| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 23:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you'd think by then they would be able to grow your own organs... |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 17:18 PDT
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Aww...Even though Evan has a big head (Lol) he is so sweet. Thanks for updating. (: |
Reviewed By: ecqsmail [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2011 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I've spent the last several weeks reading all of the purity series in order and have just now caught up. These stories are absolutley amazing! The characters and story lines are so in depth you really feel for the characters and their joys and struggles. I have laughed my ass off and cried so hard that I couldn't see the pages anymore. I'm so glad that you haven't let the idiots who can't understand that reading is a joy and totally optional get you down to the point that you've stopped writing. Honestly that is my only pet peeve with alot of the stories I've read, some writers will get you hooked and then drop off the face of the planet, either upset with idiots who write unconstructive critisms or just stop. Anyway I just wanted to say keep up the awesome writing, I can't wait for the next chapter, and the one after that, and the one after that, etc and so on. |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 19:19 PDT
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I've liked the last two chapters. Sorry this took forever, got my first job and work has been CRAZY. haha But at least I get to relax with these 2 chapters! My Evan's such a sweetie! Love that boy to DEATH. Loving the character development between Bas and Evan, something we dont really get to see much of. Well, great work as always! Keep it up! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 13:46 PDT
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“The more she tried, the more she cried…It’s you an’ me, V, let’s go to par-ee…” Yay for the beginning of bad lyrics! I bet Evan could come up with something that’d work with those lines. Valerie’ll go, especially since Evan got her at ‘Paris.’ Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: wolfcon89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice brother moment. I can't help but to feel anxious for when Cain and Evan finally have their moment. Side note: Kagome's pregnancy chapter was in Purity Oneshots story 2. I don't think its been mentioned since |
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 02:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Splendid as usual! I enjoyed the one in one with Bas and Evan.... Not quite warm and fuzzy (lol) bur brotherly all the same. :-) If you dont mind me asking, which one shot does Takara appear in? I could have sworn I was up to date wth all of your fics... But I guess not. Anyways, awesome job! Update when you can. |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2011 01:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So nice to see Evan and Bas just talking together - they do get on really ;) I'm certain Evan's gonna persuade V though :) |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 01:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We finally find out what Cain did to upset Gin and we have someone form every generation yay! |
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 01:14 PDT
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Still loving every bit! But I am confused....where did Takara come from? Did she appear in one of the one shots? |
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Reviewed By: iheartinuyasha426 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how I've missed that volatile hanyou...lol |
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2011 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely had to read this chapter before I went to bed and I'm so very happy I did! As if seeing the Zelig brothers teaming up wasn't enough, it gets even better! We get to see InuYasha, Kagome, and Takara too! I must say, Bailey was adorable. Oh, and it's great to finally know what happened to have Gin so upset at Cain way back when. I think it's great that Valerie got to meet "Uncle" InuYasha and "Aunt" Kagome. It's enough for Valerie, having to wrap her mind around Evan's youthful looking parents. I think it'd be mind-boggling for her to know those two are actually his grandparents! Epic. This chapter was wonderful, as always. Thank you! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2011 19:37 PDT
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Somehow you always seem to amaze me with your chapters. Haha. Please update when you can. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2011 07:45 PDT
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i knew it!!! i'm so excited that another zelig baby is on the way!! this chapter was so adorable and i had a smile on my face the whole chapter. i can't wait to see what happens after v and evan head home and i hope the next update is soon! |
Title: OMYGOSHAAAHHHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 07:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHH They're having another baby!!! YAY!!!! I'm so happy!! I'm floating on cloud nine right now!!. I love the family interactions!! :D God, forbid the baby's like Evan....or worse. XD AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! So happy!!! Good job, you've just made my day!!!!!! |
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