Val is probably one of the most complex and hard to understand characters you have ever created, since Sydney. I adore her, and I related to her the most. I just wanted you to know that, and that there are people out there that appreciate your writing and everything your doing. It`s hard to comprehend how emotionally exhausting and hard it is to write about the subject matter that is predominant in this story, unless you`ve been through similar hardships. Keep doing you thing!Your work is and will always be truly inpirational. =) |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 18:29 PST
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Some of the things I treasure most from your stories are the things you slip in and wait to see if anyone noticed, you sneaky woman, you! LOL And I love them. Like when you had InuYasha compare Kagome to an Octopus youkai. That made me laugh until I cried, and as for Munchies...well...I think brown and pink go together well also, but I'm not sure what color mud brown he is. Besides, if he's anything like hEVEN...nothing is going to threaden his masculinity! ROTFLMAO |
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 16:21 PST
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an immensely enjoyable chapter (poor munchies!) though honestly I feel a little hurt by you. |
Title: :-)
Reviewed By: inugurl338 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 14:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you :) it was a great chapter. |
Reviewed By: jack2jokester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im LOVING the story so far! i've followed you purity series from the beginning and can honestly say that im suprised you dont writs for a living...so yeah ignore all those who have no taste, or idea of the development of a charcter and know that for every one that hates there are ten who love your stories...even if we dont review often |
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