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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 11:48 PDT
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Damn, I'm liking V's dad and mom more and more. It just shows that V comes from good stock, small town, southern comfort solid good genes. Garret is in good hands with Evan. He can steer him through the perils of the music industry and provide him with time to finish school, get experience, and be ready to take off when the time comes. Between V's saavy, and Evan's experience, Garrets got it made. I live for the days when I see that you have updated Sueric, When I see Purity 9, I get get a cold drink, some carrots to snack on, close the door, sit down, start reading, and fall in love just a little further. I love these stories and this family. I've been reading Purity as you revise, the additions had left me highly entertained. You make my world a better place. | Reviewed By: michellishelli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 07:04 PDT
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Loved it! Sucks about V's dad, but I do admire him for making that tough decision. I'm really excited to see what happens to Garrett - I have a feeling all of V's worries are going to prove prophetic, and he'll get into some sort of trouble. I'm amazed and awed that you can still keep the sexual tension going between V and Evan after all these chapters without having them give in to their desires. I can't wait to see what finally clues V in to the fact that she's head over heels for him. Maybe it will coincide with when she finally admits what she was doing in Evan's bushes? Anyway, love the story, love your writing, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! | Title: SO AMAZING!!! XD
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 06:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter amde me laugh, cry, and smile. AAwwww. I, just love Evan, when he was so sad, and Valerie, I'm so disappointed. But, I'm really glad that Garret didn't freeze. That wouldn't have been good. I did like the banter as well. It was sweet and funny, just like Valerie and Evan's realtionship. I shan't be ble to wait for them to get together!! | Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 04:38 PDT
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awesome awesome awesome. Im so glad Garret did great and didnt freeze. I really like that Evan is kinda being a rock mentor to him. I hope the kid goes far in the buisness. Sad about Jack but he has his pride and that keeps him strong. Cant wait for the next chapter, you rock!!!! | Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 04:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta admit that one had me in tears. So heartbreaking when V's only just found them again. Her father really is a good man. | Reviewed By: Saphirea83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 03:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Garett would do great!!! So cool for him to get a break like this! And I think Evan is the Perfect role model for him. V will understand why, when Evan finally tells him who he really is and she just gives up old mardwin for good :p hehe. Cant wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the update :) Get better soon! | Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2011 10:59 PDT
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Sorry I havent written here in a while. I just barely caught up myself. WHOOO!!! V left Marvin to head to Evan (and Garrett) YAY! I'm definitely feeling this new family vibe thing. Plus now Evan's thinking of having Garrett sub in? SWEET. Kids dream come true huh? I really liked these past two chapters. I'm glad to hear that you're on antibiotics now. I hope you get better soon! I just got over swimmer's ear and being sick in the summer is terrible. So do rest up and take care. Keep on doing your thing Sue. Great Work like always. I'm proud to be your fan because you never disappoint no matter how you feel. Thank you for that. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Hopefully Garrett does good on stage. I have a feeling that he will. -MSMND. | Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Saphirea83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2011 02:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my very first review on this site, hehe. And I thought it appropriate that it be on my fav fanfiction stories/author! You do AMAZING work Sue, I have been reading your stories for a long time now, and it's taken me a bit to catch up on the purity series and now, I finally have! I just want to thank you so much for all the hard work you put into these stories! And I can't WAIT for more! I was sad when I suddenly found myself at the end of the page with no "go to next chapter" link hehe. But still I still look forward to all that is to come from you. =) I can't wait to see how you finally bring Evan and Valerie together! hehe I hope its a big huge scene between Marvin/Even/Valerie lol. A part of me wants it to be now lol, but then, I dont want the story to end yet so i hope its not for awhile!. lol I know you have big plans in store for these characters and I'm looking forward to going through that journey with them!!! Keep up the AWESOME work Sue! I will def be posting more comments on these chapters as they come now that I have finally caught up :P hehe. This chapter was great btw, with V freaking out over her brother. rofl I'm loving the relationship between Garett and Evan! I think Garett will be great on stage! (at least I hope so) hehe. Looking forward to the next chapter! :) | Title: :]
Reviewed By: anime_game_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2011 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ijust wanted youto know how awsome i think you are i dont revew mutch but i read every chapter you releace. i usely read thisfic on phone and i cant leave reveiwes with it :] | Reviewed By: michellishelli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2011 04:47 PDT
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I just wanted to let you know how very much I enjoy reading this fanfiction. Every day I boot up my computer and check the site, hoping I'll see a new chapter uploaded! I've read all the Purity stories, and I have to say that this one is my favorite by far - something about the character of Evan just intrigues me. Probably the fascinating mixture of bad boy rock star and sweet mama's boy. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story, and as always, I eagerly await the next update! :) | Reviewed By: Glacier_Tako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! I laughed at Valerie's reaction to everything Garrett did, I think that you gave her the right reactions for her situation (finding her family after a long time and not wanting to loose them). I can't wait to read the next chapter and think that Garrett will do just fine, if V supports him. Also kudos for writing 175 chapters! | Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I had a lot of catching up to do! For some reason, I stopped getting emails on the updates to this story. I decided to check it myself, and had about 15 chapters to read. I wish I'd checked it sooner. I love where the story is going, and I absolutely adore Evan, maybe even more than Kichiro.... eh, that's a tough one. So now I have the story on my bookmarks bar, and I'll keep checking for more. I can never decide on my favorite Purity story, but this is definitely in my top 3! Also, I'm assuming you get a lots of reviews begging for sex scenes (I did, back when I used to write), so I want to go the opposite route and thank you for drawing it out. I like the tension building, and you've written the perfect amount of 'almost' between the couple. Can't wait to see what happens next. | Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 11:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Go Garret!! You show everyone what's what! I'm sorry for the lack of reviews, I was recently writning my own story and got caught up. My apaologies. I'm not a very good fangirl. CAn't wait for the awesomeness about to come. | Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 09:19 PDT
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Hey sue long time no review. I apologize. I graduated from navy basic training June 15th. Military life has been hectic so far. I had some catching up to do. I'm up to date now and I'm so happy to be reading ur stories again I really missed them. I think Valerie's family is funny. I can't wait to read how this progresses. Evans story is gonna be more chapters than purity 4 lol. It's all good. Don't get discouraged by anything. Always write. I'll always read. | Title: Chapter 174
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 07:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!! I figured V would show up when.she realized where her brother was. I was kinda hoping he would play at a concert but I wasnt getting my hopes up cause well, his sister is V lol. I hope he doesn't choke! Can't wait for the next chapter :) | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] |
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