| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2011 08:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the only author to make me laugh and cry in one chapter! I really love the way this story is going! As always, much thanks for the update, Sue!! =D |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2011 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan made me chuckle at his antic's with Garrett. But I have to say I felt bot of an ache at the end there :) |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2011 08:04 PDT
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AHH!! I knew that Garrett would be the one to figure it out. He was just too observant. haha I'm glad they know now. Now I'm wondering how he's going to tell V that he broke the news... if she didn't already hear. As always I'm excited for the next chapter! I like the family. haha Send your son my regards and congrats on graduating. I was class of 2010 and it was an experience that was second to none. I hope he has a blast with all the new experiences that will come from moving forward from this milestone. You're an awesome writer (and mom)! Keep up the good work!! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2011 04:51 PDT
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holy hell! i can't believe i'm this late for a chapter!! usually i'm one of the first people to view the new chapter lol this chapter was so hilarious and heartwarming. i was laughing the whole way through! i'm so glad v and her family (except for kaci at the moment) are reconnecting and i can just feel the happiness flowing out of each character. you really do an outstanding job of bringing your characters to life. i cannot wait for the next chapter!! i'm so excited to see what comes next and i can't wait to see how evan and v's relationship progresses after the visit with her parents. keep up the fantastic work and congratulations on your son graduating! |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2011 19:49 PDT
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Smart boy there, then again, Evan didn't exactly go out of his way to hide some of his more prominent features. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 14:02 PDT
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Such a great chapter! "Oh, dig that hole, Roka. Make sure it's at least six-feet-deep." Evan's youkai tripped me out! The one who's going to be digging a hole is Valerie, once she finds out what Evan's been up to! I knew Garret was on to him! He was really smart about the way he caught him, too. I thought maybe he was going to tempt Evan into playing that guitar and singing, thus giving himself away. The moment Evan rolled up that sleeve, though, I realized the tattoos would be the giveaway! I love the way Garret reacted. It makes me think about the absolute bewilderment that would crash through me if I realized my favorite rockstar was in my living room. I'm telling you, I would lose my composure. This was an extremely entertaining chapter! Thanks for making my day. And I wish your son the best with his graduation! |
Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHHHHHH!!!! I'm sooooo surprised!!! Ugh, her brother was actually pretty slick!!! I love it when Evan's oukai is just all "Don't llok now. "He's doing it again." AAAHHHH I love his youkai. It's so funny!!! Or is that he? Anyway, love it!!! I'm so excited for you!! You're son's graduation!! That must be a wondeful experience!!!AAHHHH you go girl, get in the zone! Get it girl!! Ahhh, I'm so happy right now!!! YYYOUUUUUU RRRROOOOOOCK!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You lie like a rug..." I love that line and he does, he so does and yet I can't help thinking he will get her...one day :) Congrat's on your son's graduation! |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 21:03 PDT
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Oh, yeah, I just about died when Evan's youkai spouted, "What do you mean, your not Zel Roka!" |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 21:01 PDT
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You updated, I'm so excited you updated...Well, Evan is well and truly caught, by the brother and father no less, that he's Zel AND that The V tour is about their Valerie. Talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place, then spouting off that he's going to marry her...don't know if a shallow grave will handle the coming annialation. Peridocally Even will do something, and I'll have a mental picture of him jogging in front of Val at 5:00 am wearing luridly colored jogging shorts with a big...Yellow...Yield sign on them and dissolve into giggles. I want a lifetime supply of what ever it is you are drinking that is giving you all the ideas for this story. I think I miss Dieter just as much as Even, bless his heart. Congrats on your boy's graduation, brings back memories of going to my son's. The perfect type of Mom's warm fuzzys. |
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 18:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was finally able to catch up on this story! And it's been forever since I've been able to review. I couldn't wait to see Valerie face her parents. It's the same feeling I had when I first read Defiance all those years ago and waited for Sierra to meet her birth parents. Anticipation! I think I was just as worried as Valerie about how her parents would react to her. I think you've done a wonderful job with the situation so far. I understand Valerie's feelings and her point of view in all of this, but I also understand her parents' side now that I know what went on with them. I'm happy Valerie finally got answers to questions she's had for so long. Also, I'm definitely interested in figuring out Kaci Lea and understanding why she reacted to Valerie the way she did. It seems to me as if her Zel Roka fan brother may be suspicious of Evan? I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job. By the way, I noticed that you used one of Tokio Hotel's songs in a previous chapter. My favorite author writing an awesome story and using a song from my favorite band? Priceless. |
Reviewed By: atlantine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your purity stories (among your others) since you were writing Purity 2, but only just created a mediaminer account so I could write reviews to your fanfictions. Your stories are amazing! I really admire how you have kept up writing the series for your fans all of these years. I have to add that while I enjoyed the first Purity immensely, your writing just seems to be getting better and better, because I enjoy each story more than the last. Evan and Valerie are wonderful characters, and it is amazing to look back and see all of the changes and allowances they have made for one another since the beginning of P9. I can't wait to see how it turns out for them, and I greatly look forward to your future Purities and writings! Thank you so much for gifting your readers with the opportunity to enjoy your work! |
Title: From me to You
Reviewed By: SoulofSixes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 06:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is no doubt amazing. You are always very talented at coming up with an intriguing story line. I kind of miss the 'go for it' Evan though.... he is settling for her friend. I can't wait for the storyline when it gets back to the Orville (Marvin) and Valerie don't belong together plot. I want to see how Evan handles it when its been enough. CAN'T WAIT!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2011 05:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, that was so sweet! Valerie finally had answers to her questions. She must be feeling very light right about now. Poor Evan. He got ditched, lol |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2011 09:39 PDT
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Happy to know that V finally have her answers. Lol. Evan was left out. |
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