| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: Happier Today
Reviewed By: twc_airen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2012 11:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excited to see a new chapter. I've missed you and I can't wait to see how V grows as a person. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 05:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She may be all you need ut I still hope she changes her mind, she and Evan would make adoring parents :) |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 05:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love there little banters, they don't see just how well they fit together :) |
Reviewed By: michellishelli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 20:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Love the new chapters! I can't wait to see the painting of them kissing - ooh, I bet that will be the turning point when V realizes they're meant to be :D Awesome writing as usual, you can't imagine how wide my smile gets when I see that this story has updated |
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 17:01 PDT
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Someone who writes as amazingly as you do should never be depressed for too long. I love your story. It brightens my day when you update. Thank you for bringing joy to my small life, even when you probably aren't even feeling up to it. I appreciate you and your creativity. I await your next chapter with a smile of anticipation. 182 chapters and not for one second have I been disappointed other than craving more. Thank you for the entire Purity series! |
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2012 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I know I haven't reviewed in a long long long time but I'm still here faithfully reading and anticipating your wonderful stories lol. It seems Evan is more like Gin then he realizes. And in this case it seems like vice versa situation with Evan wanting kids and V not so much. I can't wait to see how your genius makes it all come together maybe one day V will look up and Evan will have talked her into moving in with him and marrying him all without her knowledge lol. Great chap hope the reviews cheer you up a bit :) |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2012 09:23 PDT
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Have I told you how much I love this? I'm serious I saw this and about died with happiness. Though, now I wonder what in the world they're going to do now when they get to Madrid. And I ca't see Valerie and Evan not having kids. The concept seems so wrong. But of course, you always manage to surprise me in your stories, so maybe I'll just have to hold on. |
Reviewed By: ima9e [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 22:02 PDT
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omgggggg i have been following you purity series for years now, and you totally make my day when you post a new chapter! i don't comment much, but i just want you to know that there are people who supports you and your writing! =) and i can't wait to see Evan's and V's ending! |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 21:28 PDT
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OK, it's official...I'm gonna leave the house all day, every day, until the last chapter it posted. I am looking for a place to move into, and had interviews all day! I come back, and there's brand new pages of Evan and Val totally awesomeness to enjoy. Sleeping under an overpass just outside Madrid, sharing sleepy affectionate conversation with each other, I can't wait till she realizes he's serious. I think the shock is going to put her into orbit. I can't wait. Paris may be the city of light and made for lovers, but noone beats the spanish for red hot romance. Maybe she will figure it out there...maybe...WELL, I CAN HOPE, CAN'T I...LOL |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 21:08 PDT
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Too bad their camping trip is nearly at an end. But I guess everyone has to go back to reality some time. At least Valerie's not actively protesting when Evan exaggerates their relationship anymore. Eventually she'll understand. The mental image of Zel Roka sleeping under a bridge is both sad and hilarious, but the image of Evan Zielig sleeping under a bridge... I can see him doing that for fun and just for the fact that he can. Its a good thing that its Evan there then, right? Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2012 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
And YET SOMEHOW I always manage to forget that if I hit enter on this it won't upload the rest of the comment lol! I was just gushing how much I love Evan and Val and how Evan must be some kind of musical/language savant! Well done Cain/Gin (and you of course haha)! Hope you are feeling 100% better Sueric, looking forward to the next chapter as always. |
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2012 12:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My Sueric senses were tingling earlier today! And sure enough I check my email and you've updated! |
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2012 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I was so excited when I saw the email saying you updated, that really made my day. And Evan and V having a kiss that didn't end in a disaster for once! Ugh I can't wait for her to finally admit that she loves Evan and gets rid of Marvin. Anyways can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 22:43 PDT
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I'm gonna cry, just bawl my eyes out. I've been looking on MM EVERY DAY since your last update back in Feb, and the ONE DAY I'm gone from the house ALL DAY...you update, LOL...I'm cursed, cursed I tell you. Ah, that was a lovely chapter, adding a pair of newly weds to the campsite for a night was a wonderful touch, and I can't wait till one of your AMAZING Beta's turns one of the pictures into a portrait that we all can look at. I LOVE romance, and believe that romantics need to be protected and cherished, there just aren't enough of them. Hopefully Val will become one of them...with a practical side! WHAT...She IS a lawyer, remember? LOL Good to see you Sue |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 15:24 PDT
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Oh, Evan. He's really a pretty cool guy when you think about it. I love how everyone interacts. It's just great. I'm so happy you updated. I about squealed like a child when I saw it. Looking forward to the next! |
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