| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2011 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved this! Full of sweet moments :) |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2011 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We're making progress ya'll! WOOT! That slip made me amlost pee myself I was so happy! Goodness, I'm so invested in them. I'm gonna be on Cloud Nine when they get together. Anyway, it was lovely dear, and I hope you're feeling better! |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 17:08 PDT
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Well, he didn't faint, even when he got to be 'center stage', so I think he's going to do alright... at least when it comes to being on stage. He did good enough... I don't think the other bandmates would complain too much if Garrett ended up being their bassist every once in a while, until he's old enough to go out on the road full-time. And by that time, he'll have enough experience that he won't drown when he puts out some of his father's songs. Keep up the good work, dark |
Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 14:16 PDT
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This was a awesome chapter!! Loved the kiss, wish it had gone further but we can't win them all. That was sweet how they did her daddys song! Garrets really moving on up from just a lighting job that's for sure. Can't wait for the next chapter! These always make my day. |
Title: OOOOOhhhh, It is getting good!!
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 07:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the lightharted moment with the eye, and especially the end with Garett singing. Oh goodness, it's just getting good. I had no idea that Evan was afraid of touching his eyes. I know hoe he feels, but if there's something in my eyes, that you can bet, no matter how much I hate touching my yes I will do it. I always knew that Evan was just a little scaredy-cat. AAAH I'm so fangirling over Garett over here! I just love him. He's so awesome!!! |
Title: AW
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 03:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Snuggles! It's nice to see Valerie finally starting to relax some! I mean what does the poor man have to do? Walk through fire? (Altough... at this point, I'm sure he'd find a way to do it lol) I really love Evan and Garrets relationship, it's so cute and genuine. Also congratulations on your son getting into college Sue! How exciting! |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That sweet, almost reverant hush that sometimes goes through a crowd - you really got it. An V what are you upto? |
Reviewed By: michellishelli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 19:42 PDT
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Ooooooh they kissed! How many times has this happened now, and yet V still hasn't figured out what she really wants? Siiiiiigh. I think it's hilarious that Evan would be terrified of V poking around in his eye, but then it entirely fits his character, doesn't it? The concert scene was great. I was actually kind of hoping the special song they did would be a love song, written especially and only for V, and then she would wake up and realize she loves him, but I guess that'll have to wait for another day :D Loved the chapter, as always!!! |
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 16:08 PDT
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Hi again. It always seems that I always fall behind and whenever I catch up I write a review lol. Evan is finally making progress, Val kissed him and didn't freak out! There's hope for him yet! I love your stories, keep it up. Oh and congrats to your son, and I hope you get well soon ^_^ |
Title: AAAAAARRGGHH!!!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it, Damn it, DAMN IT! Stupid Garret and being a damn COCKBLOCK! VALERIE finally gets the balls to do SOMETHING and then Garret, damn Garret. *Sniff* And Poor Evan. I love how you wrote how disappointed he was, I really felt his sadness. Also, I LOVED the banter between Valerie and Even and his refusal for her to get her eyelash out of his eye. I just wish that Valerie thought more on what happened between them. LOVES it! AND IT WAS A QUICK UPDATE TOO! Thanks! Can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 14:16 PDT
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AHmazing as always Sue, I cant tell you how much im enjoying the hell out of this story. I really do check my email three four times a day to see if theres been an update cus i crave the next chapter hehe. anyhow enjoy orientation and thanks for wed chapter early :) |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 10:22 PDT
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*Dreamy sigh*...if only there was a real Evan, in life, for me. Lol. Another fantastic chapter.(: Thanks for the update. |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 07:08 PDT
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If Evan hadn't come in when he did, He would have likely found a sauced Valerie, especially between the stress of Garrett and finding out her father rejected the waiting list. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 16:20 PDT
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Hey Sue!! So sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile! still following a long but most days I only get a few paragraphs in before I have to put it away again :(( ohhhh life right? anywho! I love the way the story has been progressing! I love everything about V's family, and I love how you transitioned them from villains to such lovable characters so smoothly! I also love this whole arc with Evan and Garrett!! I just love the two of them together! I feel like we are getting so so close to Valerie telling Evan that she really is in love with Evan and kicking that wimp Marvin to the side!! WOOHOO! go Valerie go! :D |
Title: Chapter 175
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww yay garret did good, I would probably have a heart attack if I had to do that. And its sad that her dad asked to be taken off that list :( not that I was shocked about that its just sad. I wonder what dear Marvin thinks of all this... maybe he'll do us all a favor and go away |
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