| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 05:50 PDT
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Still here with you! I like what you're doing with V's brother. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww *hug* thank you so much :) I'm glad our comment's made you happy. I absolutly love finding your chapter's in my inbox! I'm sure Garrett will be nervous, but I have no doubt he's gonna rock that stage. Evan'll take good care of him for V ;) |
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 20:56 PDT
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Fantastic chapter I love the v plays mother hen to garret an even Evan a littbbit. Ani was really hoping Garrett would get to play with zel roka. I really hope he does well guess well see soon. Keep up the great work! !! |
Reviewed By: wolfcon89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 20:41 PDT
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Sorry about the lack of review on the last chapter. The slide seemed very not safe and totally awesome. I knew Garret was going to end up on stage sooner than later and I like that Valerie gets to see it. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 16:03 PDT
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How sweet. By stopping Garrett from any more playing on the "slide", shows that Evan understand Valerie's concern about her younger brother's safety. (: Thanks for the update. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2011 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... no whats up with that reaction.... |
Title: Snowball Boobs
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2011 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I've got to stop reading or else I will not make as many comments and that is not fair to you. I've been busy for a while and let the chapters pile up, but here I am! Let me say the snowball boobs were hilarious, and i was shocked when v actually took a bite out of one.. usually she steers clear of things that have touched evans body in a twisted way! lol. And I totally agree with V, those things are NASTY... Next, I'm really happy with V's parents. They seem so normal, and nice, and I'm so glad they accepted her like that. How wonderful that must be...anyway, on to read more. Thanks for the work. :) -Chaos- |
Reviewed By: DNSora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2011 23:27 PDT
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I'm sorry you haven't been feeling well, here's to good health. Another great few chapters. I can't believe what a shine Evan has taken to Garret, that's just great. I want to see what happens with the transplant list too. Anyway keep writing it's wonderful! |
Title: uramazing
Reviewed By: roxychik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2011 09:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I've been reading ur purity stories for awhile now. I finally signed up here just so I can tell you how epic and amazing I think all of ur stories are and as long as you keep writing ill keep reading. In my opinion # 4 has been the best one so far though I do like this one a lot 2. Anyway just wanted to tell u that. Thanks |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2011 07:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I hope you feel better!! I was a little surprised that Valerie was sorta chill about it. But not really. I'm sure she'll chew out Evan when they get home. I guess Valerie's family is teeming with talent huh? I love that Garrett is doing the song. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2011 01:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Garrett doing that song sit's really well with me to be honest ;) I hope you feel better soon hun! |
Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2011 00:27 PDT
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Oh the shit is about to hit the fan. I can't wait. I hope Valerie gives Evan a good punch or two. Then they have make-up sex, YEAH! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 21:40 PDT
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Did I mention that I hate Marvin? Lol. His very existence makes my blood boil (not in a good way). Haha...of course, somebody's gotta be the one in the middle. Thanks for the update.XD |
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! Marvin Pinkle pisses me off so much! Grr! I wish he'd just get out of the picture already! I'm excited about the next chapter, Garret losing his virginity... And his very first time he joins the mile high club. Lol! Nice chapter btw! |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2011 12:08 PDT
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Oh man. Valerie almost admitted the truth to herself. Well, it had to come sometime right? I hope that Valerie won't kill Evan when she finds out about Garett. I'd be pissed if it were my brother. Anyway, when Marvin started talking about how Evan is never at home I was so MadHe's a total hypocrite!! How often is he with Valerie?! ARgh, I've always been neutral about Marvin, but now, I think he needs to wake up and smell the roses, if he's going to evaluate anyone's life :/ GREAT CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!! |
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