| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 06:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, this was such a great chapter! I knew she was pregnant! I admit, you threw me off a little when Kelly's pregnancy was announced first. I thought "Maybe I'm wrong. They can't both be expecting. . ." But they are and it's great! It was great to see all the Zelig children together and seeing Kich as well. I must say, though, that I've now seen the word "triplets" at least twice and it's making me start to wonder about something concerning something that transcends. . .Okay, I shall shut up now! |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 05:07 PDT
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Hazzah! I was right! It's interesting that Valerie isn't questioning the age thing like she did Midison's mother... Then again, Gin still looks like a spring chicken, even with kids that are completely grown up. I have a feeling that there will be a few 'girls' night out' to do baby shopping. And Valerie will be whole-heartedly dragged along and no-doubt asked when she and Evan are going to do the same thing... from Gin most likely. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 01:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it might be and I was hoping really hard. YAY! |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2011 22:11 PDT
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HA! I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! WHOOO! Congrats to Gin and Cain! more family members! haha that racks up to what... 5 Zelig kids now? well well well. haha I love this family glad to see it grow! Well Im excited for what else this trip has to bring! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2011 06:30 PDT
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Valerie on the drums, I'm sure that Evan can come up with a few things to say about that... and none of them kosher! Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2011 04:53 PDT
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this chapter was so cute! i could not stop laughing while they were playing rock band! i seriouslycan't wait to see what gin and cain have to tell everybody. the suspense is killing me! can't wait for the next chapter and i hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 14:43 PDT
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You started out with a bang! I love that Evan was mooning V first thing in the morning. Haha...I love your creativity in weaving events that readers will least expect. The chapters are just amazing, and I can't wait for the next one to come out. I know that it's a been a few weeks (or was it a few days? Hmm..) since I've last reviewed, and I apologize. ^^ Great chapter, and once again, Congratulations to your son! XD |
Title: So Long!!!
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 09:23 PDT
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Ahhh!! It's been so long since I reviewd!! I've just been feeling like an introvert, not to meantion I had to catch up!! I feel so bad for Valerie and Evan!! They just seem sad, to me. You haven't given anything to show it, but I just feeli like they're sad. ACK!! I'd almost forgotten how much I'd loved Gin!! She's so sweet!! Just a doll *wipes tear* I love your characters!! Can't wait for the next update!! "o" |
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love Evan and Valerie so much! (Not as much as I love Gin/Cain but close!) I think Valerie is starting to feel bad about denying that spark between them ;) they love each other |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 08:21 PDT
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Suuue, what do Cain and Gin have to tell the family???? Lol Thank you for the update!! And I hope that your son had an awesome graduation!! :) |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 07:55 PDT
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hmmm... what does Evan have up his sleeve now? And what is this huge news?? The suspense is killing me! haha. As always, I loved this chapter. It was very straightforward and light. It wasn't a really deep, emotional chapter and I think that's because whatever is going to be said when Bas gets back will be something of the sort. I wonder... why WAS Evan so easy to persuade... hm... :) hahaWell, looking forward to the next chapter! Great Job, as always! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 01:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know V wants to tell gin because she feel's bad abpout it but I think Evan's right. I like Gin's way of thinking ;) |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2011 14:09 PDT
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i wonder what's up with cain and gin. evan is stressin about it and then cain and gin are acting normal. i really want to know what they have to tell everybody! i just love gin, she's so cute and i'm so glad v went with evan. keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: SoulofSixes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2011 21:54 PDT
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I loved the new chapter. I took the time to read the story that I missed, Purity 7, and while it was a hard start because I fell in love with the newest story I found myself spending all my time to read it. You develop your characters so well that its hard not to find connections with them or their feelings. I love the fact that you use your vocabulary even when its not something that is everyday material. One word in specific has me waiting in anticipation to see the end of the story. I cant wait, while I have my own ideas on it, to see how you show Evans subterfuge. Can't wait to see the next chapter. I have a sneaking feeling Gin and Cain are expecting. P.S. Congrats to your son. |
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2011 18:14 PDT
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First off congratulations on your son graduating! I wish him the best in his life-time goals whatever they may be. Secondly...is Gin pregnant? Or are we gonna find out about the whole Violca thing? |
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